Eric: I\'ve already told you how I honestly felt. Now let me take this time to tell you why. I actually wrote a long version of it, but since it\'s so, so long, I\'ll have to simplify it.

Your comic has always been one of my favorite so I was looking forward to this one. You\'ve never failed to entertain me and make me laugh, but this was down right disappointing. In my opinion, I do believe that you used \"random humor\" badly. It seems like you used this more as an excuse to get it over with, rather than focusing on making a good plot line. Don\'t use \"random humor\" as an excuse but more as something to give spice to the actual plot.

You also didn\'t seem to bother truly capturing how P&P really should have been depicted and I doubt you studied them well enough to see how they should have been drawn. Next time try to make it more obvious that you do have respect for the other artists\' characters. You probably do, but in this comic, they are used more as disposable tool than actual characters.

Bittermause, you did well. Your comics have always made me laugh. Even though this comic obviously could have been epic if you had time to finish it, you still delivered a good story. I think storywise, this is one of your best.

I do think that artistically, you could still improve on human anatomy, and same goes with background. I can\'t say exactly which part of human body you should focus on, but sometimes I feel that you have the need to show every part of the torso, no matter what pose they\'re in. (It\'s hard to explain by words, so I\'ll give you drawn-example later by email).

Oh and Where=were. I already bashed you over that plenty of times.

ROFL, I love the possibilities of your character, but this just seemed kind of abrupt. I really liked the mood of the first page.

Bittermause I really like the art. I couldn\'t finish reading it, because the whole anime/over-emotional really turns me off, but I like the idea of sending in a Robot to get him!

Woo my first critique!

Both of these stories were interesting especially RoflQu because it hit out of left field.
But over all I liked the story telling of Bittermause better. I enjoyed the line inking  (except a few of those pages didn\'t look finished) still it was entertaining and much more crisp.
Still I give points for individual style and I laughed at both of them!

Forgive me if I don\'t go into a detailed critique, as I am currently knocking on Death\'s door, but Bittermause... that was hilarious.  I really needed that.  XD

Ha ha; absolutely hilarious.

BM: heehee, does Potemnkin have some kinda crush on Pandora? He totally seems to. :3
I love this duo of yours, really. I was kinda sad to see the whole thing wasn\'t in color, though. I liked your Eliza Quaille one, in which there is much color to be had.
But hey, what was up with the first panel on the 6th page? Is that Pandora??? She looks kinda funny...


RQ: Quite amusing indeed.

I\'m sorry, I laughed harder at rofl\'s because of the transition to the last page.  Well played sir, well played.

BM yours was funny too, but it didn\'t hit as hard.

OW YOU GUYS.... <3

@bitter: Potemnkin is so cuteeeeeeeeee, damn you!

And a knuckle supper.

Eh, you shoot for the stars and you end up falling into some horse shit. School kind of had me whipped and parents weekend ruined any chances I had to working these last few days. I ended how I felt it would end best, and I\'m sure you whooped my ass anyways.


I\'ll see you in about a month, BM.

*sits on Pong\'s face*
Now that he ruined the magical suprise I\'ll mention one more thing....
MINI-CONTEST!
IN THE VERY LAST PANEL OF THE COMIC IF YOU CAN GUESS WHAT THE CHARACTERS ARE DRESSED UP AS, FIRST ONE WITH THE RIGHT ANSWER IN THE COMMENTS LOG GETS FREE CRAPPY DRAWING FROM ME!

A goomba?

SIBLING SPITE MATCH

Uploaded my side.
And instead of adding in a fanciful author\'s foreward I\'m just going to save a page and do it here.
I had to sacrifice making the comic all nice and polished up for the sake of completing the story with minor edits.
I have come to understand two things; three weekers are not my friend.  Not for the stuff I try to do and want to do more of. And two...yeah everyone\'s got their own stress and hardships to deal with. Mine happened  to be attacking me in the form of trying to get out of financial problems, school homework piling up, a commission I NEED to get done, and a couple major holiday projects are on the way. I need a month or two to chill and get myself back in order before I can do anymore sequential  stuff, so for what it is I do hope you enjoy my half. ( and I hope I didn\'t do any hardcore butchering of some certain characters in this entry. )

Hey look. Two people I like, with characters that I like, doing a comic that I will most likely like...


what\'s not to like?

ITS ABOUT GODDAMN TIME

Finallyyy XD

omodamsojdajosidoawoipooi!!  8D

You guys heard Angie

GOD FIIIIINALLY BITTER.

Good luck you two! I better not get any PMs/IMs about needing to cancel or I\'m punching puppies

I hope tomie pandora is still in charge

WHOA YES.

no whammy no whammy no whammy no whammy no whammy STOP

good luck!

YOU GOING DOWNTOWN LITTLE MAN!