Hein vs. Matilda

Hein vs. Matilda

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by sixtem

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rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 24   Posted: May 27 2007, 11:23 PM
Did you guys seriously do this in one week??  I\'m floored!  Beautiful and amazing work from both!  

M. E. Charm, I think the insaaane amount of detail made up for the slightly unpolished look.  I applaud your creativity with your opponents abilities.  I physically flinched when Hein hit her with that car.  WHAMMO.  <3  

Sixtem, the flat colors actually worked for me.  When it comes to colors, less is more.  I also like the banter between your characters.  Though it wasn\'t exactly made clear WHY the elemental evoker had to be there when Miss Matilda is so powerful on her own.  

Cassu
8 comments
# 23   Posted: May 24 2007, 10:04 PM
M.E. Charm :  Love the action, and energy of your work, it\'s really damn fantastic!  Although sadly a lot of this action, and story is being lost by your dialogue.  It seems you spend more time drawing than lettering, and your hand-writing is really hard to read.  Maybe you should try and improve that a little, or add the text in Photoshop.
I am also still a little confused as to what actually happened at the end, it seems that you spend more time on your earlier pages, and rushed before the end.  Maybe if you pace yourself more you can pay just as much attention to the later pages.  That being said, loved the comic, I see so much potential here. :)

sixtem: Loved the colour!  It really shows effort when someone colours their stuff in my opinion, and you\'ve really gone all-out.  Your pages are laid out nicely, and they\'re fairly easy to read.  You may need to be a little careful of cramming your pages with text though, the speech bubbles are making some of your pages quite crowded.  Loved the character inter-action, you have a nice balance between seriousness and humour which I like.  The ending was a nice touch, a good way to end a short story, and it makes you wonder what actually happened.

doomsdayblaze
13 comments
# 22   Posted: May 24 2007, 12:36 AM
Sixtem: There\'s plenty of resources in the VOID Forums.  Start there, and just practice, practice, practice!

Chimaeric
Artist
249 comments
# 21   Posted: May 20 2007, 07:42 PM
@mecharm: your composition and action scenes were just remarkable, although that trait isn\'t present in some cases, such as hein\'s gun. Also sometimes your dialogue becomes hard to follow through, placing the bubbles all over the place. keep most of your dialogues in one place.

@sixtem: i can see your style ever evolving, becoming better and better. This one was a real treat especially. color + additional pages. Some discrepencies however, some of the action scenes were a tad 2 dimensional, noticeably from a lack of depth/perception and shadows

@both: i gotta say, this battle has got to be one of the best recent battles ever. Break some legs in the future you damn guys.

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 20   Posted: May 20 2007, 11:14 AM
Thanks for the critiques, guys!

The all-too-quick ending wasn\'t a casualty of time but instead from my crappy writing skills. How can I learn to comic write? ; 0; I suck at it.

This was a fun battle and I liked how you portrayed Matilda (up to the mopping floor part), Charmy.

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 19   Posted: May 20 2007, 10:08 AM
OH MY FUCK, I\'ll be writing reports all day D::

:Fuck the OC contest:

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 18   Posted: May 20 2007, 08:33 AM
\"Quit underpowering your opponents.\"
That\'s very useful advice, thanks (without sarcasm).

Mokuu
Artist
85 comments
# 17   Posted: May 20 2007, 07:45 AM
M.E: Dunno what happened on your case but you need to solidify your lines and make them clearer while keeping a good line weight variation to indicate the various planes, also quit under powering you opponents, Matilda has many more survival abilities aside from chucking a last resort grenade at her opponent, seeing a more developed fight sequence would have been great since both character have a lot of possibilities

Sixtem: Nice work yet variate those background colors, if you place it all the same color it flattens the picture and doesn\'t show a sense of dept in it. Also try more dramatic views for certain panels, like a low angle shot for the panel showing him impaled by Matilda\'s Lance and ETC.

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 16   Posted: May 20 2007, 06:15 AM
Yeah, me too. I have learned quite a bit from working with pen/paper again on a short schedule, but it still seems like a waste.

Sixtem, good youre improving and spending more effort, but this was very short and lacked a proper ending.

We should both shy away from one-weekers, they\'re pretty much the scourge of good intentions.

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 15   Posted: May 20 2007, 06:00 AM
quite frankly I would\'ve rather seen both of these comics with more time spent on them

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 14   Posted: May 19 2007, 11:20 PM
Uploaded with 40 minutes to spare! I\'m also emailing Wei the thumbnails right now.

Let\'s see how well I hold up against the great Charmy. @ 0@

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 13   Posted: May 19 2007, 04:49 PM
Uploaded.

My first time using pen and paper for an actual battle, so don\'t get too excited or you will be severly disappointed.

Rodent
10 comments
# 12   Posted: May 19 2007, 11:49 AM
Twelve hours.  Twelve hours.

Too excited for a Hein battle to heed my resolution not to make pointless comments.

...

Twelve hours!!

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 11   Posted: May 19 2007, 04:10 AM
Patience broken, now exchanging quality for speed.

Chimaeric
Artist
249 comments
# 10   Posted: May 18 2007, 08:43 PM
Hien = Hun?

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 9   Posted: May 18 2007, 07:29 AM
Matilda = Mulan ?

lolwut

gradamay
70 comments
# 8   Posted: May 17 2007, 06:23 PM
Time is racing toward us till the Huns arrive
Heed my every order and you might survive
You\'re unsuited for the rage of war
So pack up, go home you\'re through
How could I make a man out of you?

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 7   Posted: May 16 2007, 10:05 PM
Dude Hein is liek 5

this is loli to the extreme.

TO THE EXTREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEME

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 6   Posted: May 15 2007, 05:22 PM
Hot 12 year old or hottest 12 year old?

CaptianJim
19 comments
# 5   Posted: May 13 2007, 05:50 PM
*points and laughs at the kids in the corner*

I\'ve been waiting for a Hein battle. Lets see what happens...
GET IT ON!

Nachte
Artist
110 comments
# 4   Posted: May 13 2007, 11:03 AM
*Sits with monday. : C

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 3   Posted: May 13 2007, 10:07 AM
*sits unhappily in the corner with the special kids :C

Chimaeric
Artist
249 comments
# 2   Posted: May 12 2007, 03:11 PM
oh oh good luck

c-r-ill-er
101 comments
# 1   Posted: May 12 2007, 02:02 PM
good luck to you both just rememeber that the back round is important just like the main person..

Draw hard Battle well

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