Ayumi vs. Epsilon

Ayumi vs. Epsilon

Ayumi vs. Epsilon

by Marley

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vision
Artist
27 comments
# 10  
FACT: The phrase, \"Play time is over\" was used twice in the fights of Crazybee vs. Gideon and SlasherX vs. Joe Diesel during the first round of VOID Tournament 1

Gauge
Artist
10 comments
# 9  
playtime is over SHOULD be the VOID motto.  Nice stuff though,  I agree with the action poses comment though.  try sketching out the gestures of people in motion in real life.  it\'ll help

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 8  
Great work.
No entry from Epsilon sheesh. Hmm, well you didn't draw these for nothing, got me entertained at least.

Keep it up.

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 7  
thanks guys..... yeah there were some panels that were really bugging me in that one.. thanks for the advice Jar =) .. oh and the reason I didn\'t Ayumi\'s powers against jessie was because the idea kind of flew into my head after my battle with her... thanks guys!! I\'m trying really hard! =)

the kid
Artist
31 comments
# 6  
nice stuff homes.  i like the fact that she goes all shin akuma like.  how she didn\'t do that agents jessie

Jed
SkullBob HappyPants
13 comments
# 5  
Haha..."playtime is over" should be the VOID motto.
Lovely stuff.

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 4  
Ayumi great story progression.  Character development is always a guaranteed way to kick those creativity and entertainment scores up in my book!  Epsilon, I\'m still waiting to see some of your stuff in sequentials.  I really like your character!

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 3  
There\'ve only been a few times where I\'m surprised by how much story someone can fit into so few pages... this is one of those times.  Very Nice!

jar
Artist
63 comments
# 2  
AYUMI - great story!  I want to read more :)

Also, take sometime practice during your downtime to develop more "action" poses.  It will all pay off :)  Keep up the good work!

hewhoisknot
Artist
7 comments
# 1  
ah marley, now i see what you mean...

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Sep 5th, 2003
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