Hiemie - I gave you better quality for putting effort into your coloring your work and what not =P but your story didnt grab me at all. It was kind of random in a confusing manner.
dawgmastas - I totally give my creativity and entertainment points to you. The 5th and 6th pages were great, and your story was easier to follow. Funny too =P
Good work both of your guyss
Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Polar Pal vs. Mandrake
Critiques & Comments
# 24
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 08:01 PM
# 23
Posted:
Jun 23 2006, 11:52 PM
Sexcellent comment all the way. I really enjoyed the 20s slang but alot of it seemed forced.
Hiemie: Good stuff overall. Not teh creepiest polar pal, but you still handled is creepy deamanor well overall. Most of the comic was humorous even if you didnt intend it too be taht way.
Dawg: Good stuff. I\'ll agree with pong on the whole page transition joke giving me quite a chuckle. I thought the way you killed PP was a bit weak. It would have worked if ihe was made of snow and not nanobytes.
Hiemie: Good stuff overall. Not teh creepiest polar pal, but you still handled is creepy deamanor well overall. Most of the comic was humorous even if you didnt intend it too be taht way.
Dawg: Good stuff. I\'ll agree with pong on the whole page transition joke giving me quite a chuckle. I thought the way you killed PP was a bit weak. It would have worked if ihe was made of snow and not nanobytes.
# 22
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 12:35 AM
both of you did great for the first round, i just felt the hiemie had a bit more polish.
# 21
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 09:43 PM
I\'m giving it to Hiemie. I thought his was far more clever, and the art was certainly better (and more ambitious, too!).
# 20
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 08:41 PM
1920\'s slang.
# 19
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 07:31 PM
Hiemie, your\'s was goos. I liked your use of watercolor, and paint. And did you cut out all the panels and put them ontop of something else? If so it turned out well. It could use a little more refinement though.
Dawg, really funny battle. No reall other comments, I gave the wwin to you in this one.
Dawg, really funny battle. No reall other comments, I gave the wwin to you in this one.
# 18
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 05:44 PM
I wasn\'t trying to be completely funny.
# 17
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 05:23 PM
Ah, Hiemie. That was pretty swell. Artwise, I was very impressed. Thumbs up.
# 16
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 05:02 PM
man both were funny i though dawgs was funnier with the whole canser thingy no one ever lost because of that but the he cured him...which let me down..he could have gone with that in somany different ways.. funny though.
hiemie was awesome too but not as funny as hes usual stuff. your work is improving alot too
keep it up.
awesome job both of yous.
hiemie was awesome too but not as funny as hes usual stuff. your work is improving alot too
keep it up.
awesome job both of yous.
# 15
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 03:13 PM
Wow. I have never laughed so hard at anything on void as I did for the transistion from page five to six in Dawgmastas\' comic. Dawg gets my vote for entertainment.
Hiemie\'s art was excellent but the story just never really caught me it seemed like the comic could have been a little shorter and actually read better that way. Anyway maybe Polar Pal isn\'t as a bad a character as I told you he was Hiemie.
Hiemie\'s art was excellent but the story just never really caught me it seemed like the comic could have been a little shorter and actually read better that way. Anyway maybe Polar Pal isn\'t as a bad a character as I told you he was Hiemie.
# 14
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 01:45 PM
Very funny guys.
Heimie\'s use of traditional mediums is very unique, but still seems to need some more refinement. Good of you to go that route Heimie, I know I couldn\'t pull it off. Dawg, your battle, although very entertaining, didn\'t catch me as much as Heimie\'s.
Polar Pal = teh win
Heimie\'s use of traditional mediums is very unique, but still seems to need some more refinement. Good of you to go that route Heimie, I know I couldn\'t pull it off. Dawg, your battle, although very entertaining, didn\'t catch me as much as Heimie\'s.
Polar Pal = teh win
# 13
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 12:06 PM
Those kicked ass, Hiemie\'s was definitely more consistent story wise and he always gets points for the traditional medium. My vote tips slighty in his favor. Good fight fellas.
# 12
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 10:37 PM
Haha, Kure, you just made me laugh for like 5 minutes minutes straight.
And good luck to you as well, Hiemie. May the best man/snowman win.
And good luck to you as well, Hiemie. May the best man/snowman win.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 10:19 PM
Good luck friend. Let\'s hope this is a good show. Friend.
# 10
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 08:43 PM
WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?! D:
DAWG!
DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWG!
DAWG!
DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWG!
# 9
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 08:38 PM
My arm is dead, but I\'m uploaded as well. I really enjoy this comic, so hopefully everyone else will as well.
PS: If you have any 1920\'s piano music laying around, it\'d be perfect to listen to while reading this.
PS x 2: Kure, you just broke my heart :\'(
PS: If you have any 1920\'s piano music laying around, it\'d be perfect to listen to while reading this.
PS x 2: Kure, you just broke my heart :\'(
# 8
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 06:35 PM
My side is uploaded hopefully... friend.
# 7
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 11:43 AM
dawg i loves ya but im rooting for heimie on this one, polar pal ROX XD
# 6
Posted:
Jun 18 2006, 01:04 PM
Wow, what are the chances these two would end up being paired against each other! I smell hijinks a-brewing.
JV
JV
# 5
Posted:
Jun 16 2006, 12:13 PM
Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!
# 4
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 11:02 AM
What ever you say..................friend............
# 3
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 03:35 AM
I hope you will enjoy this match. Friends.
# 2
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 01:32 AM
Sweet! I had told Anonymoo that I wanted this to be the final, but this works too.
# 1
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 12:55 AM
KICK HIS ASS!
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jun 25th, 2006
Votes Cast:
76
Page Views:
1771
Winner:
Hiemie
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