Neo, you cracked me up xDD

Oh Shada! (;__;

Neoriceisgood! That was really entertaining! XD I agree that the paneling is a little crazy, but I like the energy and got some good laughs out of that. The one thing I don\'t really care for is the messy coloring, at least get the paint out of the speech bubbles please! Other than that, good work!

J-Jet Rocks! XD

I\'m sorry guys. I\'ll make up for this soon, I\'ve been working on some stuff for everyone. ;(

Oh shada, where are you?!

Neorice: Awesome fight dude, J-Jet does look alot better and more shark like to me. Artwise dude this is awesome... but you really gotta space things out dude! We\'ve got too many panels bleeding into other panels, and often at times the word balloons cover up much of the art. Try to maybe make your pages wider so that you\'re not cramming so much stuff into one page. Only other thing that conserned me is Jingles... he hates Phill. Anywho, I liked the quality regardless of how close together it is, and it was a tad random, but I\'d fap to it like dawg.

Let\'s see some more soon ok?

\"the thing I noticed is, that J-jet LOOKS so much fucking cooler her than he is on your design sheet. I\'ll go as far as saying he\'s hot. \"


Yeah, after a while I decided that J-Jet didn\'t really look how I wanted yet; so gave his design a major overhaul, seen in this battle.

Check it out, it\'s Hiemie, isn\'t that swell.

the thing I noticed is, that J-jet LOOKS so much fucking cooler her than he is on your design sheet. I\'ll go as far as saying he\'s hot.

nice battle! yeah like  everyone said.. the quality kinda suffers cause your color had us expecting for more, but I enjoyed it, a bit cluttered on the action pages.. I suggest using more contrast for toning since the current one feels like it\'s just doodlish rather than stylish. but I like it, nice job

\" I\'m not quite sure what was going on with Paolo and J-Jet\"

It was a bit of a reference to J-Jet apparently making a sandwich for Paolo as Paolo\'s wish; as he won that match, his battle isn\'t  \"canon\" ; so story-wise, that happened; Paolo knew that it happened, J-Jet didn\'t; however J-Jet\'s hand did for some reason;

Wouldn\'t -you- be suspicious if your hand knew someone, but you didn\'t know him yourself?

I know I would!

It got a little random towards the later half, but this was pretty good

fapfapfapfap

I was pretty entertained by your story Neoriceisgood.. I think the none coloring works better for your character and stories than the darker colors..

Neorice... you had me cracking up. I love your vision of Void City as nonstop retarded chaos. I was sad to see the dip in the quality of the pages towards the end, and the cropping turned me off. Also... I\'m not quite sure what was going on with Paolo and J-Jet. Other than that, a great comic. Lots of fun, and funny, and action too.

Oh no! Anvils! Nowhere Boy\'s one true weakness....along with everything else.

Anyway, I like the overall story of the comic. It has a fun feel to it as well as creates a sense that more then just two people live in the city. The ending was amusing, as I support most deus ex machina.

You\'re actual drawings are nice. You try different angles, maintain a background and the interpretation of characters are pretty neat. However, the actual paneling tends to get a bit clutter, with there being little breathing room to see what\'s taking place from time to time. Also, having a character break the panel borders is fine once and a while but seems to contribute to the overall clutter of your pages. I also don\'t mind the less polished pages, it\'s just that the sometimes there is little difference on background from forground with the lightblue coloring. It flattens out your drawings.

Overall though, I was entertained and this was a good battle. J-Jet is cool character with loads of potential and you should battle more. Smiles were had and yada yada yada. Go Good Guys!

Yeah I didn\'t notice the cropping until after I uploaded :x

BEAUTIFUL page one, Neorice~ but the rest was a bit rushed. x: Some cropping issues as well, but in all very fun and entertaining. Nice!

Aha, your stuff\'s always entertaining.  And a very nice setup for potential gang war...if the powers that be decide to do that.  XD

Lol Neo, this is like a preview to the supposed gang war tourney XD

I love your humor.

oh shada.....oh shame   D:  i was looking forward to both halves of this....boohoo....
will you submit it as a BB later?  :<

neorice, YOUR FIRST FIGHT. niiiiiiice. i know on AIM you were kinda upset that your score was dropping a bit, but i think it\'s because of the first page. i\'m not saying the other pages are bad, but.....it\'s just, that first page was so kickass  D:  and though the other pages were kickass too, they weren\'t AS kickass. get it? so it\'s like you set us up for so much, and then.....it wasn\'t AS much.   :<   still loved the style an story though, so the votes i gave you weren\'t so low.
the one thing that REAALLLYY bothered me was how a lot of the text was cut off. that\'s just one BIG pet peeve. when i can\'t read wtfwtththththt they\'re saying.
other than that, badass job and i can\'t wait to see more.
(arma blimps, ftw!)

Neorice wins this battle. Period!

Oh Shada! What happened to you?

*DROOOOOOOOOOOOOL*

Wooh, upload\'d.

Wow! this ought ta be a good one.

GOOOOOOOO J-JEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTT!!! I am so looking foward to this battle!
J-Jet- Go for Broke!

Esquellio- Don\'t go easy on him!!!

Go you two, wreck Havoc!!!

yyessssss i can\'t wait for this. i\'m really looking forward to finally seeing j-jet fight!

FINALLY

J-JET BATTLES

Finally Neo.... and I must say, in the name of The Repatriates... Esquellio better rock on, hard on!

yay the first step to the good guy- Repatriates arch rivlery

It\'s about time that shark gets a battle.

I\'m bound to say: Finally!

I\'m bound only by my personal bias.  GO J-JET!

This is beautiful. *sniffle*

Gang alliance dictates that I root for Esquellio, but that doesn\'t mean that I won\'t love J-jet after he\'s taken his umbrella-beating.

*squeeee* go you two go ~

Yes my teeth and ambitions are baredd..


BE PREPAREDD!

YEAH! what?