Delanna Andria vs. Julius de Mizaori

Delanna Andria vs. Julius de Mizaori

Delanna Andria vs. Julius de Mizaori

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by Kumaru

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Kumaru
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# 17   Posted: Jun 7 2007, 07:49 AM
Zsa... your thumbs... y-you switched their outfits...(IT\'S ADORABLE) <8\'D Anyway, AAAHH MAN, you are brilliant, the toning in your side is to die for and so are your action scenes (*0* Also...\"Hairy Freak\"  *DIE LAUGHING* XDD Very wicked comic to read (*w*

It\'s okay to not draw Juu to scale (I\'m really bad at it so it\'s not a surprize that you didn\'t notice). I\'m sorry that I also changed some things around in my side than from what I told you in email (*__*;;;

And heyhey, if you ever need help with dialogue, just ask and I will assist.

Thank you for the crits, Monday and Ariboooo m(_ _)m I really appreciate them. (and am not against Delanna and Juu meeting again in the future...!)

rabbitrabbit
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# 16   Posted: Jun 5 2007, 10:09 PM
Wowwwww... this wasn\'t what I was expecting at all...  

Awesome job, you two... I\'ll do a real crit when I screw my head back on...

aribooboo
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# 15   Posted: Jun 5 2007, 07:23 PM
oh wow, i really enjoyed these both!

zabreuser: i hella loved the action panels; they were clear and easy to follow (and the decapetated head was a plus! XD ) I didn\'t get tired or bored with the text either =] overall, it kicked ass!

Kumaru: your whole style is appealing to me and i loved how you did the hatches without making it look crowded or messy! i relished your action panels too! they moved real smoothly! it was love~!

NICE ONE YOU GUYS!

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 14   Posted: Jun 5 2007, 02:46 PM
Wow \\o_o/. First of all, thanks for the battle, Kumaru :D This was really fun to concept and draw! BTW we need to go pchat more sometime! Your fight is totally super, I like read it seven times, being 6 of them in a row, and just love it, your renditions of Delanna are even better than mine =O. I specially like the \"nice shot!\" panel :P (actually I loved as about all your panels !_!). I hope I have gotten to your expectations, at least :D

Something I hadn\'t noticed when I drawed the things and just thought of it now was about your last page, like, I had ever read his size, really @_@ He\'s totally smaller than I thought, sorry about that =\'\\

On more time, thanks again for accepting the challenge even when you already had another on the making! :\'D

Kure: Thanks, I see what is your point and totally agree, I\'m in fact not an english native speaker, even though I had some knowledge of english, it\'s being a bit tough to concept the baloons, but I\'ll certainly take at least 3 times more effort on that on my next time.

Monday: Sup waging hearts in the trophy match :P I\'m totally lost as for what I\'m going to do with Delanna\'s future, though :P

I\'m really grateful for the feedback, and hope to get more as well :D

Monday
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# 13   Posted: Jun 5 2007, 11:17 AM
Both these battles were razor sharp yo !

ZsaZsa \'s pacing was ace that decapitation scene was really clear and vivid in my mind ! However his goons look similar to each but i still got what was happening ! :D Color was subtle sue,but you can really feel it despite monochromes. Page 3 rocked this, and page 5 used full color sections mixed with monochromes and it doesn\'t look discordant at all yo. This part was very adorable, as I was introduced to Delanna and her metal string powers in a pickle surprise sort of way. Why am I talking to Zsa in third person ??? *flump

Kukukukuuumaruu - You\'re quite the fight machine lately have you ? thanks to the both of you my morning was thoroughly ruined with awesome battles ! Your fight might get the point for being very well done and having little fault at all ! Let me explain; your face and body expressions are very controlled and full of expression. You pull off a rich lighthearted theme and a well paced quirky battle. Though a few parts had me reading back and forth but I defintiely understood in the end. You pulled off Del\'s attitude well in this one no doubt

However in the end both these entries were similar for the most part no ? I got my action fix and now I\'m doubly thirsty for some story. I hope this could be a start to Delanna\'s shennanigans and the hairy love affair that is to follow (maybe not :<)

kure ji ori
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# 12   Posted: Jun 5 2007, 03:02 AM
I enjpyed both these comics alot, the only crit i have is with zsabreuser \'s dialogue, it was like a bad fan translation of a manga. I dunno if english is your first language or anythingbut it might be a good idea to have someone proof read your stuff to make sure it makes sense.
Other than that your fight was bitching and your panelling and pace was excellent
Kumaru i jsut dig your stuff anywyas :P

Kumaru
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# 11   Posted: Jun 4 2007, 05:08 PM
Uploaded... Z, I\'m not okay, but thanks for asking...???

D6016
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# 10   Posted: Jun 4 2007, 01:18 PM
10 hours 42 minutes D:

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 9   Posted: Jun 1 2007, 02:04 PM
Hmm.. .battle uploaded.

Kumaru \\o\\ ARE U OK??!

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 8   Posted: May 31 2007, 03:18 PM
I so finished already! I\'ll make the thumbs and then upload.. Do I have to send the thumbs separately?

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 7   Posted: May 27 2007, 08:11 PM
WOOT, two weeks already @_@.. gone.

Craqued
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# 6   Posted: May 14 2007, 11:28 PM
WOW got a pair of killers here
kumas on fiiiyaaah

D6016
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# 5   Posted: May 14 2007, 08:45 PM
eee D: good luck Kumaru

you too Zsabreuser

billeh
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# 4   Posted: May 14 2007, 05:32 PM
wth! XD we\'ll revive you if you die man! woooT

Aim
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# 3   Posted: May 14 2007, 01:21 PM
Oh wow. You\'re going to tackle two comics at once, Kumaru? I hope it goes well for you.

Looking forward to your character\'s first match, zsabre.

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 2   Posted: May 14 2007, 01:06 PM
This will totally rock! Prepare for total fullness of winning! @_@

Kumaru
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# 1   Posted: May 14 2007, 12:37 PM
I AM GOING TO DIE!! LET\'S GO!

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jun 12th, 2007
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