Carstein Rand vs. Frank Kodi

Carstein Rand vs. Frank Kodi

Carstein Rand vs. Frank Kodi

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L
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# 17   Posted: Feb 23 2007, 12:36 PM
ahh! carstein how could you?! T^T

(Pi)
Artist
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# 16   Posted: Feb 21 2007, 10:47 PM
Kotori - facial anatomy still seems to be giving you a bit of trouble. Maybe some real-life facial studies would help? We should get an art jam going, I know it\'s a problem for me too. In your case, the problem seems to lie in those really wide eyes you\'re fond of using, and that your noses tend to lack depth, usually being just a simple line or so. There\'s a couple spots where perspective is a bit off, like in the last panel of page 5, we can somehow see up the girl\'s skirt (not that I\'m complaining) but looking even with Kodi\'s hand, and looking straight at Carstein\'s arm as well. Also, on page 7, Kodi\'s cobra head looks far too small for the thickness of the body, making it seem like it\'s too close to the ground and not giving enough room for the body in between the panel cutoff and the head. The width of a cobra\'s head is generally the same width as its body, maybe even a little wider, to accommodate larger prey. Doing some anatomy studies of king cobras may help you streamline proportions and such too. Lastly, you may want to reconsider the font you used for Kodi\'s thoughts, it\'s a bit difficult to make out.

All in all, not a bad piece of work. I look forward to you next fight. You\'ll need to go all out against Monday, but you probably already knew that. ;)

hisshi
Artist
9 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 21 2007, 03:08 PM
@Kotori Ky - VERY cool battle, girl! I like your style a lot. It reminds me of the 70\'s-80\'s mangas :D
The story... WAS HOT! I enjoyed it very much, though the font used for Frank\'s thoughts was hard to read at times, but it looked great, nonetheless.
Looking forward for Frank\'s next episode! :D

@Carstein - tz-tz-tz....

Angie
Council
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# 14   Posted: Feb 16 2007, 09:59 PM
Carstein-what happened dude? :(

Kotori-you\'re improving a lot, you had good pacing in this battle and I\'m very interested in seeing what you\'re going to do with Frank. I know you didn\'t have time to get to tone or learn to tone in time for this battle but I think when you can it\'ll really add to the feel you have going here. I already got on you about the font but I\'ll say it again here, the font for Frank made me sad but it was at least better than the horror that is comic sans. I think you could also benefit from having more active linework in your battles, even speedlines would help the panel where he\'s getting tossed into a wall on page 8 feel a bit more convincing. Other than that it looks good dude

TinTinFin
1 comment
# 13   Posted: Feb 15 2007, 05:46 PM
Hee, I officially decided that Kodi is the awesome in my book X3 Keep on doing your stuff!

Chia
Artist
82 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 15 2007, 09:06 AM
Carstein: ..... ;__;

Kotori: I can see you improving in each of your battles, I love seeing progress like that! I think you still need to work on your pacing though. Perhaps adding a few more panels or an extra page would\'ve made this battle better. Because that big zombie practically came out of nowhere, like he was always next to that girl but Frank just ignored it \'til it was time to fight. It was like that in a few other places too. I\'d also like to see Frank gradually transform into the snake instead of it being instant. <3

I guess everyone who fights Carstein now must jump out of a window too. :D

ScorpionOcean
Artist
25 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 15 2007, 08:54 AM
Kotori, nice battle.  That\'s a huge snake!  I\'m sure you\'ve heard from people already bout that font choice, so yeah.  Some panels are empty but you\'re improving a lot.

Carstein....

Larathen
Artist
182 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 14 2007, 10:47 PM
jheufhuegugh Kotori, your comics get better and better by the time ;____;

Go gurl


And Carstein. Tsktsk.

D6016
Artist
89 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 14 2007, 09:42 PM
Kotori that was an awesome battle with frank! :D
I\'ve decided that i like him and must battle him one day!

My only real complaint about your battle was Franks though speech (i think thats what it was)
The text was hard to read x.x

but over all an awesome job :D

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 14 2007, 05:55 PM
D: D: D: D: D:

Carstein.... whyyyyyyyyyyyy? D:

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 10 2007, 06:35 PM
Well, the battle isn\'t getting posted, so I put it up on YouTube... see? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pzJo7zVXQr0

(Yes, I can tease my own characters... but this is all Chao\'s fault. You rotten bastard. D: )

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 6 2007, 07:56 AM
Battle in. And I apologize now for the dialog. I did it at the last moment due to some... other issues. ;____; So... sorry the dialog is ass.

Diascope
Artist
33 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 1 2007, 03:01 PM
Oooh, this outta be interesting. :0

spinzoa
Artist
94 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 31 2007, 12:40 PM
I rooting for both of you; keep it hot!

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 29 2007, 01:19 PM
Extension

Rocul
15 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 18 2007, 04:56 PM
Whooho! I can\'t wait for the results! :D

Kal aMari
49 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 10 2007, 11:33 PM
Awesome.  I\'ve wanted to see Frank fight for some time.

Bring it, y\'all!

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