Dr. Fabulous vs. Danielle

Dr. Fabulous vs. Danielle

Dr. Fabulous vs. Danielle

50.3%
876 points
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Crit level: No preference


49.7%
864 points
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The Pacifier
Artist
48 comments
# 19   Posted: Mar 12 2008, 08:04 PM
Glad to see media came out well
XD=crit time
let me start by sayin that these were both great comics and they had me laugh

Neo: im really happy to see that your putting more detail into your pictures cause it makes your images fit your dialog  which made me appreciate everything a whole lot more.
as always u made me laugh which for me is always good,but it seemed like a huge switch for you. kind of like you went straight from comedy to a serious, more dramatic situation.

Rofl: This is the first time ive actually read one of your comics and im kind of impressed.
but the first page leading me on thinking the whole thing was in color was kind of a let down.
but one thing that bothered me as i read it is the lines on the bricks of the background.
it seemed to distract me from what i was actually suppose  paying attention to.
to be blunt it was fun to read and kept my attention
*cept for the bricks*XD

My vote went towards danielle for quality and entertainment



JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 18   Posted: Mar 12 2008, 04:22 PM
Pretty damn close.

Rofl: cool idea having Fab teach Danielle\'s class, and some funny ass dialougue here n there.
Great evil snake face on page 4! Last page didn\'t do much for me, made me laugh, but didn\'t see how it contributed to your battle. Inks seem a little lazy here and there, but you were at FUCKIN DISNEYWORLD!! so what do I know. Think you could benefit from some kind of structure system to keep your characters more consistent, for example a grouping of simple shapes that make up your characters\' basic bulk, then add the details and whatnot to that.  Might be easier than having to \"start from scratch\" with each drawing.

Danielle:  I agree with Kuro, while this comic was cleaner than your last, Something about the last one was much more charming, I\'d like to see more of that, but maybe with less intense colors. This is pretty good and consistent quality-wise, but seems more formulaic, less \"you\" than the media battle. Good job showing the sandworm fight, i wasn\'t confused for all that was going on in just a few panels. Pretty good, legible read, felt mostly resolved(a little quickly tho). Study more human anatomy, and birds while you\'re at it.

Both were entertaining.
Gave Danielle the edge for more consistent quality and story structure

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 12 2008, 10:22 AM
\'omigosh!\'
the colors on the first page established how much of a tease doc fab is hahaha draw more dynamic backgrounds is my only crit, i laughed my ass off reading that side of it. but seeing as the victor of a contest (ie like the superbowl) often heads to disney after said contest (rather in the middle of the story, where would they go now if they win?! (A SLAUGHTERFACE MATCH WOULD HAVE BEEN THE PERFECT FOLLOW UP)

ultimately, there wasn\'t much of anything wrong on the danielle side of things, but the simpler, sillier comic just worked better for me. the art seemed a little generic & the way you situated the word balloons didn\'t make a lot of sense for me. consider them when you\'re doing your layouts before hand

-J

Airlight
Artist
136 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 11 2008, 10:24 PM
I think my votes were even on this one, each had their pros and cons! Nicely done you two.

RoflQu- Well what can I say, I already told you this was really funny over AIM. Bill Nye rocks, and so does Dr Fabulous. It would have been nice to see this thing in full color, but eh, you were in Disney World so I\'m not gonna hold you up against that, since what was finished already works for me. You didn\'t give Danielle much of a fighting chance in the fray though, but her introduction made me laugh. The Disney World bit made me laugh.. and the Cog and James bit at the end. I have no trouble reading your linewidths in your art, personally, I could tell the difference between char and bg, but maybe straighten up the written text a bit, for better readability? Good job Rofl.

NeoIcarus - This was a cool story, and I enjoyed how you set up everything here with the plot. It was awesome how you linearted and inked everything, but as clean as the lines are, character and BG was harder to distinguish because I guess there isn\'t that much variation inbetween them. Like Angie mentioned I guess additional detail would be cool to see in your work, it could help the separation factor. The action bits were nicely pulled off, and I think everyone I was familiar with was generally in character, so good work, keep it up!

Enef
Artist
36 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 11 2008, 05:54 PM
I really enjoyed the art and story in this one, NeoIcarus, it\'s mucho improved over the Media battle!

Nice work both sides.

echeesekid
Probation
1 comment
# 14   Posted: Mar 11 2008, 03:16 PM
Roflqu made a bill nye joke he wins.
i didnt like neo\'s because she PUNCHES Dr. fabulous.
thats just wrong WRONG

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 10 2008, 07:16 PM
Rofl-I really enjoyed your story and your comic cracked me up! I do think that you could spend some more time on your backgrounds, they were looking pretty rushed in some areas. You should also be careful about the size of your text, there were times I had a hard time reading what the characters were saying. I think you should also be careful with the textures, try to make them not so overpowering, it\'s difficult to make them work on just lineart. The only other thing I noticed was the pacing was kind of off in the very end since it seemed to cut through really fast.Other than that I really enjoyed your battle, keep it up dude!

Neoicarus-I think you really improved on your lineart, I would like to see you go further and try to get more detailed in the future. It also may have helped to give a brief introduction as to what was going on, it took me a minute to realize what was going on storywise. The only other thing that really bothered me was page 8 you seemed to kind of really stretch out her running and the last panel would have probably worked a bit better with a further out shot. But other than that it was a good comic, I\'m glad to see you taking more time on your stuff and you\'ve improved!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 7 2008, 04:30 PM
Yeah, those pages didn\'t get any prettier. Sorry guys, Disney World took up too much of my time.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 4 2008, 01:05 PM
Scratch both those messages. I\'m willing to pay 10 dollars a night for you bastards.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 4 2008, 08:36 AM
You\'re going to have to use the pages he sent the first time, he won\'t be able to submite new ones.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 4 2008, 08:35 AM
Those pages aren\'t getting any prettier. RoflQu has no internet access anywhere, he\'s in Disney World.

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 3 2008, 06:02 AM
extension was granted....both artists get one week extra....now RolfQu can make those pages pretty

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 29 2008, 04:49 PM
Submitted. Didn\'t get to color all the way. Sorry Kids.

NeoIcarus
Artist
115 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 28 2008, 02:53 PM
Sorry RoflQu, but my comp got all virus-y. I had to request an extension.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 10 2008, 06:06 PM
WE\'RE PAST THAT. THAT\'S OLD NEWS. DR. FABULOUS VS. DANIELLE IS ALL THE RAGE NOW.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 10 2008, 04:43 PM
What happened to the fight with Media?

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 9 2008, 12:34 PM
You\'d better treat her right, RoflQu.  8(

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 8 2008, 04:46 AM
LET\'S DO THIS.

NeoIcarus
Artist
115 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 8 2008, 04:40 AM
Thanks for the battle, Rofl. I\'ve been itching to draw another one for like a week.

Now for the fanciest tea party this site has ever seen!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Mar 17th, 2008
Votes Cast: 35
Page Views: 2440
Winner: E.W. Schneider
 

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