Detective Spandex vs. Girl and dog

Detective Spandex vs. Girl and dog

Detective Spandex vs. Girl and dog

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luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 17   Posted: Aug 15 2008, 10:29 AM
Phillip Michael Chanter: DefSpade: Spend more time on your comics and less time goofing off in the DA chat room and playing as pretend koufuyo. If you\'re not gonna give us a finished comic or not gonna give us anything at all, then don\'t bother battling on void. Some people actually do put out the effort to draw your character ya know. If you plan on doing other things that isn\'t void related I highly suggest doing so..
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Don\'t go calling people out like that when you don\'t know what they\'re truly doing, Phil. Keep it minimal with the ridiculing.
He\'s never defaulted before if you noticed...

Fence, AWESOME lineart and tones. Wish you could\'ve finished, but at least you turned in something!

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 16   Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:37 AM
HAHAHAHAH fence that was a rather surprising cameo. your detective spandex is hot

the dog is adorable

neens
Approval Committee
259 comments
# 15   Posted: Aug 11 2008, 08:55 AM
HEY yea sorry it didn\'t get finished dudes! I\'ve been pretty busy with schoolwork andd since I don\'t have internet (minus when I sneak on at school) to constantly remind me it really got away from me, so yea my bad. I MAY go ahead and finish and submit as a BB? I thought this was gonna be kind\'ve a fun one so yea. and Spade, you poophead, YOU SHOULD DO THIS TOO. and thanks for the comments/crits thusfar!

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 05:29 PM
fence: yours seemed rather imcomplete.. in that sometimes even incomplete battles can work SORTA but yurs ended on an awkward note..

BUT it looked good till it got there.. i dug the look of it. the dog was scary..and its not really a crit but a pref.. i hate hand written dialogue.. it just clutters things in my opinion.. but one good side is you dont cover up as much art if youve got it laid out into the art.. was a decent start.. lets see the finish tho. :P

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 03:23 PM
Fun read Fence. Just give us more next time!!!
And Spade? Prepare for incessant wisecrackin\' on your mama.

-J

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 02:42 PM
Fence- I really like your style and the story was getting good too. I agree with Zsa..where is the rest of it? D:

really nice toning as well :3

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 02:33 PM
DefSpade: Spend more time on your comics and less time goofing off in the DA chat room and playing as pretend koufuyo. If you\'re not gonna give us a finished comic or not gonna give us anything at all, then don\'t bother battling on void. Some people actually do put out the effort to draw your character ya know. If you plan on doing other things that isn\'t void related I highly suggest doing so.




Fence: Not bad in the least, I gotta ask why this comic seems so unfinished in the end. Still a good story and great art from you nonetheless. Sorry spade crapped out on ya.

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 01:33 PM
FANECE, these pages looked really nice! The background line art on pages 2 and 3 seemed a little weak, though. I kind of wish we could see more background, too. But still, your pacing and dialogue is always lively and fun; could I have more Girl and Dog please!

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 9 2008, 12:20 PM
Fence ; ;
Looking top notch stuff. i don\'t really know what else to say, other than WHERE IS THE REST OF IT ;;
Amzing.

Spade: You should go less to the chat, you slacker >:I

Nakia
Artist
44 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 6 2008, 03:30 PM
ZOMG!!!!!

Lazereyes
Artist
128 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 28 2008, 09:42 AM
yes please

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 19 2008, 10:14 AM
Whoa! Ready\'n kickin

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 19 2008, 10:03 AM
:D

looking forward to this :)

Monday
Artist
934 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 19 2008, 07:32 AM
Snow hoes.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 18 2008, 10:53 PM
good luck you kids

DefSpade
Artist
27 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2008, 10:38 PM
WOH NOES

neens
Approval Committee
259 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2008, 10:08 PM
WUH OH

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Aug 15th, 2008
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