Massive Attack vs. Sam Oinko

Massive Attack vs. Sam Oinko

Massive Attack vs. Sam Oinko

by Kon

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Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 21   Posted: Mar 7 2009, 10:26 AM
shit. i can't believe i missed the voting. sorry guys...

these were both really soild though. my favorite from you so far kon. the hatching was nice but there were a few points where you chose to hatch instead of black out & vice versa where i didn't quite agree with but otherwise, it looked real nice.

josh, i agree. it was going great & just........ is it going to be continued? i really want to see the outcome!

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 20   Posted: Mar 6 2009, 04:42 PM
kon: good job working with nibs! i have a really hard time with them, personally. watch out for your hatching---try to have your lines wrap around the surface of the form. having a bunch of straight lines cutting across tends to flatten things.

josh: i liked the drawings and tones a lot. the first page was very well done---the horizontal page format you're using is really cool. my only complaint is that the story was cut short (duh).

good show, guys.

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 19   Posted: Mar 4 2009, 03:59 PM
cool battle guys~

@Kon: nice improvements, the ink work looked pretty nice. I think the poses of your characters look really weird sometime, not very natural. That's probably just your style, but the poses like on panel 4 of page 4 and panel 2 of page 7 looked odd to me. it is also hard for me to distinguish some of he character art from the background, I sugest making the line widths around your characters thicker like you had on panel 3 of page 11. I wasn't too drawn into the story, it was ok, but a bit "ehh" for me.  Really nice battle over all though.

@JoshuaEliGilley: cool first battle with Sam, but the art wasn't as solid as your intros, try going with 4 weeks on the next one :3 I like the ink  and toning still, but it was too messy in some areas for me. The story wasn't all that creative, but it was entertaining... until it ended so quickly XD You have some really good stuff here, but I felt this could have been even better if you had more time. Cool work though~

ronin-soul
Artist
81 comments
# 18   Posted: Mar 4 2009, 03:54 PM
Gah, I don't have much time to type my thoughts on these, but I love them!

Konman, nice job. You're getting better. One thing, though- next time, go with less pages, and more substance. You're doing what I tried to do with the Sentai Tourney, which was win by sheer amount. Slow down, and take your time on each individual page, not only with the art, but pacing, panelling, et cetera. I like the quick cameo as well, nice job.

Mr. Eli, thanks for the many cameos of Ronin in your comic, I love it. You will be repayed handsomely. I like your style, but I'd like to see it more refined and less sketchy in the future. Good luck, and thanks again, my man.

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 2 2009, 11:49 AM
HEY JOSHUA YOU BADSTARD:
ABout your comic:
It was great. I'm glad there will be more, I felt like betrayed when it stopped suddendly. Next time try to manage your time better.
You have something I'm nowhere near, that's your backgrounds. GOD, on the first page I felt horny just watching at your stuff. The comic was good, there was nice action and it seemed to fit massive attack well. The gangster talk made me laugh hard, I love it when people make Ronin and him talk like that (because they're mainly together in most peoples comics.)
I think everything was good, was a bit rushed sometimes but I love your style. I'm really proud to fight you for your first battle on VOID. This was great. Only the end could've disappointed me but you plan on continuing it. Everything is perfect then.
THANK YOU.

About mine:
Yeah I tried to do too much in too many pages. I'll try planning my story in a better way next time so I don't rush everything!

William> The messy part won't be there in the next battle, I'll try making it cleaner and everything :D
Thank you so much!
Sebastian> Ahah, Araki will always stand in our hearts!

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 1 2009, 02:17 PM
HEY KON:
I think you really stepped up your game this round, goddamn your massive page count!! I thought it started off really well, but it was wierd when oinko stabbed him in the neck and the next page he was ok? I think maybe him getting stabbed would trigger the flashback sequesnce nicely. In general I got confused as the comic went on, and I think it's because I wasn't sure how the bedroom attack was resolved..  seemed like you wanted to fit too much into the comic and it was relying on long- winded dialouges. Funny miss lemon head on that one page, and I liked your drawings of oinko and his dad.  Interesting twist on the story that massive is the young leader of the mafia and whatnot, just don't feel like it was resolved enough. like, if you would have just focused on the fight between massive/oinko when he sneaks on him, it would be really cool, then fit in the flashback stuff around that. The art was looking nice and improving, but it seemed like you just needed to fill in the black areas a little more.  Story-wise didn't go anywhere and I don't think oinko would serve so easily, but it seems to fit your take on him. Some good good emotion form the characters here.
Overall awesome entry!I can tell you worked really hard oin this and thanks for the fight it was fun!!
also,
I got like 6 more pages coming your way either as a BB or at the beginning of my next fight. so you WILL see them soon. sorry everyone cuz i can't seem to tell a desent story in small page counts, and I can't seem to finish 11pages very fast... so I hope ya liked it and stay tuned for more.  I have some good ideas for the future of Sam Oinko being a SWORN ENEMY OF BADSTAR!!! HAHAHAHAHA!

@ William, thanks a lot and no it was not on purpose at first, but it became my goal to end on that page.

@ tenko, glad you liked it cuz i have a real hard time with dialouge not sounding bleehhh.

@seeker, thanks i will!

voidstone333
31 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 1 2009, 02:12 AM
freakin awesomeness

William_Duel
Community Manager
924 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 27 2009, 12:40 PM
This was a wonderful battle but as Heather voiced, Joshua's entry, while quite well drawn, has a very abrupt end.  Was it because of time limitations or is it on purpose?  I don't think it's very clear here.  I like yours because its...normal.  I don't know how to word that properly...just that we have these punk kids and this self important big shot and they're rubbing each other the wrong way and neither is letting the other off.  It's a great entry.

Ah Kon I love your style especially because it reminds me of the people you cite as your influences, who happen to be some of my favorite artists as well.  I like how you delve into Badstar's past and integrate Oinko into it.  Both characters have that Mafia-esque nobility to them during this story.  One thing though is that I find your style to be a little messy.  Per se it's not difficult to follow but just, a little messy at times.  But I like the amount of effort and pages.  

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 26 2009, 09:14 PM
i've uploaded!

sorry for rushes

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 25 2009, 02:06 PM
HAMLET!

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 24 2009, 11:02 AM
My comic was sitting on my desk, I finished it two days ago but I only had time to submit it now, because of my exams. Some pages might seem rush but I am in the middle of a lot of exams, I can't really draw right now so I won't add anything anymore. I've learned a lot from drawing this comic, first time I used ONLY nibpens, just bought a new one that can do thinner lines, so expect even better from now on! Also tried using brush, it isn't as good as I wanted but for a first brush using I think it's alright.
Also I tried making M.A. more serious, less shonen hero like "We are all friends" and make him a bit "darker", like a batman or a seinen hero. I don't know if it really worked, tell me about it. ALSO I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR COMIC JOSHUA.

It will be uploaded soon!

Red
Council
636 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 13 2009, 02:35 PM
YEAAAAHHHHH IM EXCITED

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 10 2009, 05:00 PM
IS THAT BACON I SMELL?

bicentennial man
Artist
55 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 10 2009, 04:48 PM
the kon and the pig ....hhmmmmmm

ronin-soul
Artist
81 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 6 2009, 01:48 AM
Go CRAZY fellas!! Also, I'm looking forward to Oinko's emergence- make it good, guys!

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 04:07 PM
GO YOU RAT BASTARDS

Airlight
Artist
136 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 03:33 PM
GO GO GO GO GO

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 11:43 AM
MISS LEMON VS HEAVEN-EARTH ALREADY!?!?

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 09:12 AM
NO GIRLS ALLOWED!

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 09:05 AM
LET'S MALE THIS AWEEESOOOMMEEEE

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 5 2009, 08:01 AM
NOOB MODE ROUND 2: ENGAGE!!

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Mar 6th, 2009
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