Chrimnon vs. Nameless

Chrimnon vs. Nameless

Chrimnon vs. Nameless

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1049 points
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Caanan02
Artist
73 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 22 2008, 07:02 AM
Thanx Josh for the comment man, means a lot.  Yeah Nj had mad potential and he\'s def. one to beat here on void.  It was a pleasure to through pencils with him, and I\'m sure it won\'t be our last. Again hat\'s off to you NJ.  You brought it big time.  

Be blessed



JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 21 2008, 05:08 PM
Caanan:

Awesome, high quality comic, the layouts and storytelling were especially excellent.
Your dialogue font could have looked more handwritten for my taste, and proofread, last page: \"..i have encountered in a decades\". 4th panel page 1 and 1st panel page 2 had the best use of the \"stock\" backgrounds. In these panels they read as cohesive components of the art, where in other panels there is a more distinct separation of techniques.
This was incredibly entertaining and well designed, you have a real command of the medium. I look forward to Chrimnon\'s next fight!

Njh:

Your half was very good quality also, especially nameless, he looks incredibly badass. Some of the paneling was awkward, like you did the drawings first and then composed them as panels..I\'m not sure but I think you could benefit from making your panel formats part of your drawing. Just put some more time into your panelling, The visual storytelling is clear but the panel composition isn\'t as pro looking as most of your drawings. Page 4 your starting to do this, makes the action much more dramatic. I always look forward to nameless battles, your drawing is a joy to look at.

These were both very impressive, but I gotta give it to Caanan for more dynamic storytelling and consistent art.

Caanan02
Artist
73 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 18 2008, 11:58 AM
Thanks fer the feedback C-r-III-er.  Chrimnon doesn\'t have a haven as to where he battle.  In this case it was atop a water tower in void.  Nothing specific.  It\'s suppose to have a random feel with each battle.  It may take place in the woods, depending on who he fights.

c-r-ill-er
101 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 18 2008, 10:42 AM
Both comics are amazing and both quality was out standing but there were little things that could have ben fixed
NJ your comic was amazing and your getting better with time but there was something\'s that really didn\'t make it, the sign on Chrimnon chest wasn\'t there. And more at the end i feel like you didn\'t take as much time like you did at the start.
Caanan2 Well done your comic was just as amazing as well but there to was a little off beat jump in yours. I understand that Chrimnon is the \"iron hand\" but last battle was toking place in the sub ways now out of water i just think you are jump sense way to fast but thats just me.
I enjoyed and loved both of your comics and I can\'t wait to see your next battles here on Void check your guy on the flip

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 16 2008, 08:08 PM
caanan2, i liked the messy linework, looked like old japanese brush work in some spots. i think you should be a little more conservative with the atmospheric/depth of field blurring/opacity stuff some. but elements like the squarer balloons, digital fonts, & stock photo backgrounds took away from the rest of the line work. but all around nice.

njhinesjr, it looked like you rushed anatomy & perspective in a few parts, but i was glad to see darker line work. at least darker than last time around. the anchorperson bit seemed kind of extraneous to the rest of the story. i\'d say work better quality into fewer pages rather than spreading it thin over a bunch of pages.

but equally good work you guys! good stuff!

-J

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 16 2008, 01:17 PM
NJ- Your art is always cool, but your preportions where kinda all over the place. The hand in Page 3 Panel 2 looks so tiny, like a baby holding giant sunglasses.

Caanan- Amazing! Man, just amazing.

Caanan02
Artist
73 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 15 2008, 07:01 AM
Thanx folks for the feedback as well as the kinda words.  I only hope to get better with the tablet.  Still takes some getting use too.

be blessed


justarhymes
Web Dev
637 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 15 2008, 06:53 AM
Caan:  Man, it looked great.  Even with a lot of the short cuts you took.  I must say, though, those photo stock (or were they tones?) backgrounds got really distracting.  As far as problems with the actual art, well, I didn\'t really see any.  Though, some of the blacks could have been darker and it could have been cleaned up more, especially page 3.  Also, I wasn\'t a huge fan of the font you used for the sound effects either.  But overall, this comic was real classy.

NJ:  Yours also looks great.  There was a couple problems with the art that I noticed.  One, the news reporter sometimes looked a little manly in the face, and two, the panel where she looks in the rear view mirror seems a bit unrealistic.  That portion of her head wouldn\'t fill up the whole mirror.  The story reminded me a lot of the Ninja Turtles.  Not that that\'s a bad thing.  Though, the narration was a little weak at points.

saintpio
Artist
71 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 15 2008, 05:20 AM
Had to give it to Caan. Don\'t get me wrong, yours was obviously really good too NJ, but it just wasn\'t as amazing as Caan\'s. The pictures were superb and it was really entertaining.

drawdan
Artist
312 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 14 2008, 07:44 PM
NJ...your best batlle yet i think. Your story telling is getting stronger but your quality is not consistant, a problem I have as well. Nice flow with the joirnalist thing, but you didnt explore Chimeron\'s charter very much beyond his fighting.

Cann- welcome back man, I love the energy in your work. I loved your action sequences and dynamic angles. Your quality was very high, its nice to see a black and white entry with alot of depth.

I gave cann the edge in my vote based on consistant quality and  entertainment but great match up for both of you.

Lucky Cypher
31 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 14 2008, 05:55 PM
Wow...SWEET!

Awsome battle you guys!

Nij: Loved it! Ya made my day man! There\'s just a little thingy: some panels lost its consistency compared to others. That\'s all.

Caan: I liked it, but there were some parts that looked more skechy and blurry...

It was pretty tight in my opinion, BUT I gotta give the vote to someone and it goes to Nijhinesjr for having blown me away.

Caanan02
Artist
73 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 14 2008, 04:47 PM
wow Nj!  You brought it man.  Loved the flow, and you captured Chrims mystery perfectly at the end.  This was pretty challenging for me.  Doin all with Wacom was INSANE!!! But I enjoyed it.

be blessed folks.  Feels good to fight once more.


Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 21 2008, 06:39 PM
Caanan you bastard. You LUCKY i owe Caleb. Cuz you KNOW an 8ft woman was gonna come after you, hahahahaha.

i\'m gonna be biased in this match. Against the both of you....
..wait that don\'t make any sence. Just show me the goods.

Voodoo
Artist
18 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 21 2008, 06:20 PM
Caanan? Whats the reason of your return? I gotsta know. Good choice of an opponent.

Lucky Cypher
31 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 20 2008, 09:13 PM
Me too!! I want...gotta love the pencils^^

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 17 2008, 11:07 AM
now this is what void needed,caanan u always wow me with ya pencils and njh u been growing to be a fave of mines with ur raw lines as well...this should be nothing less of hot

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 16 2008, 01:37 AM
YES. YES. THIS IS WHAT I WANT.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 15 2008, 06:52 PM
Woa, dreaded pencils battle

drawdan
Artist
312 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 15 2008, 05:24 PM
Hey Cann..sorry I missed your challenge-kick it to me again when your ready. Good luck with nameless, looking  foward to the fight..it should be a good one

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Apr 21st, 2008
Votes Cast: 40
Page Views: 2059
Winner: Caanan02
 

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