Jane Blonde vs. Baron Idiot
Critiques & Comments
# 11
Posted:
Oct 17 2009, 11:14 PM
Omigosh so close - congrats Hiemieeee!
# 10
Posted:
Oct 15 2009, 10:35 AM
Monsieur Kent: awesome art! I would however like to see a what it would look like with a teeny bit more variation in line width. Also, in my opinion, there is not enough consistency in font styles. I LAWLED at the Pieta reference.
Hiemie: I really like the flavor that you have created as well as the way you approached paneling and text! The only thing that I would suggest is cleaning up your lines a bit (but not too much as to ruin the style ^^)
Hiemie: I really like the flavor that you have created as well as the way you approached paneling and text! The only thing that I would suggest is cleaning up your lines a bit (but not too much as to ruin the style ^^)
# 9
Posted:
Oct 11 2009, 10:03 AM
Kent: I agree with Mrnoitaull the homage at the end was great, and I thought that it was funny when Jane dressed up as kirin. Overall I thought that your comic was very readable and enjoyable, the only point that I thought was lacking was that only Jane's hair was colored in, I think that you could have at least put a flat color in for the rest of their clothes.
Hiemie: I loved the pages, great atmosphere! On the first page I had a hard time taking in all of the detail though, the only advice that I would have for that would be to have something that you want the eye to focus on and make that item stand out. Also, I'm not sure if you did this on purpose or not but Jane's chest looks a bit strange, like you've placed her breasts a bit to high up. Otherwise I think that this was a great battle!
Hiemie: I loved the pages, great atmosphere! On the first page I had a hard time taking in all of the detail though, the only advice that I would have for that would be to have something that you want the eye to focus on and make that item stand out. Also, I'm not sure if you did this on purpose or not but Jane's chest looks a bit strange, like you've placed her breasts a bit to high up. Otherwise I think that this was a great battle!
# 8
Posted:
Oct 10 2009, 02:57 AM
Kent- LOVED the "Pieta" homage at the end. And I loved the Sentai era, so I will appreciate it everytime I see it.
Hiemie- You never let me down. You can never do enough pages.
Hiemie- You never let me down. You can never do enough pages.
# 7
Posted:
Oct 9 2009, 11:41 PM
T'was a pleasure drawing the Baron - what a great character, Hiemie
Thanks for letting me at him
Thanks for letting me at him
# 6
Posted:
Oct 8 2009, 09:09 PM
Done, I think.
# 5
Posted:
Oct 2 2009, 12:36 PM
Secret Agents and Superpowered villains! Classic!@
# 4
Posted:
Oct 2 2009, 11:31 AM
thine gravy hath been brought.
# 3
Posted:
Oct 2 2009, 09:50 AM
Damn skippy it is!
# 2
Posted:
Oct 2 2009, 09:36 AM
Sounds like a mission for Jane Blonde!
# 1
Posted:
Oct 2 2009, 09:03 AM
wooooow!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Oct 16th, 2009
Votes Cast:
31
Page Views:
2068
Winner:
Hiemie
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