Merk vs. Fuck You Charlie
Critiques & Comments
PoodleAfro
8 comments

# 21
Posted:
Sep 1 2007, 05:59 PM
YAY TOONS! Fuck You Charlie, you\'re hilarious XD. And everybody knows that Merk is a quirk in himself XD ... *SHOT FOR THE RHYME*
# 20
Posted:
Jul 19 2007, 02:26 AM
thanks everyone for your comments and support, it\'s been awesome.
And HB, thanks for the battle, it was fun!
Now... who to challenge next?
And HB, thanks for the battle, it was fun!
Now... who to challenge next?
# 19
Posted:
Jul 18 2007, 11:34 AM
Qyzex: I thought yours was the more entertaining half of the battle. Merk has grown on me quite a bit since his introduction to Void City. The bit with the moustache got a good laugh out of me, and the water cycle...what the hell? haha c :
Hitlersbrain: While not quite as entertaining as Qyzex\'s half, your contribution featured some fantastic layouts and a higher quality of art overall. It\'s tough to cram in anything remotely approaching a plot in three pages, but I think your fun, elastic style made up for it.
Hitlersbrain: While not quite as entertaining as Qyzex\'s half, your contribution featured some fantastic layouts and a higher quality of art overall. It\'s tough to cram in anything remotely approaching a plot in three pages, but I think your fun, elastic style made up for it.
# 18
Posted:
Jul 16 2007, 06:29 AM
This was interesting, 3 page restriction, short deadline etc.
Alright for the both of you: Use a ruler for your panels, it will look cleaner, they wont go all over the place and you\'ll get a set of negative spaces between them. All the more professional looking.
Qyzex, i guess i lost my sense of humor somewhere but i didnt laught at the ending, only at that brand new mustache. Its kick ass how you characters really stand out from the backgrounds but add more details to these backgrounds when you can.
Hiltersbrain, your layout felt cleaner and your frames gave me place to breath. Now about your character being one sided and all, that\'ll slowly drain your entertainement factor as you keep making him effortlessly own characters \"just like that\" i gotta admit, 3 page limit didnt make it easy this time so no more on that issue. But this was a great job.
Alright for the both of you: Use a ruler for your panels, it will look cleaner, they wont go all over the place and you\'ll get a set of negative spaces between them. All the more professional looking.
Qyzex, i guess i lost my sense of humor somewhere but i didnt laught at the ending, only at that brand new mustache. Its kick ass how you characters really stand out from the backgrounds but add more details to these backgrounds when you can.
Hiltersbrain, your layout felt cleaner and your frames gave me place to breath. Now about your character being one sided and all, that\'ll slowly drain your entertainement factor as you keep making him effortlessly own characters \"just like that\" i gotta admit, 3 page limit didnt make it easy this time so no more on that issue. But this was a great job.
# 17
Posted:
Jul 14 2007, 01:05 PM
Merks\' battle was far more entertaining. The forehead mustache and the water cycle were just so random and ridiculous. XD
Hitlersbrain, do the world a favor and delete the phrase \"that\'s just how my character is\" from your vocabulary. You can make Charlie single-minded and straightforward without making him redundant or dull, unless Charlie \"just is\" supposed to be dull. Pointless violence is always great fun, but if that\'s Charlie\'s schtick, be prepared to mix it up a little: do something unexpected, add a smidge of storyline, or a secret disguise for no reason, anything!
There\'s a video I saw on YouTube, something like \"the Easter Bunny Hates You\" or something, and it\'s basically just a guy in a bunny suit running around a city and kicking people\'s asses, BUT!!! he does it in unexpected and unpredictable ways, so that it remains hilarious for all five minutes of the video, whereas the giggles i got from Charlie wore off halfway through the second page. If you really want the readers rolling on the floor laughing, you CAN make that happen without changing anything about Charlie\'s winning personality.
The artwork is top-notch, though. The line quality and expressions are all pretty much perfect.
Hitlersbrain, do the world a favor and delete the phrase \"that\'s just how my character is\" from your vocabulary. You can make Charlie single-minded and straightforward without making him redundant or dull, unless Charlie \"just is\" supposed to be dull. Pointless violence is always great fun, but if that\'s Charlie\'s schtick, be prepared to mix it up a little: do something unexpected, add a smidge of storyline, or a secret disguise for no reason, anything!
There\'s a video I saw on YouTube, something like \"the Easter Bunny Hates You\" or something, and it\'s basically just a guy in a bunny suit running around a city and kicking people\'s asses, BUT!!! he does it in unexpected and unpredictable ways, so that it remains hilarious for all five minutes of the video, whereas the giggles i got from Charlie wore off halfway through the second page. If you really want the readers rolling on the floor laughing, you CAN make that happen without changing anything about Charlie\'s winning personality.
The artwork is top-notch, though. The line quality and expressions are all pretty much perfect.
# 16
Posted:
Jul 14 2007, 03:51 AM
dude, HB, that King of Cartoons joke, top notch! I was laughing hardcore, fo sho.
good job man, keep on rockin\' on
good job man, keep on rockin\' on
# 15
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 08:43 PM
Thats some funny shit you guys drew, but i liked fuck you charlies better, but merk trying to tell his dad hes a man was hilarious.
it\'s also nice to see some comics that got that cartoony style again.
it\'s also nice to see some comics that got that cartoony style again.
# 14
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 07:06 PM
Qyz, I\'m with RedRevolver here, I like the digital stuff better, and though the art wasn\'t as good as hitlersbrain\'s I liked the story and humor better. AND I hate myself from saying this but Merk\'s dad is pretty hot XD
Hitlersbrain, I\'m in love with your use of expressions XD
Hitlersbrain, I\'m in love with your use of expressions XD
# 13
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 04:54 PM
Sorry Qyz, but Hitlersbrain just punched you a new one!
# 12
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 12:37 PM
Great job to both of you, you both had me laughing. Oh and by the way. HitlersBrain, was that Felix the Cat\'s Magic Bag? Haha.
# 11
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 11:44 AM
I have to give it to qyz, it was simple and silly and mad me laugh. HB, you fight had cleaner art, but the fight was totally one-sided and kinda predictible. Qyz, you had more of a story line, but I like when you do digital more... it\'s just so much cleaner. The water-cycle thing, and the king of cartoons picture had my dyin\'. *thumps up*
# 10
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 11:24 AM
You..killed...him! :0
I liked both, but as for hitlerbrain, altough I found the lines pretty nice, I found it a bit boring, like, way too direct story
It was like \"you die, you die, you die, I\'m done!\".
I give it to Qyz, but I really dig both.
I liked both, but as for hitlerbrain, altough I found the lines pretty nice, I found it a bit boring, like, way too direct story

I give it to Qyz, but I really dig both.
# 9
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 10:31 AM
HAHAHA hella funny, you guys! XDDD
# 8
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 04:41 AM
I\'m all uploaded
=D
=D
# 7
Posted:
Jul 1 2007, 01:57 PM
this will be a unique battle ;w;
# 6
Posted:
Jul 1 2007, 01:10 PM
Two weeks for only three pages? C\'mon!
# 5
Posted:
Jul 1 2007, 09:12 AM
oh no
# 4
Posted:
Jul 1 2007, 08:18 AM
LMAO 

# 3
Posted:
Jun 30 2007, 01:34 PM
WHUT. XD
# 2
Posted:
Jun 30 2007, 09:58 AM
A MATCH MADE IN HEAVEN.
Or somewhere else. X3
Or somewhere else. X3
# 1
Posted:
Jun 30 2007, 07:58 AM
FUCK YOU MERK
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Ended:
Jul 20th, 2007
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