Vs Soldat Veritas / Xia

Vs Soldat Veritas — Xia

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michaelharris
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352 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 04:59 PM
I like your characterization, I wish you would find a way to better incorporate backgrounds into your style. All the buildings are anonymous boxes and the fences were see through. I think better backgrounds would greatly improve your work.

of course you didn't sing "we didn't start the fire," it was "burning down the house" by Talking Heads.

Cracking Skulls
Artist
351 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 12:54 PM
Thanks for your concern, guys. Everybody here is safe and well. The house, however, is pretty much burnt pretty bad. We'll get our house back when it's tored down and rebuild, which will be around late spring of next year. I promise I'll fnish this comic someday

@David: XD hahahaha, oh you.

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 08:50 AM
your work reminds me a lot of Brandon Graham...which I would say is a good thing....I enjoyed this beginning...hope to see the end...

Did you sing we didn't start the fire when your house was burning?

"We didn't start the fire
It was always burning
Since the world's been turning
We didn't start the fire
No we didn't light it
But we tried to fight it "

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 08:04 AM
I really like your style. You would've got my vote.
And I hope everything is okay.

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 07:28 AM
This is a strong start, and hopefully we'll be able to see the rest of it someday.  It's quite the cliffhanger you've left us with.

I truly hope your family and home are okay.

anthonybaiz
Artist
138 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 06:19 AM
OMG, I'm so sorry to hear that, i hope everything is alright.

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 05:26 AM
Holy shit, hope your house is uh.. okay. Thank you for submitting something.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 2 2009, 09:42 PM
Sweet.

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