You\'re still gonna win dude.

Looks like I\'m going down.

ugh i hate two parter battles. but that\'s me

loofy- good stuff. it looked nice but was a little flat at times. i mean the backgrounds would have a lot of depth but the angle & the character in the panel were generally flat at times.

corny- nice work with the effects. loofy had better art over all but your story was more enjoyable

-J

Really good joint comic. Andrew, on the second page last panel the 2 girls are looking weird. The young ones posture looks out of place (I think it\'s \'cause her arms are too long and her legs are too short but I don\'t know much about anatomy) and the older ones hand looks broken. Other that that just work on the line width thing. It\'s nice to see you putting so much detail into your comic.
Corny, I loved the whole transform thing. Just keep it up I suppose. I have no complaints.

@andrewreturned: your inks were pretty nice! I think your line widths could be varied though.
ehhh...I\'m also not to sure if I liked the cross hatching you were using on some panels, but that\'s just me. Great first battle though!

@Corny: page 5 looks real good with that texture added to it :3 angie already covered what I was goingto say soooo nice work!

Andrew-this was very strong for a first battle, you have some very nice inking going on. I\'m also glad to see you devote a lot of time to the backgrounds. But occasionally the backgrounds felt like they were overpowering the figures when they shouldn\'t have been. You could benefit from line variation, especially in shots where characters are right up at the viewer, to show where they are. It may even help to incorporate solid blacks as shadows a little more frequently so the characters don\'t bleed into the background. You had some nice pacing and did a very good job on the expressions. The only other thing I really noticed were the figures occasionally looked stiff. But other than that, you did a very nice job.

Corny-You had some nice humor in here and your style as usual is very fun. You\'re still ignoring your backgrounds though dude! I would love to see you go all out on your backgrounds and push yourself. It also looked as if you were having some difficulties with hands in some panels, especially the third on the 4th page. Other than that I enjoyed it, I just want to see you spend more time on your comics in the future.

that was hilarious good two sided story !

amazing read. i was all into reading it and forgot to look at it with skeptic eyes
and stuff so i actually just liked had no gripes with it.

perhaps i come back another day with some harsh critics or something

UPLOADED. WITH 4 HOURS TO SPARE!

UPLOADED

*squeal* Twerp n\' Squert are everywheres!
And finally we get to see Loofy in action ~ good luck both of yas

Yeah I know, I hope I don\'t screw up. That\'d suck.

AT FUKKEN LAST

THIS HAS AWESOME WRITTEN ALL OVER IT!

good luck to you on your first battle andrewreturned :3

YES IT DOES! SO FOUL AND FAIR A DAY I HAVE NOT SEEN!

OH MY GOD

SO IT BEGINS.