The Introvert vs. Lydon Hsiao

The Introvert vs. Lydon Hsiao

The Introvert vs. Lydon Hsiao

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by Yosai

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Mister Kent
Artist
951 comments
# 38   Posted: Jul 31 2009, 10:03 PM
Dur - I meant *Yosai -
And I can't believe I haven't voted on this YET! With only 2 hours left!

Mister Kent
Artist
951 comments
# 37   Posted: Jul 31 2009, 10:02 PM
I concur with Fowlie, Queen Pong: Not. Gay. Enuff. But good showing on both sides.

Pong - I think your strong point here is the character design. While not always as consistent or neat as Yosai's, the fluidity with which you draw INTJ and Lydon allow you to be more expressive.

Yodai - The detail in yours, the intricacy of the lines and close attention to small things, is where I think you most succeeded in your comic. I think it looks unfinished in a lot of places. Your style here is a bit stiff at times, really beautiful, though.

angieness: oh it was haha when I read the battle I really wanted to make the thumbs make it look like a skanky hot gay porn
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Oh, you have succeeded :)

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 36   Posted: Jul 31 2009, 02:32 PM
Ahem... KING PONG, FOR THIS COMIC, OF SUPER GAY PROPORTIONS, I HERE BY PASS MY CROWN ONTO YOU http://www.ehow.com/images/GlobalPhoto/Articles/2157893/BKCrown_Full.jpg NO LONGER ARE YOU KING PONG, BUT QUEEN PONG! ALL HAIL QUEEN PONG!

Yos yours was cool too, just not as gay as I would have liked. <3

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 35   Posted: Jul 29 2009, 08:13 PM
the thumbs for your side suggest some insanely sexy goings-on, though that may just be angie’s doing.
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oh it was haha when I read the battle I really wanted to make the thumbs make it look like a skanky hot gay porn

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 34   Posted: Jul 29 2009, 06:30 PM
i got a really good read from both sides. great match.

pong: some of my favorite things about your comics were the textures and tones that you penned into every panel. i hated seeing you swap them out for halftones, but it's cool that you're trying out different things.
the thumbs for your side suggest some insanely sexy goings-on, though that may just be angie’s doing.

yosai: the dialogue did make me stumble a bit, but not enough to prevent my understanding of the story. great execution.
tiny drawing crit: having a solid black shade for the upper lip seemed a bit harsh to me, especially in the absence of cast and form shadows everywhere else.

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 33   Posted: Jul 29 2009, 04:37 AM
Thanks for the comments.  I realize the art is kind of shakey especially for the first few pages.  I didn't know exactly how I was going to handle this story artwise and I think that shows.  I considered doing more complex inkwork but I'm trying to better acquaint myself with using halftones, so I wanted to leave the linework fairly open for that.

Yosai, I didn't have a problem with reading your comic.   There are some grammatical errors, but nothing I couldn't figure out.  I liked how you handled my character,  probably better than I handled yours.  If you do decide on finishing up the painted pages, I for one would love to see them.  Thank you for accepting my challenge.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 32   Posted: Jul 27 2009, 06:33 PM
Pong-I thoroughly enjoyed this, it was nice to see a character that comes across as so straight laced (Lydon) having to deal with all these bizarre situations. Artistically I agree with Delya that art wise this wasn't your best, I would have liked to have seen more of your cross hatching in this since it really brings a lot to your art. But the entertainment really made up for it for me.

Yosai-I think artistically this was fine, I know that you lost what you'd originally worked on so to have this much is impressive. Making the inks just a little bolder would have helped, since at the moment they look kind of faint and washed out so nothing really stands out aside from things like Lydon and Introvert's hair. I understood what was going on story wise, but some things were worded oddly so it didn't flow well like on page 2 "subway was late, has been-well it felt hours." I know that English isn't your first language so it may have been best to not wait until the end to add text so you could have had someone do a quick proof reading.

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 31   Posted: Jul 26 2009, 05:22 PM
Pong: Great, funny comic. Not your best art-wise, but well made up for it with the humor and pacing. I lol'd lots. :)

Yosai: Was gonna give a better critique, but I read what you said about the scanner and whatnot, so I'll leave it be. XD; The story was kinda ho-hum, and I did get lost a bit. Also missing a few words in the bubbles. The bits with GP were beautiful, though.

Vote goes to Pong.

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 30   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 05:06 AM
Pong, awesome use of tones here.  I also like the use of the distorted torsos for effect.  Heellarious story as always.  Top marks all around.

Yosai, The story works well.  I could follow most of it except certain cameos I guess.  The ending was neat and added some character depth to a kind of ho-hum story.  The art was very good, would have loved to see what would have been

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 29   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 04:35 AM
yosai, i follow this one pretty well, but i can see how this become confusing, focusing on the double-activity going on in the flashback and the outcome the end presented. but i enjoyed it quite

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 28   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 04:34 AM
i almost somehow writhing in pain when i saw all the implications

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 27   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 03:53 AM
Lydons chiseled torso had me in stitches

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 26   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 03:31 AM
Pong - this is my favorite comic from you. It may not be your 'best' but I certainly think it's the most interesting and humorous. Just, work on your text. I some of your letters closely resemble other letters.


Yosai - it looked promising... but I got lost. haha. Too bad you had to rush to get anything put up. I'm sure it would have been quite nice :3

CrunchMcbuttsteak
Artist
129 comments
# 25   Posted: Jul 25 2009, 03:30 AM
Not enough DICKS!

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 24   Posted: Jul 24 2009, 11:44 PM
Okay, that was entirely my fault. I had a painted version but the scanner ate the lines (which were inked digitally), it was too obscure and half-toned. I found this like few hours of deadline and didn't have time to strengthen the lines, so I have to make do with the saved lineart to avoid defaulting. I know now that I shouldn't have used a technique I'm not sure if working or not/ how long it would take for void, or anything with deadlines and I'm really sorry. :X

Especially for Pong, I'm a shitty opponent and you deserve better than that. :O

BSLuGeth
Artist
49 comments
# 23   Posted: Jul 24 2009, 10:17 PM
I'll say what I said about Bruno:
I unimpressed with the amount of dick in this.

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 22   Posted: Jul 24 2009, 04:42 PM
Oh Yosai.  I loved the story you came up with.  I'm sorry you didn't finish the art, but it still looks pretty good.  You make intro so handsome.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 21   Posted: Jul 21 2009, 09:16 PM
I expected a lot of fabulous and manly

cultmasterflex
Artist
125 comments
# 20   Posted: Jul 16 2009, 10:04 PM
go pong!!!

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 19   Posted: Jul 14 2009, 10:54 AM
a n d . . . . .  done.

Noctisette
Artist
6 comments
# 18   Posted: Jul 12 2009, 09:49 PM
I... shall wait for this like a good person I am and then revel in the gayassery that's strewn all over the page.. no, forget I said that, I'm happy with the gay hints, that's it.. *hides before being chased by an angry mob*

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 17   Posted: Jul 10 2009, 04:21 PM
hooyea

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 16   Posted: Jul 8 2009, 11:28 PM
gay is a dish best served subtle.

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 15   Posted: Jul 8 2009, 07:21 PM
you would. : I

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 14   Posted: Jul 8 2009, 06:47 PM
I expect lots of gay

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 6 2009, 07:17 PM
We all miss LBJ.  

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 07:25 PM
fuck I missed Lyndon!

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 04:17 PM
jajajajajajajaj
xDDDD~~~~~~~~~~~~~

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 11:38 AM
WHOO all the good stuff's happening! C8

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 10:47 AM
sexsexsexsex

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 10:04 AM
Woah, can't wait for this one D:

Bittermause
Artist
242 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 09:50 AM
Dreams CAN come true! ;  ;

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 3 2009, 08:42 AM
yes!

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 2 2009, 10:31 PM
Wow, for reals?  8D  

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 2 2009, 10:07 PM
I'm going to try and make this suck less than the cockrockerz battle

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 2 2009, 09:52 PM
Awesome, looking forward to it guys

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 2 2009, 09:51 PM
I'm so gonna get my ass kicked.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 2 2009, 09:50 PM
Oh shit an interesting fight.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jul 31st, 2009
Votes Cast: 42
Page Views: 1934
Winner: King_Pong
 

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