TL Bot vs. Aesimi & Beethoven

TL Bot vs. Aesimi & Beethoven

TL Bot vs. Aesimi & Beethoven

by Red

48%
1580 points
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by Pelz

52%
1710 points
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rabbitrabbit
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334 comments
# 51   Posted: May 31 2007, 08:17 PM
Aww, poor TL Bot can\'t catch a break, not even in his own comic.  

RedRevolver, you had me with the \"dawww, Beethoven\'s jealous\" angle, but you could have taken it farther.  Yours just felt like it ended too suddenly.  Still really cute, though.  

Pelica, your lines are wibbly and your anatomy needs to be more confident.  The colored-pencil-foreground-with-computer-colored-background thing looks weird, but I think you can make it work for you with some practice.  The story, though, had me in stitches from start to finish.  

Great battle, both of you!

MarsDefden
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# 50   Posted: May 28 2007, 02:03 PM
They\'re so cute!! This is gonna be a close win. Good luck to the both of you! Love the characters. <3

M.E. Charm
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# 49   Posted: May 28 2007, 04:20 AM
Oh, I loved both battles so so much.

Pelica, it started a little slow, especially with those ridiculious colors, but it came out well in the end.

RedRevolver, I am in awe of how awesome comics with a silly robot can be. I was touched to the core by the lighthearted atmossphere.

jho
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# 48   Posted: May 25 2007, 06:49 PM
red: humor character doesn\'t mean you cant make deep stories, you just gotta know the tricks. I voted for  Pelica because her story entertained me more, but yours was pretty good too. artwise, I think you should try to keep your consistency, and you definitely need to draw more humans for practice (dynamic wise) cause some of the expressions are pretty awkward... like the last page for example, I\'m not sure what I was seeing on aesimi, was she surprised or not, etc :)

in my opinion, TL bot have a lot of potential to become a very great character, I can think of 7 diffferent ways of taking him to different kinds of story, and I think you can find much more. His versatility is his biggest asset, but you gotta practice and think more about his story in the long run I guess and go from there :) start from small ideas but put more substance in it. good luck.

pelica: your b/w pages actually look more \'finished\' than your color BUT I like your color, it feels whimsical, not too sure on the words baloons but good job on making them work into the page. I like your characters, they\'re fun, I\'ll be waiting to see more :)

Hitsuzen
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# 47   Posted: May 24 2007, 06:22 PM
Both were cute but story-wise, Pelica had something going. Sorry Red, but this TLBot comic really lacked substance. It felt like it was going to go somewhere, and then it just ended.

Weepy
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# 46   Posted: May 23 2007, 07:44 PM
Aaahh, such a hard choice!
Both are really funny, but I noticed that your comics seem alot more eyecatching now Red!
Wonderful execution, Pelica!
Give me half an hour to figure out how to vote for these @_@

Shadow_Rain
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# 45   Posted: May 23 2007, 10:23 AM
I laughed so hard that my dad had to ask why I was crying.

Redrevolver: There was so much tone in it, I thought I was seeing dots before my eyes. Haha, but that\'s not bad. The only thing that really let me down is that Aesimi didn\'t have enough body variety(only counted 3 times where you saw her body or part of it). I did like the random comedy, especially when TL Bot was caught on fire. Not that I hate your character, but you can\'t burn metal, only melt it. XD

Pelica: Backgrounds! Look up random city pictures to help you want to draw them. Too bad you didn\'t finish the cover, but I\'m also a fan of sketchy art, so That really didn\'t bother me. I really liked your first panel on how you made everything in the background was so much excitement in VOID. I would have to say either stick with one media or try to get multimedia to work since that was kinda was one thing that killed your backgrounds also I think. I love the translation box for TL Bot that Aesimi looks at. Haha, priceless. The expressions were awesome and I loved how Beethoven is holding out his paw with his cigarette when TL Bot was trying to beam them. Haha!

Pelz
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# 44   Posted: May 23 2007, 06:19 AM
n_n <3<3 I admit; I didn\'t really put much effort into background, mostly because they didn\'t travel much during the comic. Atleast I know what to work on now though :D Thanks!

(xD Beethoven Sucks at Halo.)

Craqued
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# 43   Posted: May 23 2007, 01:17 AM
RED gah, can\'t get enough of TeeEl there, he\'s adorable. The style was nice, but the angles and shot were boring. Somehow the panel layout made it more amusing but I think it was just because it w as messy, not like your fight with the Mechanic which was boss. This fight seemed lacking, also might wanna work on humans more and dog, they were kid funky looking but funny comic man, enjoyed it.

Pel, your characters has A LOT of personality, more than I was expecting. Your comic was pretty funny and I liked the story but the paneling seemed kind of cluttered and the panel were all kind of plain, not too much environment we could see, the only ones that had some surroundings were the last two pages which were cute. Throw in more bg details instead of keeping your guys floating in space. GOOD FIGHT.

KEEP AT IT GUYS <3

Red
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# 42   Posted: May 22 2007, 09:47 PM
It\'s funny because I thought I was giving this one a bit more substance with beethoven\'s jealousy. I thought my other ones were a little shallow. I get what you mean, and I appreciate our input... I think I am craving a more story driven character that I really can\'t achieve with TL Bot... and kinda steered away from what people like about TL ... I think. ahahha. Also, I think I was concentrating more on quality of art than story.

I\'m going to stop talking now

Ryuartyi
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# 41   Posted: May 22 2007, 09:29 PM
It just seemed.... out of synch in a way. The story was lacking real substance I believe, but I\'m a stickler for that. I didn\'t try and make it sound like I didn\'t like it, I just thought it could\'ve been better.

Red
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# 40   Posted: May 22 2007, 09:09 PM
Well I took a risk and did something a little different... I guess it was a bad idea?

Ryuartyi
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# 39   Posted: May 22 2007, 08:33 PM
Alright, I liked both of those fights, but unfortunately, I have to give it to Pelica.

@RedRevolver: I always love your comics, and the style is a nice change of pace, but it was lacking in story. TL Bot just seemed to be pushed aside during the comic, and made no real impact on them. I liked the \"It\'s using all its powers at once!\" part, but it was one of the only funny parts to the comic. The emotions seemed out of place, or maybe even non-existant.

@Pelica: Most of the comic I believe was funny altogether. What stood out was the ghosts of those two haunting Aesismi, and the raping physics aspect. I liked the fact that there was a story, and that TL Bot had an influence an the two, and not really on TL Bot, since that\'s how he is. Most of your emotions were right on, and I felt a lot more attached to the characters in this comic than I did in Red\'s fight.

Still, both of you had very good fights, and it was well worth the wait. Nice job.

Monday
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# 38   Posted: May 22 2007, 04:21 PM
Beethoven keeps pressing the start button : |

c-r-ill-er
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# 37   Posted: May 22 2007, 03:57 PM
Red funny, very funny you did a great job. I love that you did it in grey i really like black and white coloring. Red you did so good but your pot was just alittle off form what i really like to see from you. But i really loved it i can\'t wait to see your next comic:)

Pelica you did a pretty good job, but you make some of your drawings look like you drow your people on one piece of paper and drow the backround on another piece of paper i really didn\'t like that, maybe thats just me. Your idea for the box house was a great idea.

Heat
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# 36   Posted: May 22 2007, 02:05 PM
Ah! Sorry I forgot to include this, but on another note, if I\'m seeing the game right, if Aesimi doesn\'t have to reload TLBot\'s going down in a couple of seconds in that game of Halo. :o

Aesemi, back up! TLBot, go for the lunge!

Heat
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# 35   Posted: May 22 2007, 02:03 PM
Ah, wow! Good offering, both of you. I was impressed with Pelica\'s storytelling, and I liked Red\'s rendering of Beethoven especially...

As for crits, I guess I would say that it\'s kind of strange where you guys allowed your weaker points to be: I noticed the perspective on the specially-colored pic of TLBot seemed really wierd. I was going to chalk some of it up to style, but the connection point for the prong doesn\'t seem to correspond with the bottom view... and then, Pelica had a pretty well thought-out and complete work, but the opening page was an unfinished sketch that didn\'t seem to have much planning in relation to the comic. ._. These aren\'t such big things, it\'s just that you let these things fall where they did that drew my attention to them.

Still, though, there was a lot to love about both comics and I\'m hoping to see more from both of you in the future. : D

Red
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636 comments
# 34   Posted: May 21 2007, 08:11 PM
uploaded <3

Red
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# 33   Posted: May 21 2007, 11:14 AM
wooooo! I\'m doing the last page over at the last second!! PRESSURE PRESSURE PRESSURE!!!
anyways... I was unhappy with my last battle ... and I hope my scores go back up after this one... I\'m going back to black and white >: l HUZAHHH!!!!

Pelz
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# 32   Posted: May 21 2007, 08:47 AM
 X3 Yay! This is gonna be fun!

Red
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# 31   Posted: May 20 2007, 03:57 PM
almost done!!

DrasticFantastic
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# 30   Posted: May 15 2007, 10:02 AM
I\'m loving it already...

rabbitrabbit
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# 29   Posted: May 14 2007, 10:21 PM
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE <#

Red
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636 comments
# 28   Posted: May 14 2007, 10:42 AM
9 more days?!?! .... I\'ve still got alot to do ... :P

Pelz
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36 comments
# 27   Posted: May 14 2007, 07:00 AM
n_n fweeee, almost done <3

Ryuartyi
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# 26   Posted: May 13 2007, 08:22 AM
I can\'t wait to see this one. Well one, TL Bot is one of my current favorite fighters at the moment, but I can\'t wait to see what Pelica can do. Make sure you get Rage Mode right. ;)

Qyzex
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# 25   Posted: May 13 2007, 02:18 AM
holy cow. This already has a TON of comments on it!

IT\'S THAT IMPORTANT.

oh shada
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# 24   Posted: May 9 2007, 02:21 PM
GO GO GO

jinchuu
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# 23   Posted: May 8 2007, 07:02 PM
The wee little bot goes forth into battle again! Horray! P:
But then. . . Aesimi and Beethoven look pretty awesome too. . .
-cheers on both-

c-r-ill-er
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# 22   Posted: May 7 2007, 08:23 AM
yeah Red is on a roll! I know this will be a great battle! you rock and roll...Draw hard and battle well both of you.

Pelz
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36 comments
# 21   Posted: May 6 2007, 07:23 PM
xD Lol, Red the fighting machine! <3

Red
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636 comments
# 20   Posted: May 6 2007, 04:34 PM
I\'ll never take a break!! I\'m fighting mimi right after this. >: I

Weepy
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# 19   Posted: May 6 2007, 03:16 PM
Yeesh Red, take a break! You\'ll kill yourself XD
You\'ve just been pumping out funny lately, like it was pee or something.

Zoingishly
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# 18   Posted: May 5 2007, 10:46 PM
Luck to your first fight! Rootin\' for Pelica because Beethoven is the sex. :3

CaptianJim
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# 17   Posted: May 5 2007, 08:16 PM
Damn TLBot is on a ROLL!!

Kozispoon
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1046 comments
# 16   Posted: May 4 2007, 06:41 PM
TL, the ever elusive midget robo I desiiiire <3 Even though I keep missing my chances to duke it out with you, I cant help but be amped when I hear you locked in battle with someone new.

Lets see some more awesome!

Hitsuzen
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# 15   Posted: May 3 2007, 03:31 PM
Awwh little TL Bot! TL Bot comics are better than Christmas! But my vote depends on who has the better comic, no bias here :D I promise! Beethoven is cute too :D

Red
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636 comments
# 14   Posted: May 3 2007, 11:00 AM
hell yeah Pelica WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

c-r-ill-er
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# 13   Posted: May 3 2007, 10:03 AM
that\'s good to read!

Pelz
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# 12   Posted: May 3 2007, 09:59 AM
 X3 I don\'t see not finishing my pages coming into question--I already have my pages sketch-amafied and I\'m inking now! :3 Not even my natural urge to procrastinate could mess this up :DDD

c-r-ill-er
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# 11   Posted: May 3 2007, 09:48 AM
you both will do great! i got this feeling this will be a good battle.....

Red
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# 10   Posted: May 3 2007, 09:40 AM
haha don\'t be nervous Pelica!! I can\'t wait to see yours too. Just make sure you finish the whole comic haha :)

Pelz
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# 9   Posted: May 3 2007, 08:32 AM
XD Lol. *is nervous* Even though we\'re opponents I really wanna see yours red X3

Red
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# 8   Posted: May 2 2007, 12:52 PM
TL BOT IS A COMIC MACHINE! har har har :3

Larathen
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# 7   Posted: May 2 2007, 10:34 AM
Geeze robot is ON A ROLL

c-r-ill-er
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# 6   Posted: May 2 2007, 09:35 AM
well i\'m happy knowing there\'s going to be some more of your funny comics out Red maybe we will all sleep sound at night knowing that there is a robot on the job hahaa, good luck to you all.

Red
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# 5   Posted: May 1 2007, 07:18 PM
i was going to take a break from battling for at *least* a week.... BUT I CAN\'T.

rabbitrabbit
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# 4   Posted: May 1 2007, 06:51 PM
LOVE

c-r-ill-er
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# 3   Posted: May 1 2007, 06:44 PM
Red good luck i know form your last two comics they was funny and i know that this one will also will be, Pelica good luck in your frsit battle your really going to need it i hope your comic will do good as well. good luck and good wild!

Heat
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# 2   Posted: May 1 2007, 05:11 PM
I AM EXPECTING EPIC WIN : D

I\'ve been rooting for TLBot, but I\'m eager to see Aesimi and Beethoven out of the Incubator. I hope both of you get good shots in.

Aim
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# 1   Posted: May 1 2007, 04:37 PM
Good luck on your first battle, Pelica. It\'s... Beethoven\'s first symphany! [/lame joke]

And revolver, I hope you can keep that momentum going!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: May 29th, 2007
Votes Cast: 66
Page Views: 768
Winner: Pelz
 

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