Dee vs. Julius de Mizaori
Critiques & Comments
# 22
Posted:
Apr 10 2007, 09:04 AM
Oh man, this was a toughy to vote on, I like them both so much! I like the darker tone Dee set for it since Kumaru\'s last battle was more lighthearted--it was nice to see Julius with some incentive in Void. Plus Dee just has soem great inks to look at! Kumaru, you made me lol a lot so kudos for that! You do some of the cutest comics in such a unique style and this was no exception!
# 21
Posted:
Apr 10 2007, 07:37 AM
i loved bpth of these battles, dee your colours were amazing, i loved the pallette you used and thought it was an amazing choice for your comic
kumaru your inks are sick i loved em, sometimes they got alittle too loose but other than that i enjoyed
kumaru your inks are sick i loved em, sometimes they got alittle too loose but other than that i enjoyed
# 20
Posted:
Apr 7 2007, 09:30 PM
Kumaru you blew me away :3
such an awesome job, and awesome use of personalities ;_;
so awesome
I\'m glad to have had the chance to battle you
such an awesome job, and awesome use of personalities ;_;
so awesome
I\'m glad to have had the chance to battle you
# 19
Posted:
Apr 6 2007, 06:01 AM
Yeah for dumpster diving!!
# 18
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 04:34 PM
uhgosh
Dee, your coloring and shots were PRETTY SWEET but I wanted more detail from you. Awesome little comic, sir. VERY awesome.
Kumakuma, that was stinkin\' sweet, your comic was just like, oooozzing personality in those brush strokes and UGH it was adorable and your style is yum. You win.
Dee, your coloring and shots were PRETTY SWEET but I wanted more detail from you. Awesome little comic, sir. VERY awesome.
Kumakuma, that was stinkin\' sweet, your comic was just like, oooozzing personality in those brush strokes and UGH it was adorable and your style is yum. You win.
# 17
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 04:30 PM
.......... BEAUTIFUL ART EVERYWHERE. XD What really confuses me about how to comment or vote here, is not that both were very well drawn, but the stories. While D6016\'s has ameaning to the character, and I can\'t wait to see more of it (because Gawd, you just adore leaving people ins uspence don\'t <3<; ) Kumaru\'s was so sweet... I on\'t know which I want to stay.
# 16
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 01:22 PM
Sorry for earlier, I\'ll really comment this time. XD
Both of you did quite excellently. It was nice to see both of you so successfully incorporating eachother\'s character and giving them a good share of the spotlight.
I noticed in Dee\'s comic that there are a lot of little spelling errors here and there, leaving out E\'s and so forth. It affects my reading just a bit, and it doesn\'t seem like such a large problem to fix, so it could really help to make sure your writing is as polished as your fight itself. Your action scene was really impressive though, and putting in Julius\' nightmare snatching aspect was a good idea.
Your comic was almost as funny as your last, which is still good, because joke succession in your last was hard to top. It seems like the quality degrades a bit as it continues, but it\'s still quite excellent and different. The scenery can be a bit hard to interpret at times, but for the most part it\'s quite nice and fits in well. Your dumpters look very good. Almost makes me want to eat some dumpster gunk myself. >: D
Both of you did quite excellently. It was nice to see both of you so successfully incorporating eachother\'s character and giving them a good share of the spotlight.
I noticed in Dee\'s comic that there are a lot of little spelling errors here and there, leaving out E\'s and so forth. It affects my reading just a bit, and it doesn\'t seem like such a large problem to fix, so it could really help to make sure your writing is as polished as your fight itself. Your action scene was really impressive though, and putting in Julius\' nightmare snatching aspect was a good idea.
Your comic was almost as funny as your last, which is still good, because joke succession in your last was hard to top. It seems like the quality degrades a bit as it continues, but it\'s still quite excellent and different. The scenery can be a bit hard to interpret at times, but for the most part it\'s quite nice and fits in well. Your dumpters look very good. Almost makes me want to eat some dumpster gunk myself. >: D
# 15
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 01:10 PM
I\'ll admit, I had a rough time with the voting process. You both did incredibly awesome in all three categories.
Dee - Great beginning, and interesting end. I liked how you emphasized Kumaru\'s ability to collect nightmares. The dream catcher scene was also nicely detailed and I\'m sure it took awhile to flesh out. I honestly don\'t have anything to really nitpick on, at least nothing that I can see. Good work man!
Kumaru - Same props to you too Ku! I really liked the character interaction going through the story, and the emotions were very expressive and well drawn. My only little gripe is the line thicknesses for the backgrounds. I had a slightly difficult time registering what was surrounding the characters and behind them. Besides that it was a mixture of cute, funny, and highly entertaining.
Dee - Great beginning, and interesting end. I liked how you emphasized Kumaru\'s ability to collect nightmares. The dream catcher scene was also nicely detailed and I\'m sure it took awhile to flesh out. I honestly don\'t have anything to really nitpick on, at least nothing that I can see. Good work man!
Kumaru - Same props to you too Ku! I really liked the character interaction going through the story, and the emotions were very expressive and well drawn. My only little gripe is the line thicknesses for the backgrounds. I had a slightly difficult time registering what was surrounding the characters and behind them. Besides that it was a mixture of cute, funny, and highly entertaining.
# 14
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 12:36 PM
OMG DEEE, your pages look FKING BEAUTIFUL \\(;0;\\ <-tears of joy
I can\'t stop reading them over and over and overrrr (;3;
I can\'t stop reading them over and over and overrrr (;3;
# 13
Posted:
Apr 4 2007, 09:16 AM
Oh... my bad. How did I miss that? XD
My apologies. I\'m looking forward to it then. ^_^;
My apologies. I\'m looking forward to it then. ^_^;
# 12
Posted:
Apr 4 2007, 05:49 AM
Battles don\'t show up immediately after uploading them, Aim.
Toast has to put them up. :3
Toast has to put them up. :3
# 11
Posted:
Apr 4 2007, 03:02 AM
Huh? The past due mark is up and the comics never showed up? But it sounded like both parties said they had uploaded something...
Man, I was looking forward to this. XD
Could some kind of error have occured at the last minute?
Man, I was looking forward to this. XD
Could some kind of error have occured at the last minute?
# 10
Posted:
Apr 3 2007, 10:25 PM
I can\'t wait to see yours either *flail*
dun worry, theres not much in the way of fightings in mine XD
dun worry, theres not much in the way of fightings in mine XD
# 9
Posted:
Apr 3 2007, 10:08 PM
Uploaded, also X3
Can\'t wait to read yours, D!!!
Also, I swear next comic will have actual fighting.... (;_;
Can\'t wait to read yours, D!!!
Also, I swear next comic will have actual fighting.... (;_;
# 8
Posted:
Apr 3 2007, 10:04 PM
Uploaded.
:3
:3
# 7
Posted:
Mar 22 2007, 09:21 PM
Thanks Wei
# 6
Posted:
Mar 21 2007, 09:24 AM
Dee has requested an extension on the deadline....both artists receive...one week
# 5
Posted:
Mar 1 2007, 12:06 AM
Wow, #3 already?? You\'re on fire, d-man!
I loved your last fight Mr. Mizaori!!
Good luck both of you!
I loved your last fight Mr. Mizaori!!
Good luck both of you!
# 4
Posted:
Feb 28 2007, 02:16 PM
Dee\'s really cranking out the fights, huh?
I look forward to this. Dee, don\'t disappoint with your great quality. Julius, make it hilarious.
I look forward to this. Dee, don\'t disappoint with your great quality. Julius, make it hilarious.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 28 2007, 05:22 AM
I forsee this fight shall be SILLY!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 27 2007, 11:51 PM
I BE
ON THIS
ALL NIGHT
I BE ON IT
ALL DAY
ON THIS
ALL NIGHT
I BE ON IT
ALL DAY
# 1
Posted:
Feb 27 2007, 08:38 PM
DEE IS OUT TO SEARCH FOR MORE TACOS
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Apr 12th, 2007
Votes Cast:
49
Page Views:
1853
Winner:
Kumaru
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