Mr. Tofu vs. Rad Gal

Mr. Tofu vs. Rad Gal

by seevah

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William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 24 2009, 12:57 PM
I enjoy Mr. Tofu a great deal.  Just by his very nature, he's an enjoyable character, I think.  Seevah your story is a lot of fun and reveals a few more fun tidbits about Mr. Tofu but your quality takes a little bit of a dive.  Your eagerness to take on ten pages is admirable, but I would advise you to extend your deadlines by at least another week for quality controls.  The thing about your entry is...it's full of lines!  LINES LINES EVERYWHERE~!  And there's really not much variation among them, whether you're filling in Rad Girl or the background, I think it could use some more variation.  You need some more cleanup and your lines could use either some texture to accompany them or line variation to make it more interesting to the eye.

The Rad Girl entry is rad.  I love those faces, especially Mr. Tofu's creepy Fu face on page 2 and the creepy whatever face on page four.  Yet Rad Girl's face is lacking by itself.  In the few instances we see her, it lacks the shadows that everything else has.  It's a pity you lost your last two pages, but hey like I said, your story goes on forever and ever!!!  

I was greatly entertained by both entries.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 24 2009, 12:14 PM
It makes it cyclical!  The story goes on forever!  FOREVER!
(will post something more indepth later)

PepperoniDeluxe
Artist
24 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 24 2009, 11:56 AM
My first page is also my last page?

I am perplexed.

seevah
Artist
52 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 24 2009, 05:54 AM
I just woke up and checked my email and got this


This is an automatically generated Delivery Status Notification

THIS IS A WARNING MESSAGE ONLY.

YOU DO NOT NEED TO RESEND YOUR MESSAGE.

Delivery to the following recipient has been delayed:

    weiingan@gmaill.com

Message will be retried for 1 more day(s)
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I dont think my thumbnails got through

PepperoniDeluxe
Artist
24 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 23 2009, 08:56 PM
It is 1:30 am, with 3 hours left, and my power just went out. And uh. I lost the final 2 pages.

Fuck my life.

So yeah. I'm gonna upload what I have RIGHT NOW, before that happens again.

And thats all there is to it.

Knomer
Artist
87 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 22 2009, 09:37 PM
wicked, welcome  back Seevah.

seevah
Artist
52 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 21 2009, 10:41 PM
I realized i had to move out the same day this is due so I really didnt think this through too well.

Luckly I submitted something a head of time, and now i am with out a scanner until he 24th.

PepperoniDeluxe
Artist
24 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 21 2009, 10:08 PM
I don't even understand what it is I am drawing. Anymore.

I did when I started, though.

huh.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 19 2009, 09:32 AM
If cooked properly, Tofu doesn't have to be lame (the food not the character).

seevah
Artist
52 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 19 2009, 09:05 AM
I may have gone overboard with this , SNAPS!

Red
Council
703 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 16 2009, 10:18 PM
HELL YEAHHHHHHHHHHHUUUUHHHHH

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