Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Aria Voidcraft vs. Amazing Lobster-boy

Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 — Aria Voidcraft vs. Amazing Lobster-boy

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Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 53   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 07:13 PM
Theres a way for the council to actually view the scores on these battles, so if there was cheating I\'m sure it would be mentioned already by those who have access. So lay off on the cheating accusations

slade - good first start! Story and concept was bland, but decent quality! I\'m sure the more you draw comics the more you\'ll become comfortable with your anatomy and comic flow. Would like to see some more innovative angles, and maybe some dramatic lighting

Kure - Your work is so exciting to look at!!! You\'ve really cut out a unique style for yourself. Nice use of lighting and love the lobster hating lesbo panel! I really enjoyed your fight dude. Seriously kudos. The only thing I want is a little more backgrounds!!

nice battle but kure wins it for me

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 52   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 03:48 PM
i hope so too. i told my friends more to show that i finally completed something (i suffer from cronic procrasination) then to garner votes... everyone that i talk to, i told them: if you vote, vote fair; not because i\'m your friend.

it\'s no fun if all these numbers were fake.

if i found out that a single person i know did it cause it was me, and not cause they though that the art itself, apart from me, was actually worth of winning... i\'m going to be betting them with a large trout... a frozen one... then i\'ll get serious and give them a long talking to.

(trust me... i come from a family of talkaholics. the one thing that really bugs my friends is the length at which i can speak when i get on a roll. you think any of my post are long winded, you don\'t know the half of it...)

Guru
Artist
31 comments
# 51   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 03:25 PM
the voting concept on this site always gets to me.  Its bad enough that fan favoritism seems to be more important then ACTUAL art and story.  But the votes or voters are willing to cheat for thier friends or whatever....bleh.
  I hope this fight really has a lot of weird voting trends and its not just foul shit.

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 50   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 01:50 PM
Yeah right, 124 votes is ridiculious.
This battle and the fighers are getting extremely screwed up.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 49   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 01:11 PM
tug of war, dude!

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 48   Posted: Jun 25 2006, 01:31 AM
Wow 116 votes, never seen that many ever, and the percentages KEEP fluctuating.

TenshiNoShin
29 comments
# 47   Posted: Jun 24 2006, 02:08 AM
Great battles, both of you ^_^

And just so you know, Kure, even if the Lobsta goes down, he\'s one of your best characters yet!

Rax
Artist
117 comments
# 46   Posted: Jun 23 2006, 11:49 PM
Wow, 50/50 exactly as is. I don\'t remember who I gave the edge in my votes, but this is absolutely the closesest battle of the first round. Its still teetering both ways. Can\'t wait to see who comes out the victor in this one.

Slade: Congrats on being able to go toe to toe with Kure, thats really impressive for a newbie. Its not too unbelievable though, you backed it upi with a great comic. Overall it was full of action, but I\'ll admit it was a bit contrite. Not panel for paenl, but you really did see what was coming. You\'ve got to work on your creativity.

Kure: Another great comic. Very easy flowing and readable. I really enjoyed it although it seemed like a short fight. Good stuff over all.

Snapped Chopstick
15 comments
# 45   Posted: Jun 23 2006, 03:35 PM
Slade13: Your quality is decent, but MAN that plot and writing was a yawn-a-minute.  She cooked and ate her lobster opponent... wow... never saw that coming.  

Kure: I\'m always a bit biased towards your stuff, but I swear... it\'s because your quality kicks my ass.  The pacing on this one did seem a bit crammed-together, but all in all it was another solid submission from you.  Love your attention to detail, and it\'s those little background comments that crack me up.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 44   Posted: Jun 23 2006, 06:21 AM
All I have to say really, is that projectile vomit wins me over any day!

Slade13: Not bad, not bad at all, only thing I can really point out is that the penciled quality of your comic sorta gives it an unfinished look, mind you it was good however. Other than that I\'m glad your first comic wasn\'t too shabby. Though I think it\'s best you lay off the leave a comment button for a bit, you don\'t need to explain yourself to us dude.

Kure: Once again your inks are top notch dude, I really cannot point out anything that really needs to be fixed man. But your overall humor won the vote from me.


Both of you had a great comic, sucks that one will be leaving shortly, but question is who... this is way too close to decide.

Joe
7 comments
# 43   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 10:40 PM
\"He eats his chowda
He grinds ya to powda
He\'s the amazin Lobsta boy!
TOOT TOOT!\"

Kure gets my vote just for that

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 42   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 05:57 PM
the reason for the thick lines was to give a sence of depth. that what i was going for at least.
oh well.

johnparks
Artist
43 comments
# 41   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 11:40 AM
As far as the battle goes you guys are pretty even…

Slade- I like your line work and your story. I think the shading could have been better, the pencil shading just did do much for me. Also the fire on page nine and ten was weakly drawn when compared to the rest of the story. You also thicken your outline around the characters in some panels but not others… I think it works well when you do it. You might want to play with that some more.

Kure- I loved all the cameos and the Popeye reference… There were a couple of panels that I found hard to read… namely on page four I had to go back and look at it again. The panel where lobster’s mouth opens up, I first thought that was one of his claws with some type of hole in it. And then when he hits her… I first thought she was jumping up into the air and after seeing the next panel had to look back up to make sense of what was happening. Those are little things.. but for me it broke up the flow of the story since I had to take some time to figure out what was happening.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 40   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 12:19 AM
indeed, a very nice battle. today i watched as it\'s been gravitating around .4 to 50/50 difference... i think ours is a very close battle. and with two more days, who knows who will win.

i\'ve said it before, i\'ll say it again: if you win kure, become the champion! i want to draw alb again!

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 39   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 08:44 PM
ph and FYI lobsters luuuurve the clams and pretty uch anything they can find in the water that isnt gunna eat them first :P

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 38   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 07:33 PM
ooo neck and neck! Nice battle slade!

Robosockmonkey
Artist
109 comments
# 37   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 06:45 PM
Both entries were really good.  Slade good first battle, and Kure you hade some nice humor in there.  I gave this to Slade, but really I think you both deserve it, I don\'t know, good job you two.

PONBIKI
Artist
185 comments
# 36   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 04:59 PM
slade.. awesome job at one poing i needed to relook at a page cuase i got lost in panel work but you pull trough love the pencils great job.

kure.. awesome job too. love the your style and your color job.  i had no problem  with your entry.
awesome job the both of yous.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 35   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 04:19 PM
thanks dingo... in truth, this is the first comic i finished (not counting my intro of course)

... i still need to work on my backgrounds... but seeing them on this site some how makes them look a lot less sucky. i don\'t know why, but it\'s like i\'m looking at someone else\'s work.

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 34   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 03:41 PM
damnit, this was another hard one to vote on  @____@
man slade, i didn\'t realize you were so awesome at doing comics, and all the action poses  XD  that was just a fun read. cute, too.
kure\'s was funneh  83   goddamnit, i don\'t wanna see either of you guys lose  >.<

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 33   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 02:47 PM
she also didn\'t know that lobsters liked clam chowder...

don\'t worry kure, she really did like it. she just liked mine better. of course i am her son...

no worries though, i\'m not letting her vote. person interest might skew the other wise really cool and tedious back and forth.

queen mega bufoo bitch (my mom... and this really would be the handle if she were on this site, no joke.):
\'if you win this round, you better win them all. i\'ll be rooting (damn spelling...) for you! ...and i\'ll be watching.\"

kure, you win here, you really should win them all... beware the wrath of mom!

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 32   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 02:40 PM
my mom said (and i\'m not kinda here) \'kure used chump way too many times (slade: hey, but i got a kick out of it), had bad taste with the \'lesbo\'  comment, and was lame with the popeye deal (slade: again i thought it was cool...)\'.

she also said that kure should have gone with a bugs bunny rip-off instead.

...no really, these were my mom\'s comments. (she wants me to win... but she wants me to fry alb again... but that will require him to win... a conondrum...)

chunkplex
Artist
184 comments
# 31   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 01:34 PM
Wow, close fight. Great job, both of you!

Both of you did pretty good for a week\'s time. I had to give you guys the same marks for creativity and entertainment, but Kure edged past Slade in the quality department. Your art was good Slade, and the action was very present, but I feel Kure\'s just has more appeal to it.

you should both be happy for posting two cool entries!

fishbot
Artist
86 comments
# 30   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 12:18 PM
slade: death by cooking is the way too obvious way to go, i was hoping for something a little more inspired, but it was still a good fight.the pencil shading seemed a bit rough so your quality isnt as high as it could be. the proportions you gave lobsterboy kinda weird me out, but thats a little thing.

kure: i enjoyed it. like always, your look is very finished. entertaining fight, and that looks like a painful way to go. great cameos.


Viperchief
Artist
210 comments
# 29   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 11:58 AM
Nice fight Slade, though I\'m big on the inked outline/pencil shading combo.  Had good flow and a great death, made me hungry.  Nice work, good luck.

Kure\'s the shit, really enjoyed this one.  It was easier to follow than usual and alot of fun to read.  I\'ll be quoting that chowder line for awhile.  Good shit dude.

This one\'s gonna come down to the wire, both are excellent fights, good luck you two.

Neoriceisgood
Artist
74 comments
# 28   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 11:12 AM
Man I hate it when it\'s so hard to pick a vote, especially in deathmatches.

Slade: It was absolutely awesome that a non-twisted or mentally disturbed character actually -eats- another character, and I\'m guessing that, plus the fact that it was a bit easier to follow, will make me give you the upper hand in voting,

Though Kures battle was nice aswell, and I\'d really like to see Lobster Boy survive the SDT to fight JJet, I can\'t vote for a character I like when I like the other battle beter; Nice work to you both!

PhantomLee202
7 comments
# 27   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 07:01 AM
Foosh me Kure, you broke out the old crazy for that one. Awesome work, reminds me of some of you\'re older stuff (script wise), and it\'s nice to see your pulling the old stuff back and combining it with the new style, good work man!

Viscupelo
9 comments
# 26   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 06:20 AM
Oh my freakin\' gawd, you ate Lobster Boy! ;.;

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 25   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 05:49 AM
sorry about the handlettering... but i didn\'t have enough time to do it on the compy. i\'ll work on that in the next round if i make it.

drawdan
Artist
321 comments
# 24   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 05:45 AM
I think this battle is gonna be a close one. I have to give it to Slade, your battle helb my interest a little more, was easy to follow- had some good fighting and solid consistant quality. My only gripe is that Im not a big fan of hand lettered comics. PC lettered looks so much better, would have complamented your art nicely, and is easyer to read.

Kure- I love your toon-I think hes one of the more interesting entered into the STD and looks like alot of fun to draw. I liked your entry- I got lost a little here and there in your layouts but the style of your art is very cool. I think the color work you did for your model sheet might hace clarifyed your layouts a little better.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 23   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 05:22 AM
wow. kure... i think if i make it to the next round, i shall pay homage to you work.

the \'chump\' shall stay.

might even squeze in the wheel at somepoint... ya never know. great work man!

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 22   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 05:10 AM
Slade, seriously, you\'re one of my favorite artists now. I think I gave Kure the slight bump on entertainment, but that\'s ti.

Kure: This battle looked great, my only issue is your chicks sometimes look a bit too masculine, I think it\'s the face shape/features. Entertaining battle too \"EW! LOBSTER MOUTH!\"

Slade: DAMN! One hell of a way to break into VOID! A high quality battle for any length of time, let alone a weak. Very entertaining, top-notch quality as well. I don\'t really have any critiques, JUST KEEP BEING THIS AWESOME.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 21   Posted: Jun 19 2006, 05:20 PM
uploading right now... in a hurry, so i\'ll just say that when all this become visible, please forgive the slanty ness of all the pages. i didn\'t have the time to straighten them out.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 19 2006, 05:20 AM
indeed. as i type, i\'m working on the last 3 1/2 pages... got the lettering almost finished and most of the pencils too. if i get my pencils done well enough (which it\'s looking fairly good all things concidered) the inks should be a breeze... well, back to work for me.

by the way... i wasn\'t kidding before about a.l.b. being fun to draw... it\'s been a blast... and should i lose to you, kure, don\'t you lose this tourney, got that!!!

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 19 2006, 01:04 AM
mmm countdown

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 18 2006, 04:55 PM
He should be added to Kure and his undead posse if he croaks

jv7x
Artist
99 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 18 2006, 01:12 PM
Lobster-boy is indeed awesome, but this is the SDT and I\'ve conditioned myself over the last 3 years to not grow to attached to awesome characters...they just break your heart!!  Good luck you two.

JV

johnparks
Artist
43 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 16 2006, 12:14 PM
Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 16 2006, 03:54 AM
what do you mean \'wu-fai\'?

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 15 2006, 08:24 PM
lobster....  <3

if he dies, you have to bring him back to life  :<
 i wanna fight him. plus he\'s a cutie.

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 15 2006, 01:49 PM
WU-FAI!??!

Viperchief
Artist
210 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 15 2006, 05:49 AM
If nothing else, one of my goals in this tourny is to survive long enough to fight this guy Kure.  He\'s fuckin cool.  Lets see some sequential magic you two.

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 14 2006, 02:16 PM
damn... i almost want to throw the battle... lobster-boy sure is fun to draw... but i\'m still going for the win. damn, dude, why couldn\'t you have made this nut a regular character? his claws are especially fun to draw...

M.E. Charm
Artist
89 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 14 2006, 12:20 PM
I just.. had a thought..
I really don\'t want Lobsterboy to die! D\':

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 14 2006, 02:40 AM
that\'s not why i studied. i noticed that there are various folks on void that tend to either be a bit less talented or (the more improtant one) not complete their works fully... and i found that kure is neither.

(by the way, did my \'research\' -read sat on ass enojoying the huge archive- before this tournament began.)

i have my work cut out for me. first round and i really have to prove myself.

for me, this battle is a true right of passage. (in the comic book sence at least)...

now i get back to work... my break is over.

chamba
Artist
30 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 11:54 PM
lobster OHYEH!!


i look forward to both entries

Fuudasha
Artist
92 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 08:21 PM
Slade, the only research you should be doing is on the world of comics and your place in them.  Spend too much time predicting what Kure\'s gonna do, and he\'ll flip your ass right over.  Good luck you guys!

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 04:16 PM
prophet mode: i see two great comics, that no matter who wins, many will injoy for a great time to come...

end prophet mode.

kure ji ori
Artist
254 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 03:10 PM
good luck to ya slade, this shoud be an interesting match up

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 10:38 AM
no worries... being a noob and being stupid are two different things...

noobs are ignorant... but unlike other noobs, i\'ve done a bit of research. i\'ll give him a good \'fight\' at least. though i am going for the win. well on with the show.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 06:30 AM
No offence slade13, but I\'m rooting for Kure here, he almost made it to the finals last year, so don\'t let your guard down!

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 03:44 AM
kure do your best!! I love lobsterboy!!

Pepper JAQ
Artist
212 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 03:05 AM
awesome... i got the crustacean first... i had a fun plan for you.. hehehe.

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