Copper Mouth vs. H.E.A.T.

Copper Mouth vs. H.E.A.T.

Copper Mouth vs. H.E.A.T.

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Kuro
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# 39   Posted: Oct 15 2008, 05:46 PM
there\'s plenty of places for the eyes to \'rest\' but i have to say, i always like perca\'s layouts because of the density. every inch has got style. this was good. i enjoyed it. and the limited palette was neat. but heat\'s chin/mask combo reminds me of the jason lee character in the incredibles. whatever he was called haha

-J

IWIHASCOE
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# 38   Posted: Oct 15 2008, 04:30 AM
Whoa tx everybody for all the support and feedback. I\'m taking all critiques by heart and will try my best to not commit the same mistakes again. I have noting to argue here, just feel glad that my trial was enough for at least entertain you a bit XD

I\'m just a bit curious about one thing: did the plot feels cliche or predictable? I\'m a bit paranoid about my speech lines and that\'s the part of the comic that I re-do most of the time before getting it finished. Anyway, I\'m just wondering ha ha

@Fetus, I hope everything gets better for you and your girlfriend soon. Either way, it was very fun to adapt your character, I really can\'t wait for that BB. Mind you, I\'m always open for settling this like a man *read rematch for great justice* if you feel like it just let me know!

Once again, I thank you all for the help and your time, Will try harder next time, I swear!! *shakes fist*

michaelharris
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# 37   Posted: Oct 14 2008, 07:19 PM
er I mean \"BY making the middle...\"

michaelharris
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# 36   Posted: Oct 14 2008, 07:19 PM
great stuff! two complaints, everything was really crowded, there was no open spaces for the eye to rest. Two, back making the middle ground and background the same color, you eliminated the illusion of depth, I would suggest you make the background a lower chroma version of the middle ground color.

Fetus Man
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# 35   Posted: Oct 14 2008, 03:43 PM
i ended up having to take my girlfriend to the hospital again as well after i typed up my last comic.  Everythings rightly fucked up right now.

oh well,things are getting better slowly.  since im gonna submit it as a beyond battle im gonna make it flawless.

adios

squid
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# 34   Posted: Oct 14 2008, 07:52 AM
yeaah Perca, nice job ^w^

After CopporMouth started taunting HEAT on the building, though, honestly I thought Heat was just going to leave him tied up there.

Angie
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# 33   Posted: Oct 13 2008, 10:37 AM
Perca-It\'s good to see you back in the saddle! I liked your color scheme you went with here and the lineart is looking pretty nice. I think occasionally figures got lost in one another, like on the bottom of the first page all those VCPD officers blend into one another, I think putting some highlights into the blacks could have really helped with that. I wasn\'t a fan of how you did the clouds, I think it\'s because they\'re so jarring they bring all the focus to them in the panels they\'re in. Doing them in a tone other than white that was more subtle could have really helped. The only other thing I really noticed is the text layout, try to be careful when putting dialogue in your word bubbles. Other than that it was really solid, I really enjoyed it dude!

marinduquenio
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# 32   Posted: Oct 12 2008, 08:06 PM
aw perca! too bad its a default!!!!!! we better fight !

aribooboo
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# 31   Posted: Oct 12 2008, 09:13 AM
Perca, OH MY GOD, I just--..I hella--..I think--...OOHH never stop making comics woman! XD I just love the humor you put into it and you play off and make fun of cliches ( stupid steve hahaha). That was really clever! I never got bored of the dialouge and it ran smoothly for me. And you ended in a very good place! It was funny and suspenseful at the same time. I\'m really liking the textures you always add. The only problem was that the textures went over the metal frames towards the end, and it made it look like they were see through or weren\'t solid. But that\'s just a small thing. Personally, i liked the style you used for Espiral better, but i love this one too~ I love the thick and glossy-looking lines. All of it looks so clean! And i adore all of your little \"chibis\" ( for lack of a better word). They don\'t come out as cliche to me at all. I can\'t wait to see what comes next and one day...ONE DAY...we must battle =0=
okthankyoubyebye

Lucky Cypher
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# 30   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 07:49 PM
Perca!!! Awsome! You got me right away first page, first panel...I was laughing like crazy from beginning to the end. I don\'t really have anything negative to say about your thing except for one: The 5th page was \'WAY\' too overloaded of \"stain-like-clouds-smokish-thingies\". I felt it was just too much.

But heh, ya gave me a good time so it\'s almost top-notch for me^^

rabbitrabbit
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# 29   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 07:26 PM
OMG, Perca.  It took you forever but that was SO WORTH THE WAIT.  I loved every minute of it.  

Dimension
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# 28   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 03:17 PM
Perca- nice comic :D Good story and art, I really enjoyed the expressions and colors for this.The character art and background art was hard to tell apart sometimes, they kind of blended in. I\'d also suggest to make the blood a more redder color since the pinkish color you were using looked a bit odd. but other than that, this was awesome :3

great work!

Craqued
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# 27   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 02:03 PM
percaa i bloody love the way you caricatured coppermouth! hes sick! and HEAT is adorable, i like his beady eyes and giant self. this was really structured and cute, so yes very very COOL <3

Kon
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# 26   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 01:24 PM
perca I loved everything here. HUMOR AND LINE IS SUPER. COLORING TOO.

All my love, Kon

IWIHASCOE
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# 25   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 12:13 PM
Aw fetus, sorry about the sickness, man. Wish you all get better soon! Can\'t wait for your bb <3

King_Pong
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# 24   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 11:50 AM
NOoooooooooooooooooooo fetus man!

Perca, excellent comic.  I love your linework and sense of humor.

Fetus Man
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# 23   Posted: Oct 11 2008, 11:13 AM
fuck, i apologize.  My girlfriend got really sick again and we\'ve been in a living sick hell for a week.  All my pages are done however. I just gotta upload them soon.  

beyond battle i guess.

sorry again, your half was Bad fucking ass by the way, i\'ll leave a better comment later.  gotta go tend to the sickness now : (

IWIHASCOE
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# 22   Posted: Oct 9 2008, 05:20 PM
Ok, pages uploaded. I can chill now <3

Soundtrack for my side (since I forgot to put it on the thumbs/pages): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u3GmxgJeg48

Can\'t wait for yours, fetus! LET\'S MAKE THIS HAPPEN TOGETHER!!!!!! WHIIIIIIII!

jho
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# 21   Posted: Oct 9 2008, 01:55 PM
AUSTEN DONT DISAPPOINT ME

Kon
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# 20   Posted: Oct 6 2008, 10:53 AM
PERCA I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN

Monday
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# 19   Posted: Oct 6 2008, 10:03 AM
YUEEAAAHHHHH BOOOIIi

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 18   Posted: Oct 6 2008, 09:44 AM
Work perca, work *whips*

IWIHASCOE
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178 comments
# 17   Posted: Oct 6 2008, 09:05 AM
I\'m so late T_T

Kaelin
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# 16   Posted: Sep 30 2008, 01:05 PM
<3333 I SMELL AWESOME.

DimAmentia
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# 15   Posted: Sep 28 2008, 08:28 AM
whoa. whoa. WHOA.

Kon
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194 comments
# 14   Posted: Sep 28 2008, 07:27 AM
THIS IS HAPPENING.

justarhymes
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636 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 10:35 PM
oh my :o

marinduquenio
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# 12   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 08:21 PM
aaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnd perca is back! goodl uck guys!!!

aribooboo
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282 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 10:38 AM
YAY PERCA\'S BACK! =D

good luck to you both!

jho
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485 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 10:35 AM
fuck yeh

Craqued
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# 9   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 09:58 AM
oooh heeelll yea

IWIHASCOE
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178 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 08:13 PM
angieness: Oh I just noticed this lies on my birthday, so you bitches better make it awesome so I have a special birthday
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I won\'t let you down! *dances*

Dimension
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# 7   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:44 PM
:D

Angie
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# 6   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:27 PM
Oh I just noticed this lies on my birthday, so you bitches better make it awesome so I have a special birthday

ronin-soul
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# 5   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:26 PM
Heat, Heat, Heat!

IWIHASCOE
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178 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:26 PM
So.. nervoussss

Angie
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1937 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:26 PM
Don\'t disappoint!

Helftan
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68 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:26 PM
WIN IT ! NOW


cant wait

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 1   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 07:26 PM
FUCKING YEAH

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Oct 17th, 2008
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