White Light is Dead / The White Light

White Light is Dead / The White Light

White Light is Dead — The White Light

by Knomer


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Angie
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# 12   Posted: Mar 15 2009, 10:32 PM
I wish you would have given this a little more love because you had a lot more time to work on it, but I can understand just wanting to get it out there while the tournament is still fresh in our minds. While it was nice to see you try doing something in color, it was pretty weak until those last few panels. Had the rest of the comic looked like the last 2 panels it would have been a nice treat.

Mister Kent
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# 11   Posted: Mar 13 2009, 01:09 AM
While rough around the edges, I give you credit for some nice design ideas. The layout, scene structure, and colors are real good starts--if you just maintain those the entire way through the comic, you'll have great results next time. This comic was a fun read, so I'd like to read more from you.

voidstone333
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# 10   Posted: Mar 12 2009, 12:50 AM
good story but i think you lack something or should i say i want to see how she died like she vanished unlike the 2 scuba man that were killed first and we drawn them how the 2 died you know ...

im bad at english

JoshuaEliGilley
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# 9   Posted: Mar 10 2009, 04:58 PM
I really liked the interaction between 16 and 17. Would've liked to see how you handled their interactions with the baron. The style was excellent, but I agree that bits of it were a little too sloppy.


necrotoaster
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# 8   Posted: Mar 10 2009, 02:56 PM
hahahaha! awesome.

webrynth
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# 7   Posted: Mar 9 2009, 12:01 PM
  Classic.
 Love the message.

Elio
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# 6   Posted: Mar 9 2009, 11:22 AM
Knomer - I think you have some serious skills in the making. However, you need to start cleaning up and putting it all together. Your panels are great, but you barley clean them up. The coloring is nice, but the application is all over the board and looks rushed. Take your time and figure out how your going to polish these comics.

squid
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# 5   Posted: Mar 9 2009, 09:48 AM
It's a funny story, but the art seems very very rushed with sloppy coloring. The composition of many of the panels look empty, especially after page 1.. and if not empty, then just kinda generic. Pacing felt a little rough to me; panels that might've had more impact or humor were kind of blown past?

Wolcik
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# 4   Posted: Mar 9 2009, 02:41 AM
I like it the story, but it'd be nice to see more of your character if you wanted to specify how she died.
At first page where sentais are facing off the boarder around their heards could use some more attention.

King_Pong
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601 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 8 2009, 12:14 PM
You better actually turn something in for this.

William_Duel
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# 2   Posted: Feb 24 2009, 09:06 PM
I'm glad to see this too, really it pleases me for these characters from the tourney to have closure because I really liked most of them and I definitely wanted to see them all go on for longer.

E.W. Schneider
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1055 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 24 2009, 09:02 PM
Hey, sweet. Good to have closure.

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Mar 15th, 2009
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