I love how if you put them together in a room, Spandex can have such a serious past and Scarlett can look so funny while irritated out of her mind.
Good job you two, this was exactly what I needed before I went to sleep xD
Neko.... you make the detective look hot. \'^\' that is cheating.
Detective Spandex vs. Scarlett
Critiques & Comments
# 16
Posted:
Apr 3 2007, 01:04 AM
# 15
Posted:
Apr 2 2007, 05:33 PM
Def: Mister Detective is so stinkin\' entertaining and your styles\' real unique. Every one of your comics is fun to read. I was bummed cause\' i love the way you color your comics and this ones lacking color but HEY I can\'t have everything. Thanks for the fun read~
Neko: I really loooved your expressions and tones. You arts so clean cut and entertaining. The Monman already gave you good crits so yea, can\'t wait to see more from you.
Neko: I really loooved your expressions and tones. You arts so clean cut and entertaining. The Monman already gave you good crits so yea, can\'t wait to see more from you.
# 14
Posted:
Apr 2 2007, 01:10 PM
Hff...There\'s nothing to critique for me, since...Monday has already made some great pointers. I just came here to say that I read you two\'s battles, and I loved it! Def, I wasn\'t sure if I\'ll come to love your character, but after reading this one and the previous one, I am totally in love. He is like..the hottest male character in VOID right now to me. And crotch joke, no matter what people say, is always awesome.
And Neko, your art is fabulous here! I really adore how angry Scarlett looks! Her expression is awesome. I can\'t wiat to battle you. I love hot you used the grey textures, and it makes me want to rip you off. I can\'t wait to battle you.
And Neko, your art is fabulous here! I really adore how angry Scarlett looks! Her expression is awesome. I can\'t wiat to battle you. I love hot you used the grey textures, and it makes me want to rip you off. I can\'t wait to battle you.
# 13
Posted:
Mar 30 2007, 08:11 PM
I dont know why- but I really like the fresh feel of this battle. Both parties establish character development and the one character that always gets the hard knocks on void is getting more interesting. The things to note in the battle was the character interplay and the fact that no actual fighting ever occured. there are other things but I can\'t name them at the moment.
Neko: Humor and characterisation was ace. I should pike you with a 25 foot rod for not bringing this kinda game to yoAu kRnoMw wAhat. Humor was fantastic and the pacing was a tad choppy (with dialogue placement) but overall the flow was awesome. you did Spandex a great service by opening up a cornerstone in his steadily building story. I also really wanna fight the both you now
+YOur work gets aces for a completed look-
+Story was very entertaining- so much so that it made me interested in Reading Spand\'s entry.
-Grey tones and shading. The values in this comic is flat. This is the only imperfection im seeing.
Spade: Everything that has happened here was a payoff of a consistently building plot of his playing the flawed, vigilante , paranoid cop. In that respect your piece resonated with Neko\'s in that profound way- however, the quality of your work alone was not something I could have fallen in love with at first sight- despite me being a story oriented reader. Your story bleeds with grit but the art definitely didn\'t match it- you could have also done with shading had you the time to go into every panel. Composition and figures are competent however.
-Incomplete look
+ Fleshy story arc
- Tonal Range
Overall a good battle. I gots my sights set on the both of you 8 )
Neko: Humor and characterisation was ace. I should pike you with a 25 foot rod for not bringing this kinda game to yoAu kRnoMw wAhat. Humor was fantastic and the pacing was a tad choppy (with dialogue placement) but overall the flow was awesome. you did Spandex a great service by opening up a cornerstone in his steadily building story. I also really wanna fight the both you now
+YOur work gets aces for a completed look-
+Story was very entertaining- so much so that it made me interested in Reading Spand\'s entry.
-Grey tones and shading. The values in this comic is flat. This is the only imperfection im seeing.
Spade: Everything that has happened here was a payoff of a consistently building plot of his playing the flawed, vigilante , paranoid cop. In that respect your piece resonated with Neko\'s in that profound way- however, the quality of your work alone was not something I could have fallen in love with at first sight- despite me being a story oriented reader. Your story bleeds with grit but the art definitely didn\'t match it- you could have also done with shading had you the time to go into every panel. Composition and figures are competent however.
-Incomplete look
+ Fleshy story arc
- Tonal Range
Overall a good battle. I gots my sights set on the both of you 8 )
# 12
Posted:
Mar 30 2007, 04:10 PM
Spade: I\'ll be honest- at first, I HATED Spandex. Why? The constant crotch jokes. They\'re just ... not that funny imho. But this one was more interesting- I also really like your style in this. The linework is clean and the comic easy to follow. Nice!
Damn, Neko- you\'ve come far. o: Only thing I see art-wise is your feet still need some work. Having everything look so wonderful, then seeing really off-looking feetsies... is just kinda odd. XD; Storywise, your battle was pretty good. Not so creative (nothing that hasn\'t really been done before) but it was entertaining. Good show.
I gave you both even scores in different categories. Good luck~ <3
Damn, Neko- you\'ve come far. o: Only thing I see art-wise is your feet still need some work. Having everything look so wonderful, then seeing really off-looking feetsies... is just kinda odd. XD; Storywise, your battle was pretty good. Not so creative (nothing that hasn\'t really been done before) but it was entertaining. Good show.
I gave you both even scores in different categories. Good luck~ <3
# 11
Posted:
Mar 27 2007, 10:18 PM
YAY!!! SCARLETT!!!!!
# 10
Posted:
Mar 20 2007, 11:08 AM
Thanks Wei, this means a lot to Spade and to me. <3
# 9
Posted:
Mar 20 2007, 06:21 AM
defspade has requested an extension....BOTH artists receive....one week
# 8
Posted:
Mar 12 2007, 11:58 PM
.............gasp........gasp again......gasp for a 3rd time
SCARLET<3
SCARLET<3
# 7
Posted:
Mar 6 2007, 07:47 PM
hahah oh god
# 6
Posted:
Mar 2 2007, 06:37 PM
No, The Streaker vs. Larathen. THAT would be the greatest battle ever.
# 5
Posted:
Mar 2 2007, 04:15 PM
best battle EVER
# 4
Posted:
Mar 2 2007, 01:39 AM
HAS SPANDEX GONE ON THE HETERO SIDE?
# 3
Posted:
Mar 1 2007, 09:12 PM
DETECTIVE SPANDEX HAS BEEN A NAUGHTY BOY AND NEEDS TO BE TAUGHT A NAUGHTY LESSON!! ~__~
# 2
Posted:
Mar 1 2007, 09:09 PM
YOU CAN START BY DOING GOOD IN MY PANTS.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 1 2007, 08:54 PM
ILL TRY TO DO SOME GOOD NEKO! >:O
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DefSpade: If you managed to finish the last panel, I\'d have given you a better grade, but that don\'t mean that you failed in my eyes. Your story was great and kept me wanting more. I love your presentation and that\'s what matters to me most.
Good Job both of you! I wanna see this continued if it\'s possible. ^_^