Merk vs. Finnegan

Merk vs. Finnegan

Merk vs. Finnegan

by Qyzex

47%
516 points
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by neens

53%
582 points
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Mokuu
Artist
85 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 14 2007, 05:46 AM
Qyzex, you had the \"hook\" but you didnt keep me hooked due to the lack of movements and the extremely confusing panelling. Especially when the only thing you saw was random slashes then \"Poof\" character finally appears in a pose. You can kick more asses than that. Your angles were too peaceful for the battle situation too: Tilt that thing man, create a sense of disturbance and get us deeper into the fight. Yet the second page panel work was cool

fence, The first panel would gave been your downfall since its the starting panel and does have any kind of hook or explanation of the chaos you know, its just some guy, seen in a waist close up shot, 1 point perspective, CENTERED IN THE MIDDLE(big nono.) no emphasis on his bad ass sword or the place being destroyed. Aside from that, most of the rest fairs well, its clean, to the point yet never, EVER explain a character\'s current action in words, its kinda like explaining something which you dont think you illustrated well enough for the viewer to understand and thats takes place for nothing. If the actions are really that important, frame em, emphasize on them but if they aint, keep it simple.

On a side note, The demons could have had a more \"different\" design, sometimes i was wondering if they were actually part of Merk\'s crew since there wasnt any emphasis on how different they looked. Way darker skin to push some contrast, scale texture, some kind of incomprehensible language anything to make them stand out as demons from outer hell or something.

Props to both of you for the collab work.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 12 2007, 09:42 PM
Actually I didn\'t complain about the lines and finishings themselves, but about the way you did the panels, like lacking movement, and such. Plus the masked man looks better on your side =O

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 12 2007, 09:17 PM
yes, but whatever, at least my quality is still getting better, aye?

justarhymes
Web Dev
636 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 12 2007, 09:07 PM
excuses

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 12 2007, 08:53 PM
just so people know, I only got about 2 weeks out of the 4 to work on this. Very busy, VERY VERY busy.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 12 2007, 07:48 PM
Sweet! It\'s good because it develops and bad because this arc just won\'t finish >O(. I still want more, nonetheless xD

Qyzex: I liked a lot until page 5, where it seems not exactly lazy, because quality wise it\'s good ,but looks a bit thrown, with all lots of different things happening in single panels, plus the abrupt ending. Also the panel Finnegan enters in scene is strange since there is that \"tribal\" AND the sound FX looking alike. At first I didn\'t noticed it. It\'s enjoyable though.

Fence: The art here is good too, even though I\'d recommend more studies in fighting positions or actions, as those in the first two pages look a bit stiff, or lacking movement. Your high contrast were very nice, too bad they were used in only those two panels.

I give it to Fence, but I liked both. Fence\'s just had less flaws appearing to me.
Good luck to yo uboth :D

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 11 2007, 09:37 PM
2 hours... can you feel it?!

I wish I had more time to work on this battle ( and more grey prisma markers too... things are like... heaven)

neens
Approval Committee
259 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 9 2007, 01:53 PM
also uploaded! hopefully in the right order.

finishing early is awesome, I\'ll have to remember that next time.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 8 2007, 08:38 PM
oh my, done and uploaded.

I\'m happy, I didn\'t think I\'d be able to finish on time.

BUSY BUSY BUSY.

oh shada
Artist
103 comments
# 11   Posted: May 24 2007, 03:11 AM
K-CHAK

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 10   Posted: May 23 2007, 12:06 AM
Merk and Finnegan, Begin-again!  

Ayname
25 comments
# 9   Posted: May 20 2007, 10:16 AM
YEES !!! >:O

Make it hawt, you two <3

Red
Council
636 comments
# 8   Posted: May 18 2007, 02:17 PM
I APPROVE OF THIS >: l
<333

Powerz
Artist
107 comments
# 7   Posted: May 18 2007, 09:52 AM
YOU LOT BETTER REPROSENT THE REPS YA DIGGGGGGG?!

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 6   Posted: May 14 2007, 09:18 PM
sweeeet

Larathen
Artist
182 comments
# 5   Posted: May 14 2007, 01:10 PM
The better be..more better D:<

c-r-ill-er
101 comments
# 4   Posted: May 14 2007, 08:27 AM
who will win this one, this is going to be good

CaptianJim
19 comments
# 3   Posted: May 14 2007, 08:20 AM
ooh, a rematch!

DimAmentia
Artist
113 comments
# 2   Posted: May 14 2007, 07:10 AM
YESSSS

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 1   Posted: May 14 2007, 01:02 AM
ROUND 2 WILL BE EPIC

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Jun 19th, 2007
Votes Cast: 28
Page Views: 670
Winner: neens
 

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