Sweet Itch vs. Penelope

Sweet Itch vs. Penelope

Sweet Itch vs. Penelope

42.7%
336 points
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by Amaloo

57.3%
450 points
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michaelharris
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352 comments
# 16   Posted: Nov 25 2009, 06:50 AM
I liked both of these. I wish Rofl could have finished but hey were enjoyable.

Rofl I think your text needs a little more breathing room and the paint texture seemed to overwhelm the art in places.

Amaloo, I really love your "cleaner" work on deviantart so much better. It maintains your craziness in the characters but it doesn't look "dirty" for lack of a better word. I don't really like the wrinkled paper texture or the muddy colors. Personally I would like cleaner panel borders and some gutters, it would be nice if you could get a happy medium between standard gutters and the thick black lines that you have. Something a bit more uniform but less haphazard. Maybe try a watercolor paper too... I love the characterization and the insanity tho.

Dimension
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# 15   Posted: Nov 22 2009, 02:42 PM
Amaloo: the expressions were great, they made me laugh a lot. I really wished you could have done more with the story though, it didn't really seem to have much of a conclusion. Not bad though, this was a pretty nice comic from you.

Jack
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225 comments
# 14   Posted: Nov 20 2009, 01:13 PM
I wanted pot references and tits.

amazingdavid
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441 comments
# 13   Posted: Nov 20 2009, 08:24 AM
meh...

Mister Kent
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# 12   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 10:59 PM
Aww! Our Pen is becoming a woman

RoflQu - Your colors were beautiful in your pages! When this is finished it'll look grand, I'm sure, as you're on a good start. I was hoping to see more this battle, but looks like I'll have to wait.

Amaloo - I always compliment you on your colors, but I think my favorite part of your comic this time was the sheer creativity and expression you put into every page - on each page there's something that held my interest so I didn't want to move on yet, and that's a real feat. From the Sweet Itch's ever-changing faces to the various erotic fantasieseally outdid yourself this time. Congrats

Amaloo
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# 11   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 10:49 PM
angieness:
Amaloo:
angieness: Since I had to manually upload Amaloo's pages, this battle will not go up until Toast is able to put it up since for some reason the pages won't show up when I manually upload them.
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But I haven't even uploaded pages,


and now I have.
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Rofl emailed them to me for some reason?
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Ohhh, right right. He just now told me so.

Angie
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1937 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 10:27 PM
Amaloo:
angieness: Since I had to manually upload Amaloo's pages, this battle will not go up until Toast is able to put it up since for some reason the pages won't show up when I manually upload them.
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But I haven't even uploaded pages,


and now I have.
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Rofl emailed them to me for some reason?

Amaloo
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# 9   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 10:10 PM
angieness: Since I had to manually upload Amaloo's pages, this battle will not go up until Toast is able to put it up since for some reason the pages won't show up when I manually upload them.
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But I haven't even uploaded pages,


and now I have.

Angie
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1937 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 09:31 PM
Since I had to manually upload Amaloo's pages, this battle will not go up until Toast is able to put it up since for some reason the pages won't show up when I manually upload them.

E.W. Schneider
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1057 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 08:49 PM
Hey, sorry ladies and gentlemen, gonna have to beyond battle this one in later on.

Puzzlething
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457 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 19 2009, 12:57 PM
420 BATTLE EVERYDAY!

DrasticFantastic
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165 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 4 2009, 12:24 AM
An ounce of sweet Mary Jane helps the medicine go down.

William_Duel
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924 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 31 2009, 08:25 PM
The Marijuana Virus will kill us all.

aribooboo
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282 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 22 2009, 05:50 PM
This month just keeps getting better and better C:

Bittermause
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242 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 22 2009, 12:39 PM
Best of luck to you Amaloo!
Eric,so  far you've been doing pretty good with your pacing so please keep at it!

E.W. Schneider
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1057 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 22 2009, 11:26 AM
TAKE 2, AND ACTION.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Nov 26th, 2009
Votes Cast: 21
Page Views: 1187
Winner: Amaloo
 

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