Detective Spandex vs. Tammy & Sammy

Detective Spandex vs. Tammy & Sammy

Detective Spandex vs. Tammy & Sammy

48.7%
444 points
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by Corny

51.3%
468 points
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rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 19 2008, 11:15 AM
Yeep!  I\'m always late with my \"whee!  KILLER KATKA KAMEO!!\" comments!   D:  

Rone Rivendale
Artist
89 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 3 2008, 07:56 PM
IMO Corny has run away with this one. The art is better (and it\'s colored). The humor was awesome. Not the most creative thing to copy a tv show but it was so funny that I didn\'t really care.

Def, you kinda shot yourself in the foot by not having an ending. I almost expected Corny\'s entry to be \"part 2\" from the way your last page ended and was dissapointed.

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 2 2008, 05:56 PM
RoflQu: Yeah, the page cut just sorta happened. I was kind of hurrying to get that page colored and finished. And, I think I might stick with solid colors from now on... much easier, plus it actually looks better than what I normally do (atleast I think so)

Angie: Thanks Angie. I actually /tried/ with my backgrounds this time XD. I agree with you on the thickness. I usually only use a thicker pen to outline characters. I use a thinner pen on backgrounds to differentiate, but I guess using a thicker pen on the green chair would have made it look nice. Just didn\'t think of it.
Also, the quick ending was intentional. I had only a few days left, and I had very little patience left. A lot of my battles could do with an extra page, but hey. I\'m one with a short attention span.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 2 2008, 05:07 PM
DefSpade-dammit dude, stop killing me with your unfinishedness!!!!!!!! You keep sucking me in but then you\'re like NO ANGIE NOT FOR YOU and don\'t finish. Your anatomy is improving but it still has a way\'s to go. There was something kind of odd about the fullbody pic of Squert on page 1. I would really like to see you use digital fonts, I know you don\'t like it but I like being able to easily read stuff >: I Your backgrounds were looking pretty shaky linewise in comparison to the figures, so that\'s something you should work on in your next comic. I thought the story was pretty fun it\'s just a shame you had to break my heart and not finish it.

Corny-I think you\'re starting to get more confident with your comics. I think you did a very nice job with the humor and you\'re getting much better with your backgrounds. I would like to see you work on your linewidths a bit more, on page 2 the furniture could have benefited a lot from some thicker lines to establish where they are in the room. I think the pacing could have used some work, Spandex getting busted and thrown out the window seemed to happen in a very short amount of time. Another page might have helped slow it down a bit and helped establish why Katka was there or at least slow down her introduction. The comic was a lot of fun and I look forward to seeing what you do in the future.

justarhymes
Web Dev
637 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 2 2008, 03:04 PM
Best UDT battle so far.  Even if it isn\'t technically one.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 2 2008, 01:53 PM
Expect a challenge soon, Spade. You and me are going to finish this story, TOGETHER. Tourney crashing round 2 will go off without a hitch. I liked the battle field design and I\'m curious to see how it ends. . . TOGETHER.

Corny - I liked it for the most part, but the final page as that VERY odd cut off, no white space no nothing. What happened there? It struck me as kind of odd to see that one black and red eye too, but overall, this was pretty decent, I really liked the solid colors for some reason, it fit.

DefSpade
Artist
27 comments
# 13   Posted: Jan 29 2008, 04:46 PM
:I

Uploaded what i have, even though i do have 5 more pages but those are sloppy messy roughs full of awesome jawsome action, but eh... when i find time ill upload a complete BB or something to compensate for my slackjob of a crash entry.

Airlight
Artist
136 comments
# 12   Posted: Jan 29 2008, 03:55 PM
Can\'t wait to see this one! C\'mon Defspade!

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 28 2008, 05:56 PM
Uploaded!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 25 2008, 04:06 PM
Man, this battle looks all illegal. Please give it your best you guys!

Mokuu
Artist
85 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 18 2008, 10:52 AM
The battle between these characters is officially, Pedobear approved.

Monday
Artist
934 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 17 2008, 04:15 PM
Is that sum tourney crashing ??

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 16 2008, 10:54 AM
YOU\'LL RUE THE DAY YOU CRASHED MY TOURNAMENT.

Powerz
Artist
107 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 16 2008, 06:51 AM
this line up scares me.
 don\'t do et def! KEEP IT LEGAL!!!

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 15 2008, 11:01 PM
Show that gumshoe what it means to be in love!  

...wait.  

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1084 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 15 2008, 09:38 PM
DOOOO EEET! :D
Blow us outta the water baby

DefSpade
Artist
27 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 15 2008, 06:36 PM
YES CRASH THIS TOURNY!!!

Lazereyes
Artist
128 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 15 2008, 06:07 PM
:O
awesome

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 15 2008, 05:30 PM
CRASH THE TOURNEY

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Feb 9th, 2008
Votes Cast: 22
Page Views: 1650
Winner: Corny
 

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