Zsa: i love how Doctor Anthropos is responsible for the Month of the Dead phenomenon. my only complaint is that i think this needs a conclusion.

p.s. how many battles have you done this month? geez!

Mike: your inks are strong, but i think some tone could do you some good. i think you could use it to separate the foreground and background, for example. when everything has a flat, white appearance, it makes things hard to distinguish. other than that, your battle was well drawn and i enjoyed the story.

Dim: Thanks!!

Perca: I hear you on the highlights, and I\'m glad you\'ve pointed it out, since i was experimenting them above the lines this time, and It\'s good to know they aren\'t working, I must find other ways to improve it I guess.

As for the SFX fonts, while theyre are hand drawn, I really need to change it, and I hadnt\'t noticed I did it before, thanks!!

Michael: The pleasure is completely mine! Ghost Revovler is a character I\'ve been wanting to battle since it was on Incubator, though I feel I didn\'t do enough justice of him in this battle!
I\'ll make sure stuff gets proofread in the next occasion!

Toaster: thanks!!

Great stuff from the both of ya.

Thanks everyone for the compliments, I had a lot of fun with this!

@Perca, I have already started my next battle, and I am including lots of fat and skinny people for you.

@Heimie, I don\'t know why you thought it was senseless, I am not sure that you understood the characters, but I really appreciate your comment, could elaborate on \"distracting?\"

@Dave, you are fat, your opinion doesn\'t matter

@Dimension.. um sorry you didn\'t get it.

@Zsa, thanks for battling! Um I would suggest that you have someone proofread your script, cause the English is a little off. Oh and Ghost would totally kill all the monsters and be home in time for lunch and Oprah.

limestripe is closed. hunf.

I want to see Zsa\'s colors on Michaels art...can that happen...am I making a wish for something that will never be

LIMESTRIPE LIME STRIPE LIMESTRIPE....

the future is now...

Jesus guys, why so awesome? Screw you both, I\'m moving to Canada... ow.. wait, never mind....

FEEDBACK TIME! LATER IS ALSO BETTER THAN NEVER!

@MichaelH: I think people will punch me, but I didn\'t get any problems at all to get you comic in a first read. Guess it was so simple that people were trying to guess stuff that wasn\'t there ha ha Or you\'re using brazilian code, so I could get it. I adore your blacks, you have such a nice sense of using it, I don\'t think I can see you adding a shitty lot of colors and make is looks better than it is b/w, I don\'t know, it\'s a charm I\'m not used to see around and I adore it. Your pacing is abrupt, but in a good way, feel like an action movie, I likes it!

Guess the only thing that kinda bothered me was the small variation on body shapes (form the zombies and main characters for example. Try giving em a stronger difference on shapes, it will pop on your b/w style and make things more clear for non brazilian coders. I\'m nit picking, but it really was the only thing that annoyed me while reading.

ps. You\'ll get served soon. I saw what you did on your last page. and on your first page. And on my weak foreigner ego.

@z: Right to receive another punch, I think the abrupt ending was cool. It turned out chocking and gave that *to be continued* feeling, that makes the reader begs for more and gets excited for new comics. I think that was creative and I don\'t care if people prefer closed pages, as you said, it\'s an arc, and it was obvious from the first battle of this char. Keep on moving, you\'re getting me interested (plus you\'re giving your oponents enough spotlight, so i can\'t see why not following a different way of ploting).

I think your shading is getting better and better but.. I\'m not liking your cutting edges. I liked it better when you add the whites under the inks not over. Right now, they doesn\'t seen to fit (for my eyes at least) plus break the balance of your f*cking awesome inks. Maybe it\'s just me, but whatever. Another thing that annoyed me is that you\'re doing the same mistake as I notice I am doing too: using the same \"font\" for almost all sfx. It makes em lose power and you also lose the variety in the comic (Jesus I think I\'m being confusing, if you want i can try to explain in portuguese later). Vary more on them and try difference letter shapes and colors to make the sounds \"sound\" different- right now it looks like \"the same lady dressed in the same dress but with different colors\" that are ignored by everybody for being boring. < worst comparison ever. Again, this is a nit pick, your comic was awesome.

I hate you too and my feedback are super harsh since I\'m attempting to get both super depressed and leaves art forever, so i can be better than you guys someday and dance over your dead bodies (lies, i want to feel pretteh critiquing better than people than me, that\'s why. I HATE YOU BOTH!). I\'m just voting on this to fuck both your scores, using all my 40 accounts and asking my fanbase as well (sadly my cat can\'t vote, but still).

Woah nice battle guys!

had to give my vote to Zsa for the quality though and also entertainment, since...I was confused as to what was going on in Michael\'s comic D:

They were both very good. great job people

Thanks guys!

Michael: Hm, maybe then it\'s the pen size, but then again I don\'t think it needs a change, but something looks a bit smooooth, or thick.

Kon: WAIT FOR PULPO 4 MAN

Angie: Thanks a lot!
As for the battle ending abruptly, I feel you, but while this was a 3 week battle, when we agreed on the battle, I only wanted 1 weekers, so that I could battle more oftenly with the skeleton. but since Michael wanted more time to draw, it was ok, but I still tried to keep around one week, I even got carried due to weekends. So I think after that point I stopped, Ghost Revolver would either die quickly (and revive later on thanks to Kali) or give some real trouble to the undead and manage to escape, which would require a lot of pages to be done right.
Still, I really could\'ve added a page or two of him...dying. ha

Amazingdavid: ahah thanks. As for the selfcontained part, hardly my comics are selfcontained, specially with Anthropos (check SDT matches), but yes, the outcome of this will follow in vs Adonis.

Koko: thanks As for th abrupt ending, read Angie dedicatory above . As for the gramamr, good to know I\'m improving, and yes, for the last battle vs Neko I asked Jho, but this time it was hard finding someone. I\'ll make sure I do for vs Adonis!

Thanks a lot, and keep\'em coming!

Both of these were great fun to read. I was a LITTLE confused by Ghost\'s comic, but I really liked the stark black/white you have going. And I agree with Angie, I thought he\'d be a far more serious character, so the gags are great. The end trick or treaters were a hoot, too. Very fun.

Zsa, man oh MAN I wanted to love this far more than I can. XD The colors, the action... it was all leading up to something FANTASTIC... then it stopped. It stopped and I cried. It\'s a great lead INTO the Month of the Dead, but... but I wanted MORE. Granted, I also wanted to stick sporks into my eyes after a bit when the grammar got to me... but ya know I love ya(and my eyes). You need to have someone check the grammar, dear. Otherwise this could have been... oooh baby. More yummy than it already was. Cheers.

Good job to both!

I\'m enjoying anthroposverse comics. I think it would be a fun setting.

Ghosty: Your comic was pretty fun actually. Although a bit senseless, although, who am I to talk about senseless. Also, your line style is... distracting.

Zsa...this was sweet but I agree with Angie..its seemed more like the intro to a longer story than a self contained one.  The colors were great but some of your anatomical distortions left me a bit confused.  And did I say the colors were great!

Mike...This is your usual...story was funny and concise, the inks were good, the pacing was fantastic, and you had a good sense of control over your blacks without them getting to confusing.  But like I said it\'s your usual, maybe for some of your future battles you can try mixing it up...oh and I gave you less points because it wasn\'t colored...that is apparently a Void rule...no color...obviously means not as good...

Oh and the cameo was sweet...

michaelharris-Your inks are looking pretty sweet and your backgrounds didn\'t look as empty this time around. Story wise I really like the approach you have taken with this character. Like when you submitted him I was expecting this crazy serious ass character so to see him in some really silly situations makes me laugh. I really enjoyed this, and I loved HEAT trick or treating dressed as Angie. Slaughterface dressed as a ghost made me laugh pretty hard as well

Zsa-I really loved your colors here and you had some great backgrounds going on. Really my only complaint was this seemed to not go anywhere story wise, I didn\'t like how it ended abruptly. I do think you\'re getting better at writing dialogue though

OMG. BOTH TOTALLY BLASTED ME OUT.

Michael> I loved how everything was done, I think it wasn\'t confusing at all and that you did a great job on everything! Well done mate! I also loved MA,Heat and Slaughterface for the trick or treat joke. This was really awesome. The action was really good (and sudden) and the starway jump was so movie like. THAT WAS AWESOME and for a conclusion I will just say as Zsa, try making nicer scanning because your inks look a bit wierd (but better than last battle.)

Zsa> You totally blew me off, you are pro here. GET OUT OF VOID AND SEND ME THE COPIES OF YOUR COMIC WHEN IT\'S OUT.

Its so pretty... I draw on regular size board, I think I need to either do a better job scanning, cleaning up pencils or it may just be the resizing, I can\'t figure it out. I will keep working on it. Thanks for challenging. I love the motor scooter.  So pretty...

I have no words, this is really hardcore action, and I loved each bit of it, it\'s just perfect.
The stairway panel took my breath away!

Seriously the only crit is actually a sugestion, maybe you could try drawing bigger and then resize it down so that your inks look intense crisp.

I\'m so getting owned in this

XD The Extension was for me, my bad I hacked your account and asked it, michael :B

Ho snap I can\'t wait....

what?! I totally uploaded this weeks ago! Extension? OH! I asked Angie for an EXTENSION CORD, sorry guys must have been some static on the line. Ho well, it uploaded now. Still.

OH SHIT. I DIDN\'T BRUSH MY TEETH FOR FOUR DAYS WHILE WAITING FOR THIS BATTLE. WELL, 5 MORE DAYS TO GO.

Well I just double checked with Toast and Zsabreuser cannot take advantage of the extension, fortunately Zsab turned in several days ago. No extensions for Month of the Dead fighters.

like how can you request a week extension for something i didn\'t even know was happening?! WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO?!



really, i just need to pay better attention.

-J

fuck. when did this happen?

-J

I blame the economy.

:\'(

*sorry*

michaelharris has requested an extension, deadline extended by 1 week

this is gonna be BAD ASS.

mikemikemikemikemike

Ha ha ha damn I can\'t wait for this, so not fair!

Michael L. Harris III Esq. shall not be rushed by likes of sea animals! *inks slower*

Hurry up michael!!

It\'s uploaded. I apologize for nothing, excepot that I had to sketch the inks with a red ballpoint pen, sicne the store didn\'t have any more colored pencils

I hope you dig!

I\'LL UPLOAD TONITE (hopefully)

this match deadline is on my birthday =,D

ONLY FIVE DAYZ LEFT

MAKE IT HALLOWEEN BASED GUYSSSSSSS *or just make me super happy!*

I think I just shit myself...this is going to be so dark and so lovely...

now only if I can get this damn time machine working so I dont have to wait...

DEATH VS ZOMBIE ANTHRO NEW DESIGN

WHAT. YES.

This is a rad match-up.

i came to bring the ruckus...

Good luck you two! Was wondering who you\'d throw Anthropos at Zsab

HOLY SMOKES

JUST MAKE THOSE TWO BATTLES REAL PLEASE

The god of dead vs the god of undead