Nova vs. Slaughterface

Nova vs. Slaughterface

Nova vs. Slaughterface

by fowlie

48.6%
799 points
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Crit level: No preference


by Kuro

51.4%
844 points
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Crit level: No preference




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rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 28   Posted: Jan 2 2010, 12:03 AM
Damn, fowlie.  NOT expecting that at ALL.  XD

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 27   Posted: Dec 31 2009, 01:56 PM
No, I didn't get them ; ;

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 26   Posted: Dec 31 2009, 12:50 PM
thanks dave. given corny's age, the dwarf thing was a little intentional though i probably did play it up a little too much. sorry corny haha other places i guess i did play it a little too fast & loose. thanks for pointing it out. glad you enjoyed the rest of it though!

mike, paperwork might have been a good idea but the walls were intentionally left bare to reinforce the monotonous tone i was going for. as a matter of fact, windows were taken out of the original sketch as i figured they would provide too much stimulation to the room, which i viewed as horribly, painstakingly plain. that's why, the people inhabiting & that atmospheric haze were played up much more than the room itself. as for inks, i've got other works down the line that incorporate them more, but for slaughterface comics, i really prefer the more organic sketchiness of a pencil line. it gives it a rustic feel that fits with his backwoods demeanor. thanks though.

fowlie, i tried emailing you those pages again. any luck this time? everyone else, the pages i didn't have when i uploaded will be added as a separate bb once the voting's all done.

michaelharris
Artist
352 comments
# 25   Posted: Dec 30 2009, 11:08 AM
Nova, I thought it was good, I don't really have any complaints, I like the short and sweet vignette story.

Kuro, I really wanted to see this inked, I thought the backgrounds could have used more work to feel less generic, especially with the DPRI building which looked a bit vague and the interior scene. If you have a scene of a large primarily empty room, it's up to the background to sell that scene. When I go to the DMV or social security office there are lots of signs telling me how to fill out forms, there's signs telling me what not to do, there are windows on the walls, there aren't just bare walls.

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 24   Posted: Dec 27 2009, 11:36 PM
Well my feeling towards Fowlie's comic is that it's a small vignette in comparison to the other stories.  Kinda in the same way the comic vs Koshi was.  And I have to admit I like it when there are lulls and these sort of episodic stories from time to time that don't always have to have a character revealing moment.  Plus Fowlie's color choices here are to be noted, they're pretty good and pleasing to the eye.  

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 23   Posted: Dec 27 2009, 09:29 PM
Kuro: your comic is hotsexy enough to take home to my momma and tell her Im marrying this bitch. I loved it...and I don't normally love your comics...but I was actually goin all gaga over this shit. Way to set the bar for everyone Void for the year...even though I guess technically it's still 2009...so maybe I take that shit back...anyway excellent line work strong colour, good sense of pace, wide format wins, cameos supreme...did I mention the colour was super dope...Parts I didn't think worked so well. Your anatomy in some panels was..weird...to say the least. Page 2 panel 2 Novas got odd proportion the same for Page 5 all of the panels with corny in the chair she's either got dwarf proportions (giant head tiny body) or you bullocksed up the perspective on the viewer perceiving from above. and being nit picky some of your fills were a bit slippy going outside of the lines and what not  (page 6 panel 1 sleeve...word) lettering was decent some of the earlier pages had a bit too tight kerning anywho my vote goes to you on this one...I forgave the minimal use of Slaughterface because he's your character and I think it's much harder to capture the intricacies of another persons creation...mucho kudos

 Fowlie - I'm gonna echo what Kozis said. I generally feel entertained by your writing but this one fell short. the joke or interaction or whatever it was felt stale and unimaginative...predictable. Perhaps that was the point nova is a predictable cad...This just seemed like it was missing your predilection for P'ZAZZ!! The colour in this was pretty dope, and your characterizations are always top notch each character feels unique and you can really emote with them considering the elasticity of your expressions. Your sense of design is great not just from panel to panel but each panel feels very...considered...especially the beer pour sequence. Overall I thought the art in this was some of your best but the story wasn't very well executed.

+Kuro...page4 HILARIOUS...wheres dat penis...THERE IT IS!!!

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 22   Posted: Dec 27 2009, 01:55 AM
Thanks guys.
While it's not the fully, intended story, I'm glad it didn't disappoint you as much, Fowlie. I was worried! And yes, the continuation will follow suit shortly, once I get back to my place & in the swing of things. Sface dribbling Nova's head off the bar is my new favorite thing with him, just narrowly beating out the crowd chanting his name at rollerball haha

Also, thanks for the thumbs! I'm guessing it was Angie, for the fact that it's usually her & the choice of thumbnail #5.

Will- I KNOW, RIGHT?! Seriously though, it was either her or Idi Amin.

Kozi- The pages I didn't have with me were more of Sface & Nova interacting. For whatever reason (maybe since I make him quiet all the time), the story ideas I end up going with a lot of the time kind of make him a supporting character to who ever I'm battling against. Nova's fun so obviously it happened here too. When I get to post the intended ending (not that there was really all that much left of this story) you'll get to see more Sface.

Kumaru- Thanks very much. Glad you liked pg3, it was a bitch & a half to draw!

Kumaru
Artist
87 comments
# 21   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 05:39 PM
hahaha both of these were a good read!
fowlie - your pacing and dialogue pulled me in. also i like the sound effects on pg 7.
kuro - love your sensitive linework and sense of environment (PAGEEE 3), hope to see the rest soon!

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1080 comments
# 20   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 05:39 PM
I really dug all the cameos and mentions in both comics. whenever battles do that it makes the world of Void seem tangible or connected somehow. :) onto critique..

FOWLIE- Wow. I think this is the first time one of Fowlies comics didn't really grab me story-wise. I really don't know what it was because he's such a charmer in a convoluted way with women as well as Dr. Fabulous, but in this comic it seemed forced and not in the usual way we know and love. I did enjoy your environments and backgrounds- especially the panels where Nova is heading into the Crow bar. That change over from establishing shot to door entering was boss.

KURO- Welcome back! nice little comic to make your re-debut. I wish there was more of Slaughterface in it though. Again, another lovely display of backgrounds- your idea of hell made me laugh- not to mention Corny as a minion. Great stuff.

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 19   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 11:02 AM
Ahahahaha I am happy, these comics were both very entertaining.  And I always knew Corny was a minion of Hell.  Something more in depth after I stop laughing.

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 18   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 11:01 AM
Ok it got good again.  

HUX that is great, please post the rest of this ASAP. ; 3;

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 17   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 07:16 AM
this is the worst boxing day evers... ; ;

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 16   Posted: Dec 26 2009, 04:58 AM
uploaded...

 but with the holiday i got stranded with the weather at my mom's away from my pages & my own scanner. truncated ending with the real ending coming very soon. sorry fowlie

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 15   Posted: Dec 25 2009, 05:29 PM
Uploaded

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 14   Posted: Dec 18 2009, 04:08 PM
gasp!

what will come of this...

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 13   Posted: Dec 8 2009, 12:28 AM
Wh---what...?

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 7 2009, 06:39 PM
On the third day of Christmas my true love gave to meeee!
3 sweaty hours
2 sexy beasts
and a bare-bottomed Nova on his kneeeees :D

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 7 2009, 09:45 AM
woooooooooooooooooooooot!

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 5 2009, 08:54 PM
Le gasp!! wb hux

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 5 2009, 08:41 AM
This should be interesting 8O

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 5 2009, 07:52 AM
^____________^

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 5 2009, 07:32 AM
So many christmas story ideas... so little time...

Bittermause
Artist
242 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:25 PM
Yaaaay Kuro is back!
GODSPEED LITTLE VIKING!! \m/_

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:14 PM
If you guys are okay with not having thumbnails I can *probably* put this up on Christmas if you guys really want it to be up for Christmas haha I just can't do thumbnails when I'm out of town.

DrasticFantastic
Artist
165 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:13 PM
Merry Christmas Assholes.

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:13 PM
DO NOT OPEN UNTIL CHRISTMASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:13 PM
Gay furry sex.  Amping it up a notch.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 4 2009, 09:10 PM
oooooooooohhoooboy

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jan 2nd, 2010
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Page Views: 2080
Winner: Kuro
 

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