One thing that really jumps out at me (and I suffer in this area as well) are your line weights.  All your lines are really thin and basicly the same, some variation can really make certain things pop a whole lot more.

Nice fight robo, I really enjoyed it.  Mind giving me some tips about what exactly I should improve with my art?

Thats the best looking Pi ever robosockmonkey. Nice job both of you.

Garlic, I really liked your side of the fight.  You can use some improvement on your art but your writing is nice.  It was cool how you included the thing obout the alternate form, and the city codes was a nice touch.  keep it up in

Submitted with time to spare -- seven pages, one colored.  Hope you guys like it!

Robosock has received an extension...but since this is Bub\'s first fight, garic must still submit on time

GET \'ER DONE BUB!!!!!

I\'m rooting for robosockmonkey.

don\'t sell yourself short now Robo, remember your fights in the SDT? You\'ve taken down quite a few newcomers that I thought would decimate ya. Your record isn\'t the best one I\'ve seen, but I know you can pull a win if you really try dude.

Garic, I wish you luck in your first fight!

Shure you can win, the only fights I\'ve won with Robosockmonkey were wins by default.  As long as you don\'t default the battle is half won!

This is going to be good, my monkey just went through a change so this is a good time to show the new Robo in action! Later

...wait...what?

there\'s no way I\'m gonna win this one!