Thanks guys for your C and C\'s!

I noticed lately that a few people seem to dig my B&W work than my colors, so I\'m gonna go ahead and start working more towards refining my inking and save coloring for later. ( well, I\'ll be experimenting with monochromatics too )

I\'ve always had this wierd thing about dialogue too, like if I don\'t have someone be straight forward enough verbally then no one would understand the comic physically. ( does...that make sense? ) But I\'ll definetly work on that, as well as refining backgrounds.

Rabbitrabbit, again it was an awesome pleasure doing battle with you. Let\'s hope we can make that three way happen someday. (digital bro-grabs )

Thanks for the crits.  I\'m glad people enjoyed it, but it doesn\'t change the fact that this is a step backwards from my last fight.  

Next time.  

I was going to wait until the last minute to comment, since...I really never have anything quite useful or intelligent to say, but I can\'t wait.

Mause: I really liked your comic, as always, but I\'m afraid that maybe I\'m biased. I went through other\'s critique to see if I can catch anything that I might have missed on, story wise, but I still like your comic. Now, the only problem I see is the obvious, which is the fact that it wasn\'t finished, and maybe a little rushed. I clearly understand all the problems you had though, since I was there when you little-girl-whined about your legs (hahahahahahhaha), and all that awful life-happenings that was gnawing at you, and I can relate. So this will be hard for me to judge on art-wise. Also I\'m sure you remember when I made one comment about the body of Kat in one panel, where there was a moon and she was still of a shadowy figure...well. That can be easily fixed, and you even knew it was a little off.

Overall, I loved your comic once again, and I just can\'t wait to battle Eliza. It will be solid. You always have one of the best story telling I see in VOID which never lacks a good humor or two. JOSEPH G. APPROVES.

Rabbit: Haha, even though your side and Mause\'s side didn\'t really connect all too smoothly, it was no biggie for me. I think your comic was one of the few comics out in VOID that actually made me want MORE pages to read. Seriously.....that...your humor is the kind I love. Every detail in mockery of that shop and shoppers made me keen for details, just so I can laugh like a retard in that, \"dur hur hur.....\'Chinese Accents\'....\" way. OH! And this might not be something of significance, but it mattered to me: when Kat was cooking in the kitchen, I loved how you actually made her hair tied up. How realistic is that.

....anyway. For my critique though, I just wish I could\'ve seen better inking. Not that your inking was bad (oh my god better than me, in fact), I think you can improve a lot in terms of smoother, cleaner lines. I don\'t know hooooowww, but you just. Could. ...

GAYNYWAYS, this battle was spectacular. You two are just wholesome. Part of my complete breakfast. Thanks!

waaahhhhhh

Kat gets my vote… just cause I really dig the style. I feel like its one of the rare styles that doesn’t look like night and day when colored or not; so it’s cool to see something that can stand on its own line strength. Also the reconciliation part of the storyline you did was pretty sweet. I like that Eliza still has some bloodlust issues to deal with, and how you showed that was cool.

Bittermause I feel like your pages were pretty strong too, but the story was too straight forward “We fight but we don’t want to because of some mix-up” Your creativity in terms of fight sequences were great but pages without color looked lacking in backgrounds and points of reference. Still, the fight sequence was total fire so keep it up.

All in all a real interesting and entertaining fight. Look forward to more!

Bittermause: I admit I actually find your pencils more alive and expressive than I do your colors, but then again I\'m partial to black and white comics. Liked the story, thought it was a good display of both characters and what they can each do, nice contrast to the part two of the battle.

Rabbit Rabbit: Haha, I love little additions to comics like \"shopping noises\" and the parodies off of Walmart and the interlude of real life. This half of the battle made me laugh and that\'s always a top priority to me when I look at these things (if there\'s humour at all, that is...some comics are obviously Serious. Capital S serious).

Overall I think it would have been a better battle if you\'d both chosen to take the same storyline and each do your own version instead of splitting it in half, it makes it more difficult to judge when they\'re not really tackling the same plot. Just my two pennies.

I thought they both fucking good. I like those 2-part stories when artists battle eachother.

... Fuck, I gotta finish my fighter soon.                                                        I like boobs!!!

Sweet read!

Bitter: I loved your lines! I overall dig the whole part, while a problem I\'d mention is that you add too much text in few panels, while you have the most part of the story with few speech.
Way to go!

Rabbit: >: I
I wonder what you did there, I think the art was really downgraded from last battle.. lack of color or even a toning (with a few exceptions), and while you had some damn detailed panels (my fav is the one with the food!), most of them were a bit rushed.

this was totally badass. I love you guy\'s characters <3

Okay, I guess it\'s NOT a two-parter.  XD  

Kind of expected that... we didn\'t pore over every detail of the storyline, it was just a general \"You end here, and I\'ll kinda start here\" thang.  Oh well, continuity in Void is, um, a very FLUID thing.  

And like I thought, Bim, your work is gorgeous and you had nothing to worry about.  It looked like you had a lot of fun, and the humor was amazing!  Everything looks sparkly for me.  

As for my side... I\'m quite thoroughly disappointed in myself, really.  

Hey you two- congratulations on a great match!

All in all I think you two did beautifully- while the continuation of part one to part 2 didn\'t exactly  make sense to me (in mause\'s they become buddies and in the begining of Rabbits she\'s pushed to the floor...?), the next page seemed to pick up where part one left off and the story progressed rather well.

Rabbitx2- I adore all the little extras and details you put in- the artists commentary, the sudden little stint of seeing how this battle had you holed up in your room, the AWESOME fact that the girls were watching A Mimi the Mime cartoon on the telly <3 I just like that even with your opponent staging the fight in part one, yours was just as engaging and interesting. I really dug your paneling in this one- you got really creative!Oh, and did I mention you draw tasty food? *_* Totally want Katka to cook for me!

Bittermause- Beautiful work. While I\'m sure some will say you didn\'t color it all, I honestly didn\'t mind the change from color to black and white. It didn\'t affect the story and the was still just as good. I particularly enjoyed your attention to detail on that mask as well as the black and white panel of her wet- for a panel with no color, even if I hadn\'t seen her slip and fall in, I could tell Eliza was soaked.

I never liked two parters because I always have a tough time deciding which part of the story I prefer I enjoyed the whole story...grah. This\'ll be a close vote!

Bout time these battles got posted!
Oh my god, Rabbit...be happy we\'re not neighbors. I\'d be banging your doorbell and giving you a painful happy bro-grab. Between you and me, you\'ve put in the most merit to this.
Granted some parts of mine stumbled in transition ( I actually was going to mention about the mask getting fixed, but that\'s only a minor issue. ) but with two parters like that it can be challenging, and it was our first ones.
    Thank you so much for helping transition her backstory, as well as explaining Katka\'s a little more.
   haahahaha and Yess Cola will be forever known as the drink of the gods! ( and a horrible flying stimulant )

It\'s killing me, just waiting for this battle to be loade-...I can\'t believe you two are still commenting here HAHAH losers! [gets bunch of hobo friends to laugh at you from rotting soda-can house]

*steals your couch and commences the watching of a useless Golden Girls marathon while comics proceed to update. *

...

*chomps at bit*

UPLOADED.  

I am going to take SUCH a nap...

Uploaded with only 9 hours to spare.
 Good god I could\'ve done so much more with this. SO MUCH!  >:
Rabbitrabbit, I hope you enjoy this. I can\'t wait for yours to show too.  

Thank you sir!

You\'re a prince, Wei.  

extension requested.....extension granted

Best of luck you two! Looking forward to seeing some kick ass entries!

Ah, yes, Miss BM, I myself am also more than halfway done with sketching!!  

...the second page.  

*runs and hides*

Festival of Ribbons?
....s\'got a nice ring to it. Actually, that doesn\'t sound like a bad idea at all! *ponders*
...oh and Yuki, September 1st will never come for you. EVER. I made arrangements with the men upstairs to keep you locked in a time warp where you\'re continually stuck in august 31st. Kind of like what Bill Murray went through, except less funny.
....
STATUS REPORT!: over halfway done sketching mista RR. action sequences...are a biiiiiiiitch

I want September 1, NOW!!!

I\'ve got the perfect story idea for just such an animal, too.    

so if Satin beat Eliza, and Katka, beats Satin.....now all Eliza has to do is beat katka and the circle is complete. >: P



we should totally do a festival of ribbons- three way match with Eliza, Katka, and Satin

YOU GO GUUURRRRRRLSSSSSS

KICK SOME ASS!

Awww yeah RabbitRabbit, WE GONNA ROCK THIS SHOWBOAT!!!

It was destiny.

action :0!

I am SO ready for this, you don\'t even know.  

Do you know? NO YOU DON\'T.