Rofl: I like the Pothole on the sidewalk. XD
mecid, keep being awesome...
Dr. Fabulous vs. Nowhere Boy
Critiques & Comments
# 21
Posted:
Jan 17 2009, 10:28 AM
# 20
Posted:
Jan 16 2009, 06:08 PM
@RoflQu: nice comic man, the first panel on the first page is awesome. I thought the story was simple, but cute. Why is the snow red, green(?) and white though? XD looked a little weird, kind of like confetti. I suggest making your line work cleaner, it looked shaky in some areas. Good work though. :3
mecid: That ending was pretty funny. You're really good at drawing buildings and adding the perfect expressions to each character. no real complaints other the dark pencil strokes in some panels were going in all sorts of direstions; they looked a bit too messy.
great battle!
mecid: That ending was pretty funny. You're really good at drawing buildings and adding the perfect expressions to each character. no real complaints other the dark pencil strokes in some panels were going in all sorts of direstions; they looked a bit too messy.
great battle!
# 19
Posted:
Jan 16 2009, 11:44 AM
nice experiment on the low contrast, rofl but yeah, a little too far. scale it back a bit & it'd be real cool if you intended doing something like that in future battles. no real complaints. and that goes for either side. mecid, there were some bits were the lines got light to the point of almost looking they were just rough sketch-y. i get what you had going. tightening a little would really push it, but that's kind of just a nitpick. good stuff you two
# 18
Posted:
Jan 15 2009, 08:36 AM
Dr Fab- Not crazy about the blue haze, but overall pretty entertaining.
NW Boy- Nice drawings. Liked Santa at the end!!
NW Boy- Nice drawings. Liked Santa at the end!!
# 17
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 03:40 PM
Eric: Good atmosphere. Felt very cold. Needed more contrast though, especially in the word bubbles.
Mecid: Hilarious! I love your architecture too, in spite of you needing to work on your perspective some more.
Mecid: Hilarious! I love your architecture too, in spite of you needing to work on your perspective some more.
# 16
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 02:25 PM
that's so true XD it's awsome, but it also makes me feel bad that I didn't give enought info about it yet - must get back to drawning XD
# 15
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 01:50 PM
Yeah, it is. I drew it my last battle too.
# 14
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 01:35 PM
I enjoyed both of your sites it went smoothly with almost no gay jokes XD
RoflQu: is this building with "W" on it what I think it is?
RoflQu: is this building with "W" on it what I think it is?
# 13
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 10:12 AM
AAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHH, much better closing joke. I tip my hat to you, Mecid. Let's do this again sometime, I enjoyed it.
# 12
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 09:53 AM
Good enjoyable stuff. I giggled and smiled.
# 11
Posted:
Jan 14 2009, 06:25 AM
Good stuff folks.
I've slowly ceome a NB fan.
I've slowly ceome a NB fan.
# 10
Posted:
Jan 13 2009, 10:19 PM
you two are depressing me. BUCK THE FUCK UP. I'm sure your comics are fiiine.
# 9
Posted:
Jan 13 2009, 10:17 PM
Uploaded with an even more unimpressive one.
# 8
Posted:
Jan 13 2009, 09:52 PM
Uploaded, as unimpressive as it is.
# 7
Posted:
Jan 12 2009, 10:28 AM
sexy
# 6
Posted:
Dec 29 2008, 11:34 AM
neat.
-J
-J
# 5
Posted:
Dec 18 2008, 12:03 PM
good luck you guys
# 4
Posted:
Dec 16 2008, 08:12 PM
Zsa Breuser: uhoh the ultimate dudes are gathering again[/quote
!!!
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# 3
Posted:
Dec 16 2008, 08:06 PM
uhoh the ultimate dudes are gathering again
# 2
Posted:
Dec 16 2008, 10:53 AM
Gonna save the day
# 1
Posted:
Dec 16 2008, 07:23 AM
Yay!... Now get to work!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jan 20th, 2009
Votes Cast:
37
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2421
Winner:
mecid
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Mecid-solid work as usual, I like what you've been doing with your pencils lately, it's looking great. Really the only problem I had was occasionally the text was hard to read because it got really small and squished together. But other than that this was a pretty solid entry, I liked the simple and fun story.