Girl vs. Danielle

Girl vs. Danielle

Girl vs. Danielle

by KevJB

52%
900 points
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831 points
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Monday
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# 24   Posted: Sep 23 2006, 04:42 AM
Congrats on your first victory kev. Albeit ILL GOTTEN >:[

KevJB
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# 23   Posted: Sep 20 2006, 05:03 PM
I liked your battle icarus. The facial expressions were good. If it hadn\'t been so rough you probably would have won. Of course voting is not over yet so you might win yet.

jho
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# 22   Posted: Sep 20 2006, 04:02 AM
I almost didnt notice the j.j cameos. I\'m surprised that you get her character down very well, I am amused. XD thanks


I have to give this one to kev, however, the art and story left me wanting to see more, but I like how your story is done in 3 pages as well, neo, it\'s short and sweet. I wish you finished the inking or whatnot, though. but i understand the situation, and awesome for you to actually finish it.

also, man, the way you draw your character almost makes me think that girl is sexy. I DUNNO WHY.

ESG
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# 21   Posted: Sep 19 2006, 11:59 AM
Kev - I was loving your tight comic - the story was easy to follow and the art was very clean. I loved the feral expression on girl at the end. Overall the comic built up the anticipation and left me desperately wanting to know \"what happens next?!\". That\'s a  good thing. If this were a published comic it would have guaranteed the sale of your next issue.

Neo - The plot was cute though I was mildly confused by the ending. I can\'t say this was your best work, but I congratulate you for making a submission anyway. Some people just give up when they find out they might not have enough time, or get too busy. You show dedication. That\'s a  good thing here in Void.

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# 20   Posted: Sep 16 2006, 05:08 PM
Hopefully you finish your story in a Beyond Battle or a rematch or something, KevJB.  Was looking good till it abruptly ended in mid-stream.  In all good conscience, can\'t give a half-done story anything above a B, no matter how much of an improvement it is over your past work.  What you got done was nice though, congrats on that.

Neo\'s was far too short, and (as Phil said) a downgrade from what he/she usually puts out.  QoV notwithstanding, I think both fights are left with alot of unfulfilled potential.

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# 19   Posted: Sep 16 2006, 02:43 PM
Quality nothing, one wasn\'t finished, while the other was but wasn\'t cleaned up.

KevJB: Very nice quality wise, but it looks like you finished the story halfway through, that\'s minus quality points no matter how finished the pages look. I want to be able to read everything from begining to end buddy. Sorry to say, but I cannot give my vote to you. Qualitywise however this is looking a hell of alot better than your last few fights.

Neo Icarus: Wow, not the best thing I\'ve seen from ya, hopefully the next round of the QoV tourney will be lots better than this. Storywise you wern\'t as good as Kev, but it was finished so I gave you the slight edge votewise.

Entertainmenwise, I gave it to danielle. Hopefully next time we\'ll see something better from you two. Keep it up or something?

Scarn
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# 18   Posted: Sep 16 2006, 10:09 AM
KevJB wins in my books. The quality was nice, as was the story.
Danielle, you\'re quality suffered with the sketchy lines, and unfortunately - I was lost when I read your story.

Monday
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# 17   Posted: Sep 16 2006, 02:47 AM
this . . . this made me happy ::E

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# 16   Posted: Sep 15 2006, 03:58 PM
Wow. I deserve this ass-kicking. Great work, KevJB! The quality is definitely up there. It makes me twice as shamed for what I put up. If you\'re up to it, I\'d like to rematch you some day and give you a battle you deserve. :)

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# 15   Posted: Sep 15 2006, 12:12 PM
KevJB, I honestly did not think you would turn in something this well done. now I feel like a jackass for myy rather low expectations.

KevJB
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# 14   Posted: Sep 15 2006, 06:30 AM
This was written well before Harriet died by the way.

NeoIcarus
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# 13   Posted: Sep 15 2006, 05:06 AM
Trust me, KevJB. I know exactly how you feel.

KevJB
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# 12   Posted: Sep 14 2006, 10:57 PM
Sorry I only got half my pages but QoV burned me out.

KevJB
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# 11   Posted: Sep 8 2006, 06:30 PM
Sorry stupid question. Next time I should think before I post.

KevJB
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# 10   Posted: Sep 7 2006, 09:36 PM
Ohh. I already submitted. Can I resubmit later?

Wei Ingnan
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# 9   Posted: Sep 5 2006, 05:34 PM
NeoIcarus has purchased an extension....and as per the new rules....both artists receive an extension....one week

NeoIcarus
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# 8   Posted: Aug 24 2006, 11:51 PM
Actually on her book are markings in her own invented language. I\'ve been meaning to show a better picture of it since...ever. But if it helps she probably has all of your bank records in there anyway. : )

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# 7   Posted: Aug 24 2006, 03:35 PM
Hot damn, this is gonna be some fucked up shit!

Scarn
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# 6   Posted: Aug 24 2006, 02:59 PM
NeoIcarus - Danielles book in here design sheet... does it say SCU on it? Cause thats my bank!... *suddenly feels stupid *....

NeoIcarus
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# 5   Posted: Aug 11 2006, 12:07 AM
That\'s one hell of a prediction. I want to see it come to pass. Though I\'d prefer it if I won in both of those fights. >: )

KevJB
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# 4   Posted: Aug 10 2006, 10:41 PM
Behold the future: I will win this then lose the rematch in the queen finals...

Monday
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# 3   Posted: Aug 10 2006, 09:01 PM
WHo needs the Queen of Void tournament when my dream fight is happenning already >:D

Basu-zo
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# 2   Posted: Aug 10 2006, 06:30 PM
ho\'shit! Danielle Vs. Girl! , one word sums this up....\"awsome >D \"

sixtem
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# 1   Posted: Aug 10 2006, 02:45 PM
Well, to avoid the contraversy of the Cog vs P2 match, I\'m going post something mature:
-WOOZLE WAZZLE-

Oh yeah, and I always love Danielle fights and Girl coming back is great.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Sep 22nd, 2006
Votes Cast: 41
Page Views: 647
Winner: KevJB
 

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