King of Monsters Tournament: Round 1 / Espiral vs. Radiotard

King of Monsters Tournament: Round 1 / Espiral vs. Radiotard

King of Monsters Tournament: Round 1 — Espiral vs. Radiotard

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by Craqued

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# 20   Posted: Jul 29 2007, 03:37 PM
I don\'t have much to point out, but..

perca:  This is by my favorite entry of the first round.  I had no troubles following it, but it seems others did, so you may want to clarify things a bit more.

craqued: The story was good, but I had a hard time telling what was going on from the drawings.  So, it got a little confusing.

# 19   Posted: Jul 27 2007, 06:24 PM
Tx a lot for all the feedbacks guys. I\'m already practicing to improve and hope not let you guys down. I also would like to thank <b>Craqued</b> again for the great match and everyone else for the help and attention. I do want to fight you again, even if I have to get another character in, you hear Craqued? XD That\'s it, now I\'ll wait and see what happens in the end <3

Aluísio C. Santos
# 18   Posted: Jul 26 2007, 07:31 PM
Perca: As I have told you in the forum, this style is unique. The mix between crazy colors and the textures is one to lay a sight into. There are really a lack of words to describe this comic.
Hey, are you by the way a student at Unesp, from Bauru? (got the infro through Erika and Hiro)

Craqued: I dig your style a lot, but I found the panels a bit confusing. I had to read it quite an amount of times to try to figure the stuff. Plus, even though it\'s a monster battle, I think it was way too speechless.. it could be used to make the panels clearer.

Good luck to both!

# 17   Posted: Jul 26 2007, 07:11 PM
I like pasta.

# 16   Posted: Jul 26 2007, 08:52 AM
TANKS Jack, Perca, Shortfuuury, Mel! I\'m taking ever crit to heart, so thanks for the feedback I appreciate it so much! PERCA PLEASE your take on the boy was so funny, I loved it and Radio looked like a cross between a Teletubby and Godzilla so that made me smile too, hahah. Thanks so much for the fight, KILL THE REST OF EM\', EY?!

# 15   Posted: Jul 25 2007, 12:42 PM
perca - Your colors are rad, but your pacing is confusing. Your style is great, but don\'t let it get in the way of your storytelling!  Overall it was enjoyable after a couple reads!

craqued - You get comics better than perca does, but your work isn\'t as polished. I would love to see a clean finished comic that you\'ve sweated buckets over in the future. I really think your work is rad and you have tons of potential!

# 14   Posted: Jul 25 2007, 09:16 AM
Tx for all the comments and feedback <3 I’m glad that I managed to entertain you guys and I’ll try my best to keep up the flow and quality of my stuff.

<b>Craqued:</b>… How dare you managed to make the boy better than me???? XD That’s not fair, not at all! You managed to make the dream flow all the way better than me, I’m so stealing that from you*taking notes* I wish we both could fight again, that was really fun. The way you made the death scene was gorgeous and you blew me away. I just felt a bit lost in the destruction scene, my eyes got lost between the blacks and greens… nothing hard to fix, just getting a better color balance will make things pop up better. I don’t have anything to say, I liked your pages a lot!

And just a note: I was so afraid of changing Radiotard to my style I almost gave up the idea. I’m glad you liked my re-design XD

# 13   Posted: Jul 24 2007, 11:33 PM
Priss, I\'ve got nothing. I\'m absolutely blown away by that comic.

Cracqued, that was some cool shit you got out there, but the clarity knocked you down. Your art really gets cluttered when you don\'t use colour. The destroyed backgrounds were cool, but weak in some places, like it didn\'t look like a realistic city in a lot of spots which might\'ve been what you were going for, but the cluttered action and slightly confusing linework made it seem a bit off. I really don\'t want you to start working much neater since that laid back chaos you do is just so nice, but a little more clarity could really help, maybe defining your actual figures a bit more. Also there\'s some places where the words got a bit lost in all the linework. I did love the words though, other than the usage, the actual letting was just so intense with that neon green, and your just hyperdestructive  action was just too cool when it clicked.

Great stuff from the both of you guys. It\'s a shame only one can move on.

# 12   Posted: Jul 24 2007, 11:45 AM
Percaaa oh my gooosh that was wonderful You made Radio 100 times better than I ever could AGH amazing stuff, it was like eating candy and ice cream every page, it was WONDERFUL. Thanks for the battle Perca, sorry I couldn\'t give ya a bit better on my part but it was fun!

Thanks for the crits Elio, I definitely have issues with line weight and distinguishing my shapes so yea, thank yooou.

# 11   Posted: Jul 24 2007, 09:32 AM
perca – Good lord your comics are super fun to read, the colors blow my mind. “I feel like I’m floating on cloud” when I read them. Seriously, awesome awesome colors. Your drawings are great, your story is cute and I’m interested in where it is going! I LOVE your ending that is so great how you had Radiotard get his dream. AWESOME ending. Sometimes your layouts are so busy I forget which way to read, but that might just be me. Your font (handwriting) is a little too lucid and sometimes hard to read, but don’t go using digital font on me or tighten up, just work on making your hand writing a little bit easier to read and rest more comfortably in your word balloons.

Awesome job, love your story, again your colors, I’m speechless.
Thank you for battling in my tournament.

Craqued – What a destructive comic! Fun stuff, but really really hard to read and make out. It looks like you rushed, some panels are just a blur to me. Page 6 looks great, but then middle of page 7 and page 9 I really can’t tell what is going on. I think you are drawing too small maybe your there is just way too much detail or maybe your drop shadows aren’t working right. Your best bet to improve line quality is to make better use of thin to think lines, you have a lot of in between middle which is making your action hard to read. Work on cleaning up your action and drawings and you’ll be rocking in no time. Thank you for battling in my tournament.  

# 10   Posted: Jul 23 2007, 03:46 PM
i loved both of these, they\'re something new <333

PS. Perca, i love your style, it\'s so unique!!

# 9   Posted: Jul 22 2007, 10:15 PM
Perca.. got insonia and a hella strong cold XD No, seriously, I\'ll never procastinate like that again.. That was sick! But hell that\'s the best I could manage to do in my last 7 days of pain and agony! Can\'t wait to see yours, Craqued, I\'m so exited!

# 8   Posted: Jul 22 2007, 07:22 PM
ah man, moving took most of my time away BUT EH I TRIED MY BEST SO THERE
cant wait to see whatcha got percas

# 7   Posted: Jul 17 2007, 06:46 PM <killing> SPARTAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

# 6   Posted: Jul 8 2007, 09:01 AM
Mmmmmm, cant give either of you ladies more rootin, I lurvs ya both da same! So TEAR UP CITY! BREAK IT DOWN! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! *Flashes man chest*

# 5   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 08:00 PM
GO GO GO!!! (*0*

# 4   Posted: Jul 4 2007, 11:00 PM
Very, very excited. I think this will be one of the battles that will be enjoyable.

Aluísio C. Santos
# 3   Posted: Jul 4 2007, 02:05 PM
w00t, psychedelic stuff coming in scene!

# 2   Posted: Jul 4 2007, 01:53 PM
Good luck, and have fun.

# 1   Posted: Jul 4 2007, 11:47 AM
This, this is just great, you guys both have some noice comics, I can\'t wait to see the most tip top from the both of you.

Comic Details -

Type: Death Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Jul 30th, 2007
Votes Cast: 63
Page Views: 1216

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