Centipete vs. Lydon Hsiao

Centipete vs. Lydon Hsiao

Centipete vs. Lydon Hsiao

by Hiemie

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by Yosai

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ThorHugs
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# 31   Posted: Oct 16 2007, 08:08 PM
Man, Yos I feel bad for you. Your luck isn\'t so great lately. I hope it picks up for you, soon. (loved your half, by the way! It was hot. You should put it up as a BB).

Hiemie: Great job. Lots has been said already. My only gripe is that I would have liked to see more Lydon in it! Like everyone else, I loved the colors. I especially like the way you handled the backgrounds with the flat green.

neens
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# 30   Posted: Oct 14 2007, 12:28 AM
okay let\'s see..
another charming Pete battle!
Colours, as mentioned, were nice, only nitpick about that is the unshaded whites. Panels, maybe a little straightening, and the word bubble thing isn\'t so great I have to agree. and I notice a lack of interesting shots, I know they\'re basically standing around talking BUT there are plenty of ways to spice that up. as for the actual figures, they\'re looking better but of course could use tightening, especially hands I think. other than that, just little nitpicks like maybe neater handwriting, or maybe upping contrast to make the blacks stand out more.

keep it up though, your battles are still among my favorites, and I always look forward to them!

Monday
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# 29   Posted: Oct 13 2007, 11:47 PM
Well I found this a rather entertaining lite read without having too much burden of a story to go on.  The color selection in this was easy on the eyes and had decent depth. Humor is here with your classic slice of life occurences. For the time being; your entry with Mjolner is still the best one-

Style and anatomy is working in tandem with this one so continue with this direction. Easy read overall. Good job.


squid
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# 28   Posted: Oct 11 2007, 10:54 AM
I know what spinoza was saying. On page 3, the open bubbles are on top of each other and I started to read them out of order. Like, there\'s panel 1 \"Whaha.. good joke\" and then below that is panel 4 \"It\'s Lydon..\" etc., which made my eyes want to go from panel 1 to panel 4.. and stuff. gods I know I can\'t talk but you know what I mean? So it would have been nice if there had been a line or something to let you know where the top panels end.. or the bubbles in panels 4, 5, and 6 could perhaps have been at the bottom of the panels instead of on top.
But that was the only place I had a problem following the panels.
Anyway...Heimie I enjoyed your comic. The dialogue felt natural and was very amusing. Plus I liked your inks and colors but that\'s already been said.

Duredhel
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# 27   Posted: Oct 11 2007, 09:20 AM
I really do hope the error with Yos\'s side is rectified :( it would be a real lack of responsability otherwise. In any case I\'m gonna do the same as most other people are (hopefully) doing and withhold my vote till the error is fixed.

jho
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# 26   Posted: Oct 11 2007, 07:38 AM
just for future battles for anyone, never, ever, ever upload your stuffs a cinch before deadline. it always causes problems. Plan your time management well, peeps!

spinzoa
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# 25   Posted: Oct 11 2007, 03:59 AM
Until I can be certain that Wei or someone will actually uploading Yosai\'s battle, I won\'t be voting, but man. They honestly should. If they have done that for two people already(?), then I won\'t see why they won\'t do that for you, Yosai. From what I\'ve heard, you\'ve done your best in your comic, and you\'ve actually submitted on time. The errors made by this website, or whatever, should not have to be your responsibility; it just won\'t be fair and damn it all, I REALLY wanted to see what Lydon\'s up to now.

As for Hiemie, I adored that coloring you did. It\'s really simple, which keeps the entire page flow and made things a lot more easier to see what\'s going on. I actually chuckled at the humor you\'ve shown, and you drew Lydon pretty well. The only problem I had were the speech \"bubbles\" though. It\'s a really neat idea to have them merge with the ....what are those called. \"outside of the panel box\", but I think it would be better if you could actually make them a lot neater. I\'m not saying it\'s confusing overall, but sometimes I did lose my place, in a way which..I can\'t explain hooow. [strokes mustache at such mystery]

But it was a great comic, Himie, as usual.

rabbitrabbit
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# 24   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 11:05 PM
Okay, so we know where the files are.  

........so why isn\'t Yosai\'s side up yet???  >:(  

Hiemie
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# 23   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 10:57 PM
I REALLY hope they put up Yosai\'s side. It\'s very pretty. EXTREMELY pretty actually.

Bittermause
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# 22   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 08:38 PM
Hiemie, this was a lovely pleasure to read. I admired the combination of oranges, greens and browns and the way you displayed them mended together quite well. Of course, I always chortle at your Twin Peaks/David Lynch references.

Yosai, dude I hope they grace you an exception for this. I know they did it for Pye for the Hiemie vs Doc Pye fight, so I don\'t see why they can\'t cut you a little slack either. Just have to wait and see I guess, but it still sucks that your entry didn\'t get uploaded on time.

Silver S
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# 21   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 06:43 PM
Wow, pretty cool stuff. I like the two color scheme, it works well with this sort of tight shot panel work. Your character reminds me of a Muppet, and that is amusing in and of itself. I\'m impressed you can get a pretty wide range of expression out of him considering his design is rather simple.

Disappointed to see there\'s no pages up for Yosai but it sounds like there were some technical issues rather than missing a deadline...

Kotori Ky
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# 20   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 04:04 PM
Same. I know she put it in on time because she was going to have me check the grammar and last moment let me know she couldn\'t due to submitting it to be on time. Foul. It wouldn\'t be the first time the site has not gotten submitted pages, but if the person doesn\'t get an error, how do they know to email pages until they see this? :\\ It isn\'t like this kind of error is new, either. I know the site is going through some changes, as well, so I\'m not surprised something may have happened error-wise. But to say she didn\'t submit, when she had finished pages in on time, all because of a site error is low.

Monday
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# 19   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 03:21 PM
yeah I read Yosai\'s half I thought she uploaded it : \\

Yosai
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# 18   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 02:45 PM
I have it on rar, just sent to wei, did not upload I guess. no idea. I  think I ramble in the email. too fucking tired. very sorry for always causing problems. kotori and powerz haver the rar file.

Qyzex
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# 17   Posted: Oct 10 2007, 01:53 PM
aww man, too bad Yosai. :/

anyways,

Hiemie, excellent work. I thoroughly enjoyed it! I actually liked the limited colors, and the way you did them worked. awesome job. I was laughing quite a bit.

Hiemie
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# 16   Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:30 PM
Uploaded. I\'ve never done a fight in limited pallete or in landscape.

Hope you enjoy it.

Kozispoon
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# 15   Posted: Oct 7 2007, 03:00 AM
oh oh OH. Hiemie is back in ACTION. D: 3 days left!!

The awesome. It is coming.

PoodleAfro
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# 14   Posted: Sep 28 2007, 10:22 AM
CENTIPETE IS BACK?! YESSSS!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THIS BATTLE!!1one *is a n00b*

QtRNevermore
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# 13   Posted: Sep 28 2007, 09:08 AM
wow...unexpected awesomeness?

rabbitrabbit
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334 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 27 2007, 09:40 PM
<:D

IWIHASCOE
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# 11   Posted: Sep 27 2007, 05:00 PM
!!!! Awesome! Can\'t wait!

oh shada
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# 10   Posted: Sep 27 2007, 03:12 AM
INTERESTING

Red
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# 9   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 08:54 PM
wowowow! awesome, can\'t wait to see this one!

Yosai
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# 8   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 02:53 PM
I\'m worried about what kind of battle you guys think this will be >_>;

Molotov
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# 7   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 02:23 PM
bootbutt!

spinzoa
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# 6   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 09:40 AM
Yar, yar, Lydon! Yosai, I\'m excited.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 5   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 08:39 AM
Fistfuck action!

Bittermause
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# 4   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 07:00 AM
sweet sweet police brutality
mmmmhmmm!

Ryuartyi
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# 3   Posted: Sep 26 2007, 03:33 AM
NIIIIIIIIIIIIICE

Monday
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# 2   Posted: Sep 25 2007, 11:39 PM
BREWWWWWW TALLY TEAAAA

Qyzex
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670 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 25 2007, 11:38 PM
POLICE BATTLE.

good luck!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Oct 17th, 2007
Votes Cast: 31
Page Views: 731
Winner: Hiemie
 

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