Your backgrounds were very solid as usual, I had no complaints there. But I kind of feel like your humans were pretty weak in this, the anatomy was generally okay, but they were a lot weaker than in your NB work. I'm sure it has to do with not being used to doing more realistic humans, which is something a lot of us have problems with so it's good to get some practice in with these comics.

 I liked the backgrounds you had, nicely detailed. Maybe I'm just used to seeing your pencils more or something, cuz I preferred them over the inks you had here actually :\ not sure why though....I think it may have something to do with the line widths though. :0 the anatomy looked kind of stiff in places and the characters had really similar noses. everything else looked good though. And you have an interesting story so far. good job :3

I like your inks, though I think you could do more with the cross-hatching. like it's just in a few areas but it isn't really serving a purpose yet.

yo, the art and detail is tight! My only things are the lines. Unless your ruler broke or it was intentional. But i really liked this.

Another entry with good backgrounds and crosshatching in the back.  This was pretty cool Mecid as I found it visually interesting to look at.  Some of your faces are great but I think some 'cartooniness' creeps into them at times which I don't think meshes with this story you're telling.  As far as the story, I don't have much to comment on yet.  I suppose I have to wait for the setup to sink in but without being any sort of insult, I don't feel terribly interested in it...yet.

Also the guy on page five has no butt.

pretty neat, but some of the characters' poses were too stiff and awkward. specifically the people in the last panel on page two. that city background on page five is awesome though.

Uploaded. Prepare for traditional boring Mecid openings.

cool!

Think I'm looking to this one most of all :3