ok, bslu\'s peace was pretty impressive visually, but it seemed very short, It a pretty decent job of showing a side of pete, that was pretty much accurate as far as i can tell from his bio. It also drew you in and made you want more.
far as this its strong but i think you should experiment with taking your lines a little further to completion, maybe mess with more realistic perspectives in backgrounds a lil more, sometimes your currentstyle works for backgrounds, sometimes it confuses. And i think the panel where he says and this i can cover up, maybe you should have chose a shot that shows some of his differences between humans more drastically, or even have rendered angie more so it would be more obvious he didnt look like a human.
still though i liked your piece.

hieme, usually i dont know how to crit your stuff but lookin in the forum mad me think i should try, maybe you may get something out of my thoughts on it.

your battle was longer more complete in that respect, but i think you need to do something to make it more readable, i know partially you have a certain style, but whatever you style is the goal is usually to tell a story, in yours we mostly had to rely on words, the visual stuff didnt real show us what was going on and was sometimes confusing. My guess with cartooning is you can do whatever you want you can exagerate or change something, but my guess is it should have some type of reason.Do you use certain line styles in some panels and not others to achieve and effect? You may also want to explore your cartoon anatomy and proportions, not to be realistic, but are you consistent within the charachters? sometimes hands or body parts seem big in other panels small, was this done for a reason? or is it something you want to work on.  One of the big things a carttoonist is supposed to have an advantage in, in showing motion, or action, you can exagerate for effect, stretch or pull, you re new to this so of course its gonna take some time, but the active sections were often not that descriptive, sometimes hard to tell what is going on, maybe you should do more battles like this, or practice on your own showing people doing different, or more complex actions.

long post, dont get me wrong it was cool, but if ya lookin on how you might improve, thats my thoughts on it.

the world has ended, Centipede did a battle that was not completely comedy.

anyways great fight people. not sure who I am going to give this to.

These were both pretty awesome.

Nice fight you two.

Bslug: Pretty good, but I honestly expected a lot more from ya hun, story didn\'t make much sence either. Artwise though I like your take on pete, he almost looks entirely human minus a nose.

Hiemie: My faith in you is restored! I honestly didn\'t think you could pull off a fight like this at first, but this proves me wrong. However seeing as how this is your first Fight fight, you gotta watch out for certain things when fists fly. For the most part action was stiff save for when Pete got slammed on the floor, and some of the inks got a tad messy and cluttered as well, keep in mind that you want to give yourself more room for fight sceens so that you can play around and put in more movement, and you\'re sorta putting action panels into very small spaces. But so far this fight looks to be one of your best for pete so far. My vote goes to you.

Awsome fight from the both of you!

Awesome art, slug, I love your version of Pete. The story was short and sweet too, you know how to make the most of your pages. The dialogue was also suitably subtle and deep. Solid entry.

Hiemie, once again, your cleverness pulls through. I loved the turn overs and it\'s good to see you drawing female bodies. The fact that Pete can mimic other people\'s bodies was a surprise, and makes him suddenly much more terrifying, like an angler fish. Votes to you.

angie, that was short and sweet, and wow, we see another side of centipete. That makes me feel sorry for him and his situation. man you rock.

I\'ll comment onhiemie\'s later, sorry hiemie I\'m catching a bus!!

Oh wow, Angie, your side is incredible to me. You accomplish so much on your 3 pages. Envy....

slug intuition says hiemie\'s gonna take it.

STERN FACE IS STERN

This is the battle of the characters whose names people always misspell!

Uploaded. Yup. Not good, but not bad, yet different. See you guys when it comes up.

Both Artists have received an extension.....one week.....deadline pushed forward

LOL CENTIPETE
LOL ANGIE
LOL INTERNET

sooooooo very creepy

Go Deep Hiemie!

At least nobody\'s gonna die this time.  Good luck, both of you, I\'m really looking forward to this.

Two SDT finalists going at each other? Say it isn\'t so...

mmm... more angie~

woah...

I wasn\'t expecting this!

Let\'s see some good stuff here.