Kent: I love the neat flow and the oddities sprinkled all around. I just love the style of coloring you use~. And the history of void was rather interesting, I agree with david, you should continue that sometime haha.

Seevah: quite messy and dissapointing. It was very hard to read and the lines barely touched eachother. I don't remember what page I got to, but I stopped in the middle because I had trouble understanding most of it. The only part I DID understand is that the girl was freaking out about Tofu. But thats it. I know you can do better.

Kent...bananas! The colours on this one had me all giddy...I'm a big fan of pastels (so much so when I was in University I had a prof tell me I wasn't allowed ot use a pastel palette for the rest of the year) You pulled it off well without it feeling like an easter egg. Actually the first page reminded me a lot of a worn out 50's or 60's comic...you know the wayt he colour bleeds through the whole page...loved it. I thought the story was quaint and I was kinda sad you didn't finish the origin of Void...because...that was really interesting...Honestly I think I'm going to totally steal that...or you should do a BB of it...or maybe we could do one together or maybe....whatever...anyway very very nice....

Seevah: I scored you higher for entertainment but as Im sure you already know the art was pathetic. which is kind of a bummer because the build up of this comic had me rolling... When I was a silken....meh...oh well

And also, Seevah: I especially love the last panel. Very cool fate for Jane!

Yes - it's been a long while since I've hand colored but I'm thinking of tryong the paints once more - at least to see if I still can And thanks everyone for comments on the story - I got the warm fuzzies I guess

Mu Gu Gai PAN!!!!!

Mister Kent, that was stunning, really nice style

Seevah, you can and have done better than that :/

Mister Kent, your story made me feel fluffy inside . And the colours nice nice. Very Pink! (Pink=good)
Do you lineart in the real world and then colour on the computerz?

Seevah, yours was a bit difficult for me to read probably because it wasn't cleaned up and stuff, like you said. I liked the story tho! Poor Jane. I kinda knew where it was going

Bwahahaha I love how we both had mr tofu prancing

im a big fan mr kent

Eh I'm sure you'll rockitout Seevah
Tofu is fun to draw

FU!

I apologize in advance for the low quality, i just moved into my new school this week and didnt have time to properly ink/clean this up...

FU!

MADNESSSSSSSS$$$$!!!!