Girl vs. Merk

Girl vs. Merk

Girl vs. Merk

by KevJB

54.8%
1327 points
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by Qyzex

45.2%
1096 points
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(Pi)
Artist
475 comments
# 23   Posted: Feb 8 2007, 12:26 AM
Kev - Really pretty awesome work, the posing on the top of page 2 is a little difficult, but other than that it\'s all pretty cool (with the exception of the last page, but you already knew that). Keep it up, start pushing past your comfort zone.

Qyz - Super long torsos for Girl, and others as well. In terms of paneling, you lose a lot of space, especially on page 4. Keep improving those people forms, just gotta practice.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 22   Posted: Feb 6 2007, 11:05 AM
Qyz, that was some funny shit.
The love shack, stolen porno and Hugo getting it back after Merk fukked Girl.
The line art didn\'t bother me, i wish there were more pages, it was getting quite fun.

Kev
interesting start, BOOOBIES.
The arrows that said \"Phil\", cracked me up. I almost died laughing when i noticed an arrow on the crying kid and \"closed, unless your Phil\". Who couldn\'t miss that.
Too bad it ended so quick. That\'s one bitch of a cliffhanger. (i do that shit too, so you\'re forgiven.)


Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 21   Posted: Feb 5 2007, 06:37 PM
kev - noooooo i wanted to see more  D:  damnit! the story was a bit cliche, but i didn\'t care because you made it interesting somehow. plus your art is just plain sexy. wanna see mooaaarrr  ;3;

qyzex -  everything\'s kinda been said. you coulda done a lot more with the line art to make it interesting. just spend a bit more time on the quality. story.....eh, wasn\'t great. but it kept me reading at least. hopefully the next fight\'ll be better.

my points went to kev  <3

DeB
Artist
36 comments
# 20   Posted: Feb 3 2007, 04:59 AM
ok, here\'s wher it hut ;D

Girl, not to bad! Loved the cll with all the arow pointing to Phill... funny stuff.
that being said, somehow you seem to be able to do better then tis. somewhere in thoses lines I see more. for the moment it seem uneven and unfinished. plus, your pacing and POV need a bit a work, some pages are confising

but a great efferot none the lest, i\'ll be happy to see more

Merk, Unachevement is a crime man! and you did SO much better with your 2 pages intro then you did here. it feel like it was rushed and done at the last minute. yet, great little story, even if extremely simplistic. funny

peace guys
A

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 3 2007, 04:41 AM
Kev-loved that you used my character, she\'s adorable in your style! Anyways onto an actual critique..Merk looks a little flat, I\'m guessing you didn\'t have a marker that could have been used to shade him without going too dark. The fight looked fine until the last two pages the inking got a little rough and there\'s still some pencil lines in there. It sucks you didn\'t get to finish, but it was a fight you did in a week and looked pretty good considering the amount of time you had.

Qyzex-You could have done a lot more with that splash page, it just seems it\'s really empty and the photoshop dot brush looks a little out of place. I think your fight would have looked better if you hadn\'t used grays and maybe tried doing some more with your inks, the grays aren\'t really adding anything to your lineart. The ending was a little creepy, it was like rape Oo  You should try doing a battle with a much longer deadline so you can work on it more and try other things.

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 2 2007, 09:04 PM
Girl:  I liked where the comic was going, but... \"it\'ll take more than that\" to WHAT?  Cliffhanger!  Augh!  I can\'t sleep until I find out what it was!  :(  

Merk:  I like how you did a simple story instead of attempting an epic saga and only getting two pages into it.  I thought the story was funny, too.  Only thing is the characters seemed a little bland.  

Rone Rivendale
Artist
89 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 2 2007, 04:36 PM
I gotta say I wasn\'t impressed with either of these comics. Girl\'s is incomplete and lacked any sort of strong storyline in the pages that were there. Merk\'s had a story but I found it shallow and pointless and I didn\'t understand the ending. Both sides art quality was lacking and overall I just didn\'t enjoy either from any perspective.

At least I don\'t write fluff all the time! ^_^

shirano
14 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 2 2007, 03:37 PM
lawllll....sorry KevJB, I didn\'t know you could hand stuff in late / you got an extension...haha my apologies

KevJB
Artist
62 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 2 2007, 04:06 AM
Wah? It is up? Ah. Anyways this story is continued in vs Hugo.

aikus
8 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 1 2007, 10:43 PM
oorah! Is up!

KevJB
Artist
62 comments
# 13   Posted: Jan 31 2007, 07:26 AM
Shut your hole shirano! I will murder you!

shirano
14 comments
# 12   Posted: Jan 26 2007, 08:14 PM
too bad it wasn\'t handed in on time.

jesse
141 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 26 2007, 12:20 AM
Yay first new battle of the year!

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 24 2007, 02:16 AM
well, mine\'s done and turned in. So, Kev.... hurry up, aye?

Ryugen
1 comment
# 9   Posted: Jan 23 2007, 06:42 PM
2 days left... so close O.O

Kal aMari
49 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 18 2007, 10:36 PM
Seven days...*creepy voice*

Larathen
Artist
182 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 18 2007, 07:55 PM
OH HAMBURGERS

oh shada
Artist
103 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 18 2007, 04:41 PM
HAHAHA

DefSpade
Artist
27 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 17 2007, 04:37 PM
MERK IS FIGHTING (A) GIRL!! I SMELL HETEROSECKSUOLEETEE.

Darkwel
34 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 17 2007, 04:10 PM
Oh my goodness gracious.
THERE\'S AN EPIC BATTLE ALL UP IN HEA\'

Powerz
Artist
107 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 17 2007, 03:00 AM
HOLY POPSICLES :O

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 17 2007, 02:44 AM
oh my gawd!

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 17 2007, 02:43 AM
BRU HAH HAH

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Feb 7th, 2007
Votes Cast: 60
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Winner: KevJB
 

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