KID ATOM vs. Leviathorah

KID ATOM vs. Leviathorah

KID ATOM vs. Leviathorah

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515 points
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by neens

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Darius Corry
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# 23   Posted: Dec 7 2009, 10:10 AM
Dark Knight- My second fav of the sentai era, good stuff considering the rough style.

Fence-It seems like a quick story well done. Not much depth but well paced.

Phill
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895 comments
# 22   Posted: Dec 7 2009, 09:55 AM
Nice, wish both of you spent a bit more time on these comics.


Knight: Sweet comic, loved the way you showed how he learned of his own demise, however I hate the "to be continued" there, you can still do beyond battles with this guy, but I wish you would of finished or left out the "To be continued" all together as the story seemed complete right there. The art was very nice dude, although the sound effects seemed very sloppy compared to your inks. Speaking of the inks, you could of really put in some more backgrounds and more solid blacks into this, I know you can really kick ass when you've got enough time.



Fence: Very cute and lovable as Pi said, however despite your simple style, the markers looked very very rushed. The story here I liked and worked very well with the characters here, I loved how sad and betrayed Leviathora looked at the end.



Sort of a hard choice to make here, I loved both comics here, I liked Fence's story but didn't like your markers. I loved Knight's style but I know he can do much better. Even vote from me.

(Pi)
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# 21   Posted: Dec 2 2009, 12:47 PM
TODK, nice inks, nice action. page 3's opener was gorgeous. i think the hand lettered sfx were a little too bold, they overshadowed the actual art too much. it also feels like everyone is suffering from super-short-leg-syndrome, especially the bottom of page 5 and 6. I'd like to see more of the super bold black/white stuff you did with david during your first sdt, maybe you can work it into your current style? looking forward to your next fight.

fence, super cute and lovable as always. i love how even though he's super stylized, we can instantly tell who kid atom is. i should say, though, as much as i love your work, i feel like this isn't much to show for 4 weeks time. i'm sure there was something that came up, and there was the whole zuda entry (which was also awesome), but i feel like i've seen you do this kind of work in an hour or two. please go for broke on your next comic, i miss seeing you do your absolute best.

Jetaime
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# 20   Posted: Dec 1 2009, 11:30 AM
TODK: the megaton punch should've finished kigan rider in round 3 so they could then seek out and fight ronin repulsa in round 4. sadly, i took the easy way out and left the burden of resolving the story to someone else (you).

fence: d'awww ... i think the addition of some simple flat colors would do this comic a great service.

Mister Kent
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# 19   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 10:13 PM
The ODK - Kid Atom is a badarse, and I enjoyed the cameos by the dead sentai at the end. I recognized 'em all immediately.

Ms. Fence - That was really creative and cute - I was entertained. A few more areas of solid black would look really nice with your loose lines.

Anthonybaiz
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138 comments
# 18   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 08:54 PM
Wow dude. That was some tight action. I really like how cocky your character, One Dark Knight.

William_Duel
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924 comments
# 17   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 08:42 PM
month of the dead means dead characters can initiate and partake in battles during that month.  So unless he wins the speed resurrection tourney you'll have to wait till next motd.

The One Dark Knight
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128 comments
# 16   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 08:42 PM
hoping to try and bring him back if there's a speed resurrection tourney ever

Fox24
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# 15   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 08:35 PM
dope stuff dark knight. Does this mean Kid is coming back? Cause I'm confused by the whole month of the dead thing. People keep coming back from the dead and staying alive so I wanted to know if we will see atom in the future.

The One Dark Knight
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128 comments
# 14   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 07:45 PM
Yes mine is definitely not 4 weeks of comic either, but looking forward to reading yours :D

neens
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259 comments
# 13   Posted: Nov 30 2009, 06:11 PM
my bad on the uploading. um, I'm just gonna say mine isn't 4 weeks worth of comic, as I have been mega busy this month. I was hoping I'd find more time to work during the time but I didn't. also, I used a lighter 20% grey in my comic, but my scanner wanted none of that soo you can't see it at all really, bummer. also I haven't read any sentai comics, rats :c

The One Dark Knight
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# 12   Posted: Nov 29 2009, 05:42 PM
Uploaded!

I just realized this won't make a whole lot of sense to anyone who hasn't followed the sentai tournament earlier in the year. I highly recommend you read jetaime's last entry for this to make any sort of sense.

Somewhat satisfied with this comic, inking is better but could be even better, was still very rushed. Figured out a great way to get rid of pencil lines though!

Cheers <3

William_Duel
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924 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 22 2009, 02:09 PM
My name isn't Richard...

William_Duel
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924 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 22 2009, 07:00 AM
Damn!  this wait a bitch.

luniara
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528 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 3 2009, 05:36 AM
YES!

aribooboo
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282 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 2 2009, 05:30 PM
ohohooh can't wait! C:<

Jetaime
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100 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 2 2009, 01:38 PM
*-*

JoshuaEliGilley
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462 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 2 2009, 09:54 AM
YEAH, KICKASS!!!

Phill
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895 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 2 2009, 03:46 AM
Give this your all you two!

Kon
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194 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 1 2009, 01:21 PM
WOW

Aluísio C. Santos
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735 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 1 2009, 01:10 PM
UH OH

E.W. Schneider
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1055 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 1 2009, 12:59 PM
YES, THIS IS SO ATOMIC.

William_Duel
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924 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 1 2009, 12:58 PM
w00t.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Dec 7th, 2009
Votes Cast: 24
Page Views: 1441
Winner: The One Dark Knight
 

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