i some how never read this... im sad i hadnt.. it was awesome. and thanks for the shout out.

"mighty cybernetic cock"... awesome!!

Thanks for the comments everybody.  I do think I need to work on my backgrounds and clean up the inks overall...hopefully I will get to battle Mike again and you all will get to see his amazing work...

winning on a default sucks ballz...

I only read this cuz it seemed to be popular and I wanted to be in the know... but I'm glad I read it. It was really funny and I love your inks. To me it seemed to be dragging a bit by the end though, like it could have just ended when Flint finished his story and I would've been happy. It was entertaining all the way through though.

awesome read......zombietron and the Toast characters were personal favorites......by far one of the more entertaining reads on here for a while.......but yah I woulda liked ta see some more emphasis on the art overall

Hilarious read.  High marks for entertainment and creativity, though I too marked you down somewhat for quality and consistency issues.  Like others have said, it was mostly backgrounds and some parts of the story/flashback segment that appear rushed.

nice entry, david! the artwork seemed rushed in some places (mostly in the bg's and things that weren't people), but it didn't affect clarity, so i had no problems enjoying the story. my only problem is that ghost revolver seemed a bit out of character... but then again, he also gets his orders from kali on his iPhone 3G in this story, so suspension of disbelief is probably key here.

wow

Hahaha, way to get caught in a lie!  Hi-5!

And Dave, I liked yours.  It was inconsistent but parts looked quite nice.  Good job.

I did ctrl-f. I don't want to bitch I just want there to be a more organized listing of the rules.

Even with "extension" being misspelled in the original post, the extension rules still show up at the top of my search when I search for "extension" on the forums using the search feature

um just so everyone knows, I  was 5/6 pages into this, then got laid off, wasn't allowed to go back to my job to get my finished pages, then had to start over, then I missed the extension request deadline because I couldn't find the the extension rules, due to "extension" being spelled incorrectly. I apologize.

Thanks for the cameo of Scur, very much appreciated.

Sweet comic man, high points for creativity and entertainment. I liked the expressions you drew on the characters, the ones on GR were especially awesome.You had nice ink work, but I agree with what pong said...hmm... I'd also suggest making your inks just a bit more clean here and there, but that's it. I have no other complaints.

good job!

i mean sucks GR has no pages not the work

sucks but funny.

Yeah I'm sad no one gets to see the awesome pages Mike made...I kinda just wanna redo this battle...

The wordiness...well...this is the edited version. Heh...I was reading alot of Frank Miller, and silver age stuff while I was doing this which is usually all of this melodramatic wordy millions of captions type presentation and I guess I wanted to try it...

Souless...Hanon vs Flint...someday...someday

Mad: MY hand writing is terrible...I mean really realyl fuckign terrible...but I agree I don't like digital lettering and I think hand lettered bubbles would increase the  gestural quality of the whole comic...

Pong: I always like your critiques.  Yeah...and I usually just ink...I do a small maybe 10th scale plotting of all the panels then I just go at it with a brush...

Damn I had a dope comment extolling the virues of your work david, but forgot to log in before posting.

Anyway suggestions:

Its hard work and whatnot, but I think things would mesh better if you handlettered your pages.

for seconds, your art is sort of muddled, consider practicing using a more variable line weight or making better use of grayscale to guide the partially retarded viewer around the page.

David, do you pencil things out before you ink, or just draw straight?   Because this comic has a lot of good pages and a lot of bad pages, and I can't think of any reason some stuff looks awesome while other stuff looks so awful within the same comic other than that you must not be planning this out.   In any event that makes the quality hard to vote on.

Anyway I thought the story was creative which is good,  but some of the execution was a little stale.  The first few pages especially were just wordy to the point of almost making me not want to read the comic.  But it got better as it went on.

GO GO OR I WILL KICK YOUR ASS

...whelp...I guess it's time to start drawing...

yet....Dragonquest VIII keeps calling my name...damn you dragonquest and your affable and cute characters....damn your compelling storyline and challenging gameplay....damn your Akira toriyama simple yet surprisingly detailed designs...

I hate you dragonquest viii...you have kept me from actually drawing....

He is...I'm the younger fatter more successful brother...

He's Cain and I'm Able...I'm just waiting for the rock to the back of the head any day now...

Who's the oldest?

ha ha i like both these guys....alot
i would cry if this went any other way than great
*no homo* straight is also acceptable
good luck to you both

I am indeed the fat one...but apparently Im going to get French oral sex so Im okay with that

SHIT

yes we are brothers, he's the fat one.

The one who wins will have french oral sex!

Ow you guys..... : (

Why doing that to the poor Brazilians, is that FEAR OF AWESOME that I'm smelling? Cuz if it is, your "pure win" radars are broken when poiting for me (I can't say that about z, since he broke the radar - you know, the "too much information" thing).

None sent me a moose, none believed me about sandboard. Tell me again why I love you guys so much?

oh Im nevrous about this one. Like too good to be true!

no michael that is the actual definition of great justice...

lets do it...

woah, cool beans.  Good luck you two!

can't wait to see this.

thats not evil, but while we're down there we can get Zsabreuser too, since they live so close. Then we can breed them and sell that babies for tourists who want their own "natives".


... is that evil?

Por quoi??

@Perca: I dont know what your saying 90% of the time but it sounds cute...so I've decided Im going to come to Brazil kidnap you put you a little cage in my basement with one of the guinea pig water bottles and like...a bowl full of nutritional pellets...and charge people to come see the "Native"


...that's not evil is it

queensberry rules?

You guys better make this the most awesome thing I ever saw in my entire life.

I'm not going to smile till this is up. Disapoint me and you both shall burn in hell of brazilian flames of dance and soccer. Get this done, then fight me, BOTH AT THE SAME TIME, cuz I'm from Brazil, you guys know the jazz. Brazilians can't lose and blah blah.

I'm cheering for Michael cuz he didn't comment on this yet. Plus David has mooses already, I don't need to give any support >:I

The best way to describe this battle is: 'BOUT TIME!

I knew this would happen, but it seems so soon!

I have to fill my life with something other than Booze...so instead of doing crack...I make comics

holy SHIT Dave, you have like..COMIC BOOK DIARREAH! you keep on going, and going, and going...!

good look to you guys! :3