Death Life Match / Mr. Sun vs. Doctor Anthropos

Death Life Match / Mr. Sun vs. Doctor Anthropos

Death Life Match — Mr. Sun vs. Doctor Anthropos

by Hiemie

47.9%
820 points
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52.1%
891 points
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Aluísio C. Santos
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# 41   Posted: Nov 9 2008, 06:15 PM
more like...THE MEOWFIA

necrotoaster
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# 40   Posted: Nov 9 2008, 12:10 PM
Mr. Sun Junior?

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 39   Posted: Nov 3 2008, 09:34 AM
Thanks for reading, folks!

J.P: Thanks man!

Phill: Thanks! As for the baby, the story maybe sounded more complex than it really is, let\'s say that Doctor A. is there for a surgery, except the procedures were through the exchange of fists!

Kon: haha thanks!!

Foo: If you liked the art, then my job here is done, thanks man!

Perca: haahah
Well, there IS a jojo reference, in mine, still, that isn\'t needed to understand the story, it\'s just a story about \"when a star dies, another one is born\". Thanks!

Jack: ahah thanks, glad to know I\'ve been able to push better on entertainment, since this seem to be my most lacking \"void attribute\". As for the one more page, it could be done, though me and Hiemie agreed on this being a 3 pager battle!

Pong: Thanks! And abrasive IS a good word

amazingdavid: haha thanks, though I don\'t really know if it\'s a compliment to know the comic was funny because it was written all wrong haha. To be honest, it had the bubble all written on the last day, sicne to some busy stuff, but I reckon it\'s really, really bad.

Squiddodod: Yes, it does a lot of sense, And it\'s good to know if the inks are working by themselves or not, so I must push it farther on next comics, and try to solve this (in case its a B&W comic again, of course). And pardon for the text ;º; Thanksss

Ariboobooboo: Thanks! Yes, I see what you mean, specially on page 1, I guess. i think maybe a white outline around the panels could solve it, perhaps?

Zombietoaster: hah, thanks!

BornLoser
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# 38   Posted: Nov 1 2008, 12:39 PM
Zsa wins at art. Hiemie wins at life.

I really like these kind of short humoristic stories.

aribooboo
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# 37   Posted: Nov 1 2008, 09:30 AM
heimie: hahah hella clever! I liked this one, it made me smile. That last part KILLED me. I wasn\'t excpecting that! haha I\'m gonna agree with squidman here, i ended up liking this unclored comic vs your colored ones. Dunno what it was, but it just felt a little cleaner. Don\'t have much to say this time around, but keep making comics! ;D

zsabreuser: nice inks as usual! Sometimes the figures got a little lost in the background. I didn\'t really know where to settle my eyes, i kinda just jumped around the page. It was nice looking at all the detail though, but i think there\'s a way to take all that detail in as a whole. .....for real though, i don\'t know how exactly you do it, but i know i\'ve seen in applied before! Maybe darken the lines on the figures and the lighten the ones slightely in the back? Well, either way, i love looking at your stuff. Feels prefessional~ The dialouge was a little confusing though. I could follow it up to the first page, but afer that, i didn\'t really know what was happening. But maybe it was onl this time around, cuz i\'ve seen you improving in this spot before. Keep working on it, you\'re getting there :3

squid
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# 36   Posted: Oct 30 2008, 11:07 AM
z: ...I think something went over my head here. XD I couldn\'t even follow the dialogue in this one...
I think your inks just by themselves are a bit overwhelming... I think if you\'d done something like the Scarlett battle with the two colors, it would just help by giving the eyes something to focus on. Does that make sense? :I ...Or, even throw some tones in...
Anyways, I like how you did the FISTFISTFIST page.

heimie: I actually liked this a lot better than some of your colored stuff... also I didn\'t get the very last panel... this whole battle is one of confusion for me, apparantly.

amazingdavid
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# 35   Posted: Oct 30 2008, 10:17 AM
I laughed unbelievably hard at Hiemie\'s mostly because the bible is full of all these little contradictions and dumbness.  Seriously you can go to hell for like letting a chick sit on your lap that you\'re not married to or something.  Anyway hiemie\'s lacked the sophistication in the art department that I would have hoped for but...really who gives a fuck it was funny...

Zsa...the art was great I think your anatomy is getting way better and your control of the inking was nicely handled.  I actually thought yours was funnier simply because of the broken english.  It reminded me of the Cantonese dub of Shaolin Soccer. It\'s like your comic was translated on Babble fish or something...so I spent ten minutes in my office annoying my co workers with my obnoxiously loud laugh.

\"You had better washed your hands\"

\"Yes...But I brought no Painkiller\"  HAHAHAHAH WTF does that mean...who knkows who cares its fucking hilarious

King_Pong
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# 34   Posted: Oct 30 2008, 09:37 AM
Let me say abrasive one more time for good measure.

King_Pong
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# 33   Posted: Oct 30 2008, 09:34 AM
Hiemie: This was certainly the funniest comic I\'ve seen on void in a long time.  I don\'t laugh out loud very often, but (the build up to and ) the last page of this comic was too hilarious.  

Zsa: nice work as always, your inking is becoming more palatable and less abrasive.  It seems less angular and abrasive, with more emphasis on curves and texture than you usually seem to give.

Jack
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# 32   Posted: Oct 30 2008, 12:53 AM
EDIT: after discovering Hiemie\'s was based on Jack Chick Tracts, the style really WASN\'T pushed enough. You should\'ve used digital lettering and bubbles to get that really shitty effect the Chick Tracts have. and flattened out the cover colours more.

Jack
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# 31   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 11:26 PM
These were both great, other than that Hiemie\'s came off as a little rushed and SLIGHTLY lacking in style. You know you could\'ve done more with the art but it so doesn\'t matter because this was one of your funniest battles yet.

Zsa, that was one of the most entertaining matches you\'ve done, and the absolute manliest fight on Void. It did lack a little bit on clarity in storytelling but I think if you\'d had another page you would have clinched it perfectl.

Great job guys

Also:
FoO-Royce:...it was cleaver
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is my new favourite comment.

IWIHASCOE
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# 30   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 06:37 PM
I enjoyed both comics, in different ways.. but what threw me was the same thing on both: you guys used plot bases that are not easy to get for people that don\'t know the subject. Hiemie on the bible jokes *that he explained me later, but if he hadn\'t I would still be lost* and z on the Jojo\'s reference *that was the same thing*

It made people like me that lives in caves not get 30% of the battle and feel dumb - plus not having a high entertain since I couldn\'t get it... but since the style and quality are great on both, I can\'t complain.

I still feel dumb tough.

YaRoof
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# 29   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 06:22 PM
my bacon must be levitating cause i liked mr suns side better........it was cleaver.

zsa: yurs LOOKED fuggin fantastic tho.. and im curious what the baby is all about.

Kon
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# 28   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 05:55 PM
Actually I understood Zsa\'s more than Hiemie\'s. I didn\'t understand a SINGLE JOKE, I\'m too french I guess. Well I liked both but the manlyness with it\'s awesome references takes my vote to zsa!


Phill
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# 27   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 05:08 PM
Not bad you two.

Hiemie: OK, you definitely have the vote for entertainment, but really seeing your work without colors kinda makes it easier to see things you may want to consider working on, mainly backgrounds. Not the best quality I\'ve seen from you but an entertaining comic nonetheless


Zsa: Quality here got my vote, but opposite to hiemie the story was maybe a bit too weird and some things were hard to understand, mainly the Mr. Sun baby at the end. I think maybe it could of been explained better somehow. Other than that I rather enjoyed this comic overall


Both were kinda even but I sided with Zsa on this one.

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# 26   Posted: Oct 29 2008, 05:00 PM
hey! first vote!
hiemie: great as always. incredibly hilarious, with just the right touch of homo-eroticicm. maybe one day i can battle (when my fighter\'s up) you, even though your dead.
zsab: shit\'s awesome man, your inks are always lovely. also i dug how mr.sun has a moehawk, & those radical shades.

you guys fucking rock.
GO MR. SUN!

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 25   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 06:32 PM
Consider this battle...UPLOADED

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 24   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 11:44 AM
Anthropos lost vs Mr.Sun.
With this one, twice.

necrotoaster
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# 23   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 11:32 AM
ohhhh wait the jakob & osbot one...
nevermind, now i feel dumb.



necrotoaster
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# 22   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 11:30 AM
the one versus anthropos?
i thought he won that?
& then does that mean this october resurrection thing in ONLY in effect during october?
ehhh, whatever.


Hiemie
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# 21   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 11:15 AM
Mr. sun died in the finals of this year\'s Death Tournament.

necrotoaster
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# 20   Posted: Oct 28 2008, 06:29 AM
NOOO!!!!
aw man!
...wait, when\'d he die?
i totally missed something.

Hiemie
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# 19   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 08:56 PM
Hey guys.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 18   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 08:41 PM
Kenshiro style

King_Pong
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# 17   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 04:37 PM
Mr. Sun is already dead.

necrotoaster
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# 16   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 04:12 PM
whaaat???
v
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IWIHASCOE
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# 15   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 07:21 AM
ME.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 14   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 06:36 AM
Who\'s gonna deliver him the news?

necrotoaster
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# 13   Posted: Oct 27 2008, 06:26 AM
I HOPE MR. SUN DON\'T DIE! I WANTED TO BATTLE HIM WHEN I GOT MY FIGHTER UUUP!!
DON\'T DIE MR. SUN!!!!!!!

Jetaime
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# 12   Posted: Oct 24 2008, 03:38 PM
shit\'s gonna be so cash.



Monday
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# 11   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 06:31 PM
MERATCH !

Monday
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# 10   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 06:28 PM
MERATCH !

Dimension
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# 9   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 03:05 PM
rematch!

D:

good luck people!

Kon
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# 8   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 12:24 PM
This is deadly lively!

squid
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# 7   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 08:37 AM
that\'s just silly.

King_Pong
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# 6   Posted: Oct 22 2008, 06:37 AM
This will probably be the best Death Life Match Death Match ever.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 5   Posted: Oct 21 2008, 08:14 PM
NO U

Hiemie
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# 4   Posted: Oct 21 2008, 08:13 PM
You\'re gonna die, and get a new character.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 3   Posted: Oct 21 2008, 08:11 PM
Actually, correcting my first post, could it be named Death Life Match instead?

We do need a edit button

Hiemie
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# 2   Posted: Oct 21 2008, 08:04 PM
You\'re going to die, and get scarred.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 1   Posted: Oct 21 2008, 08:02 PM
Can someone rename the battle for Death Scar Battle ?:D

Comic Details -

 
Type: Death Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Nov 5th, 2008
Votes Cast: 38
Page Views: 1735
Winner: Aluísio C. Santos
 

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