vs Azriel / Worltex

vs Azriel — Worltex

by Wolcik

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Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 12 2008, 04:32 AM
Faux - this Auzi guy were suppose to be random furry hater (maybe I could make him go flashbacking when he\'s hit)
Since Azriel were a dog, Worltex treated him like one and that\'s why he didn\'t want to get revenge on him as well ^^\'

Faux
Artist
32 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 11:10 AM
Great attention to facial detail! The panel layout and pacing is nice, especially the shapeshifting page. I\'m a little confused about why skull face unties the dog after beating the heck out of the Auzi, or whythe Auzi is chasing the dog in the first place though.

jayd4life
22 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 7 2008, 07:04 PM
Hmmm....keep it up yo. Loving the shapeshift motion though...really nice. *especially since Imma fan of dogs/wolves/lycans/....and etc. XD*

~~but Seriously...Keep at it, cause I see that you must have took time to think this out.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 7 2008, 10:57 AM
Actually I redraw the whole thing except the cover. I try to fix empty buildings next time - and I\'m thinking about doing actual battle :)

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 7 2008, 10:24 AM
It\'s good that you finally finished this, it\'s not often people actually follow up on their promises to finish a battle. Are the drawings themselves from back then? Anyways, be careful with using digital effects when dealing with mostly black and white lineart, since it will always stand out. That transformation sequence was really nice but I just wasn\'t a fan of the airbrushing around her. I felt like your backgrounds were really empty, bringing some of that hatching from the foreground into the backgrounds would have helped with this a lot and remember that buildings should never be just empty blocks. Other than that it was pretty good, I would really like to see you actually do a battle. While it\'s fine to do as many beyond battles as you want, try throwing some battles in there from time to time as it will help you step up your game.

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Ended: Oct 13th, 2008
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