Huh. Yos, what\'s going on with you, Missy. Oh well. You are still awesome.

Sand, WONDERFUL improvement from the first time I\'ve seen your stuff. Totally. The mood is perfect.

I have to tell you Sand, you\'ve grown as an artist so much since grayscale  Really, really well done.
-J

I figured it was a connection issue, Yosai. I didn\'t think you had stood me up--you were working too hard to do that. I can\'t wait to see what you did!

I\'m sorry, my modem died and  I couldn\'t get a connection. I sent the pages to Wei as soon as I could, went online just few mins at a friend\'s place, but I suppose it was too late : \\

but yeah, Wei got my pages, it\'s finished, he said he\'s gonna put it as a BB. :]
I guess I won\'t battle again until this connection problem resolved~ which, I\'m not sure when.

I\'m sorry to have disappointed you guys ^^; and Sandy, I\'m sure as hell didn\'t stood you up >:| *sternface* that was my battle with most effort out of all~ sorry ;___;

I think if the page size was larger, the tiny font problem would cease, along with the tiny panel problem.
Still, I really liked it, despite the minor eyestrain.

well, it wasn\'t just no the last page, i found a hard time making out some of the words overall.
i know word placement is important, but i think that you it could have really benefited from a slightly larger font size or maybe little bolder even ; (i could read it, it just kinda a moment to focus in)

other then that it was a great job :3

I intended the text on the final page to be almost too tiny to read. It doesn\'t directly impact the story. It\'s just the guy on TV saying that P2 is missing.

Wow the text on the last page is so tiny!! That\'s the only thing I can critisize about your side of the battle though, Sand. You did a great job of telling your story. I only wish it were even longer. Seven pages just flew by so quick.

and well, since no one knows where Yosai is, I won\'t say anything bad. It\'s just too bad it wasn\'t a battle.

...crawford just left my jaw on the floor.  you dropped.  i am amazed, layout, style, the story... the mood.  kick-ass.  keep it up!

That comic was really good, excpecially story wise, My only complant was that some of the panels were too small and some of the type was too small.The art was good though and the story was even better. Really good job over alll.

Great battle sands . Can\'t really nitpick on anything, except maybe the perspective in the scene where Lydon walks away from the counter. But its a great setup for some Crawford drama

I\'m worried about Yos tho D: haven\'t talked to her in a while and no one seems to know where she went off to.

Oh no! I hope Yosai is okay.....

gotta hand it to you sandpuppeteer, you suprise me with this one XD it was in a different style than your older ones =3 love it <3

That was..... fucking beautiful :<  I love it so much more now that I can see it in a goods size... Congrats Sandita, you rock so much <3

Phew. Thought I had another day. Thank god I finished a day early (for my calender XD)

Uploaded!! Hoo-ha! 2 hours before deadline! And actually finished! How awesome am I?! Not really....but first time finishing a full comic with out an extension. *flexes*

* low pitched manly roar* AAAUUUUUUGH!!!!

.....<3  

Best of luck to both your characters.

*High pitched girly scream* Kyaaaaaaa~!!!! <3 <3 <3

Dude I can\'t wait! Do your best you two!

whoot for Crawford! *hugs*

AHAHHAHAH! No matter how hard Crawford\'s going to try, with two pretty ladies fighting, this is going to make every yaoi loving fangurlz cream. ...SCREAM*

yaayy yosaiii

*o* both of you do an amazing job--I wanna be BLOWN AWAY when I read it!!

I\'m going to lose this battle SO hard!

Nice, can\'t wait for this fight. Glad to see you fighting again Yosai.

Where is Samuel :0!!

Wheeeeeeee! Kick some ass Yos !

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet hot bishiness... with a little surly bear to spice it up. HAHAHAH. Oh God, this is going to kill me, I know it.

T-T *waits patiently*

YAY