FooRay vs. P2

FooRay vs. P2

FooRay vs. P2

by YaRoof

53.1%
1773 points
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by fel/P2

46.9%
1563 points
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qtsushigirl
Artist
22 comments
# 36   Posted: Jul 22 2007, 10:16 AM
I was trying to draw backgrounds last night when I remembered this battle and wondered, \"How in the heck do they make the stuff they do??\" And then I tried to make a really detailed picture and then I looked at how you guys do it like it\'s nothing and I\'m all like, \"Gah!! Why do I bother???\" *cuts off hands* You both did wonderfully, the stories were captivating and you both obviously put tons of work into your comics. I gotta study a lot of what you guys do but especially the action poses you guys do so well. <3

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 35   Posted: Jul 19 2007, 04:29 PM
Both of you guys had great dynamic battles. Awesome perspective on your pages foo <3. Felony\'s comics have a nice story line and I love the dynamics of the pages. The little crab on P2 was cute. :3

Sean Patrick Kelly
Artist
117 comments
# 34   Posted: Jul 17 2007, 05:22 PM
Shit, thats being fucking pyro to infinity. P2 did great too.

Inferno
40 comments
# 33   Posted: Jul 13 2007, 08:38 PM
foo your art developed soooo freakin amazingly
and felony omfg great as always
why do you guys have to be sooooo freakin good

Elyan
Artist
101 comments
# 32   Posted: Jul 12 2007, 02:42 PM
thats a absolutly great battle.
and foo OMG!!! that last pic is awesome! never seen a better drawing of Mize. your realization of others stuff is just amazing.

wonderful dynamic battle

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 31   Posted: Jul 12 2007, 01:53 PM
in response to angie: foo\'s dialog is explained quite easily,  he wants to be spider man.

LURVE! *hugs angies head* heheh

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 30   Posted: Jul 11 2007, 08:07 PM
Foo-Beautiful job on the linework and while the whole thing wasn\'t in color, I felt that your lineart stood on its own and had a lot of personality. Your action was very easy to read. A few things to keep in mind though... the blur looked very out of place on the traditional lineart. Blur is very difficult to use successfully on the actual lineart, and it looks pretty weird here. It would have been better to just use different linewidths to show the difference in space and such, blur is a big no no. And the dialogue...I don\'t care about the censoring thing, I do however care about how cheesy Foo\'s dialogue seemed. It\'s like for the most part real people wouldn\'t talk like that. I know you\'re trying to give him a lot of personality and such but maybe tone it down a little? A little joke and stuff is fine occasionally but when it\'s mostly all he says it\'s a bit much.

Fel-STEP AWAY FROM THE PHOTOSHOP DUDE! haha I swear! I\'m just as guilty as you for using Photoshop like it\'s going out of style so I can easily see through all your tricks because I\'ve used them before. Be careful with the rain, just using the wind blur on something doesn\'t make for effective rain. And duuuuuuuuuuuude your text placement makes me cry! Try to center it, I don\'t care if the word bubble is going to cover a little bit of art, it needs to leave enough room for the text. Your action and coloring are nice but that\'s about all you have going. Your figures look really flat and shit without many details on them. The fight also ended way too abruptly. Just work on your time management and shit more and you\'ll get better.

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 29   Posted: Jul 11 2007, 07:27 PM
AND.
Not disappointed at all.
Much love on both these battles, and that crab on P2 at the end makes one happy camper out of me.
Foo I admire that you censor yourself actually, that\'s kind of a great change from some things I\'ve read lately (not on here, xD just lately).

Both of you had great line work, and what was coloured, well it was amazing. (Yes coloured with a U!) Well done guys, this is going to be hard to vote on.

mech II
12 comments
# 28   Posted: Jul 11 2007, 06:48 PM
Man your battles were awesome, Foo in my opinion would make a great WJ.

Rax
Artist
117 comments
# 27   Posted: Jul 11 2007, 06:08 PM
Nice battle fellas. Fel\'s had more exchanges, but Fooray\'s felt a bit more personal.

Fel, that last page looked kinda familiar...

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 26   Posted: Jul 10 2007, 10:21 PM
Regardless of whatever you guys turn in, it\'s going to be amazing :)

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 25   Posted: Jul 10 2007, 06:29 PM
uploaded mines as well, had to cut back on the color budget due to poor time funding but hopefully this makes up for the art funk i been in

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 24   Posted: Jul 10 2007, 10:13 AM
well mines all uploaded. . .sorry i didnt have enough time to color my whole battle but i got in two pages atleast and thats more color than ive done on one before so appreciate it! ;P

hope ya likes it. . and hope to do more with this soon. ^_^

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 23   Posted: Jul 1 2007, 08:17 PM
only thing i\'m promising is nipple action all over the place

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 22   Posted: Jul 1 2007, 01:35 PM
no man seckz sorry chia. . Ajay does cameo in my fight tho eating a whole pineapple in reverse (south park style) . .

Chia
Artist
82 comments
# 21   Posted: Jun 30 2007, 09:03 PM
Hawt man secks pls. ;o;

ArtisticEnigma
20 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 29 2007, 04:25 PM
good luck to felle and foo both. You guys better rock these pages. Good luck on Razor foodawg, and Felz; well...not sure but rock out I\'ll be watching for this.

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 29 2007, 12:16 PM
^_^ Keep goin Fel! You can do it!
Foo  ...I don\'t know you, xD but keep going! I\'ll be moral support for the both of you <3
=) Keep it truckin guys!

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 27 2007, 10:56 PM
*gets out pompoms* Come on, boyos! Lets see an uber match! *excited* We need more uber matches. <3 Uuuuuber match.

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 27 2007, 06:14 PM
U CAN DO EET!!

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 26 2007, 12:06 PM
LMAO EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 26 2007, 09:50 AM
FeLoNy, I challenge you to make this battle using as LITTLE dialogue as possible.  >:3

Cassu
8 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 23 2007, 04:59 PM
This is going to be a good one, I can\'t wait to see it!

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 21 2007, 09:41 PM
whoop just glad to say both me and felle should have a nice show for ya. . ive seen his progress and its awesome and ive shown him some of mine. . .should be interesting.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 21 2007, 06:18 AM
I can\'t wait to see this fight, good luck to both of you. :-)

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 11:24 PM
Foo, I can\'t wait to see your finished battle. I know it\'ll be amazing.

Felle.... just do this one, k?

qtsushigirl
Artist
22 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 10:33 PM
I\'m so excited!! I\'ll be cheering for you both on the sidelines.*rah rah rah!* Foo, you\'re the man. P2, I like your work and the fact that you\'re a DBZ fan makes me like you all the more. <3

Larathen
Artist
182 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 12:09 PM
yes

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 10:45 AM
 awww RTV i wasnt dodgin you man. . i just have fight priorities. . fighting Felle is one of the reasons i joined. . .and frankly dunno how many more fights im gonna be able to do so hadda get this one outta the way. . .

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 08:07 AM
^^ way to go Fel, good luck to both of you

billeh
Artist
17 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 03:23 AM
WhoA! nuf\' said.

Enef
Artist
58 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 02:47 AM
Felle isn\'t playing no games, straight outta one battle and into the next.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 02:30 AM
Hahahahaha, Fel just like 4AM was dodging you and i fought him, Fooray dodged me and is fighting you.
Odd world.

You niggas better make this awesome!

Agent//RanDom
14 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 01:27 AM
Damn, this has bad ass writtin all over it. This will be a good fight. Good luck to you both.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 10:06 PM
YES!

Inferno
40 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 08:06 PM
foo mannn i havent seen you in action in a while
and the veteran p2 this is gunna be one hell of a match
good luck to both of you

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jul 18th, 2007
Votes Cast: 65
Page Views: 1765
Winner: YaRoof
 

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