both of these looked pretty unfinished, but seeing as it\'s only a weeks drawing time that can be understandable. I wasn\'t too impressed story wise for either of these. Timo\'s got my vote because it had a little more in each area.
sorry if that came off harsh
Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Slide vs. Creamy Orlando
Critiques & Comments
# 20
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 07:39 PM
# 19
Posted:
Jun 24 2006, 11:46 PM
wait untill the next round baby!
all i\'m saying.
all i\'m saying.
# 18
Posted:
Jun 24 2006, 11:38 PM
I mean the massive boner death
that would have been funny
that would have been funny
# 17
Posted:
Jun 24 2006, 11:38 PM
At least timo had an ending. Although he should have died from having a massive boner !!! Messy and laaazy work from you, but im sure you enjoyed the beach!
Pi is that a blur effect at the end of your fight or is the image not loading properly. If its a blur then I suggest avoiding them forever. Keep practicing your line work, and try to get some basic perspective down so you can start drawing in some backgrounds. Its hard to crank out so many pages when your basics are still in the air, so I commend you on your efforts. Keep drawing at all times!!!
That would have been funny
Pi is that a blur effect at the end of your fight or is the image not loading properly. If its a blur then I suggest avoiding them forever. Keep practicing your line work, and try to get some basic perspective down so you can start drawing in some backgrounds. Its hard to crank out so many pages when your basics are still in the air, so I commend you on your efforts. Keep drawing at all times!!!
That would have been funny
# 16
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 12:48 PM
I don\'t think either battle stood out as the winner. I scored them both pretty low. One will go on but if this is the amount of effort that we can expect to see then I don\'t seeing the winner getting very far.
Sorry if that sounds harsh.
JV
Sorry if that sounds harsh.
JV
# 15
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 02:59 AM
Somehow, some way, Timo makes white-space-text-endings acceptable to read.
Pi: I honestly think I wasted time reading this comic. Seriously. There was little to no representation of what Timo\'s character should be, and of all plots to run, a \"tournament\" fight? Not only that, the quality wasn\'t up to game as your current fights get.
Timo: I do have my complaints about deathmatches not having \'deaths\' in them, but I give you the vote on all three scores. Your lines had more attitude and style behind them, and I could really feel the characters better in this one, despite the blunt-humor ending.
Pi: I honestly think I wasted time reading this comic. Seriously. There was little to no representation of what Timo\'s character should be, and of all plots to run, a \"tournament\" fight? Not only that, the quality wasn\'t up to game as your current fights get.
Timo: I do have my complaints about deathmatches not having \'deaths\' in them, but I give you the vote on all three scores. Your lines had more attitude and style behind them, and I could really feel the characters better in this one, despite the blunt-humor ending.
# 14
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 12:43 AM
I was a little dissapoinbted that there wasn\'t a clear death in either fight, Pi sort of but not completly. Anyways...
Why is Timmy so old in your fight Timo? That\'s all, both were pretty cool and interesting takes on each other\'s characters.
Why is Timmy so old in your fight Timo? That\'s all, both were pretty cool and interesting takes on each other\'s characters.
# 13
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 10:46 PM
i suck!
pretty good pi, expecially for all the problems you were having in your regular life.
pretty good pi, expecially for all the problems you were having in your regular life.
# 12
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 05:17 PM
pi another awesome entry by you,,,this one and your gabo fight... i went with yours cuase it was more entertaining. and you did good. keep it up
timo. i love your style soo much but it lacked a fight even if there was no death. the ending was blah dint care much for it. he could have died of a heart attack hhahaha some people die of heart attacks after taking to many viagra(i heard on the news)...that would had been ok.
you got my quality vote but thats the most of it.
awesome job the both of yous.
timo. i love your style soo much but it lacked a fight even if there was no death. the ending was blah dint care much for it. he could have died of a heart attack hhahaha some people die of heart attacks after taking to many viagra(i heard on the news)...that would had been ok.
you got my quality vote but thats the most of it.
awesome job the both of yous.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 01:37 PM
Why is Timmy so old?
Funny comic, Timo, I wish there was some death...
Funny comic, Timo, I wish there was some death...
# 10
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 08:28 AM
i don\'t like to kill people.
it\'s against my religion.
it\'s against my religion.
# 9
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 08:25 AM
I see no death, Timo. D:
# 8
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 06:46 AM
... um... yeah. interesting... timo... that was a wrong ending... (adding to a list of things i really didn\'t need to know: 133,543,276; \'slide is gay for creamy\')
nice work both of you.
nice work both of you.
# 7
Posted:
Jun 20 2006, 07:37 PM
i have no real exscuse other than i was at the beach with my girlfriend.
and it was worth it.
and it was worth it.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 20 2006, 01:21 PM
Ah well, I didn\'t get it as finished as I would have liked. I lost a lot of time starting on a new job, which I got back from last night about 1-2 hours after deadline. I hope everything got submitted okay, I would\'ve kept working and re-submitting last night, but some shit got stirred up in the family, and I wasn\'t able to continue. That said, I still hope you like it, I think I got Carpel-Tunnel from all the rush drawing I did this weekend, in my very little free time.
# 5
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 08:07 PM
GOD HELP ME I TRIED.
at least the last page is pretty funny.
at least the last page is pretty funny.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 18 2006, 10:35 PM
i started on this wayyyy too late.
BUT I WILL TROOP ON
BUT I WILL TROOP ON
# 3
Posted:
Jun 16 2006, 12:13 PM
Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 10:56 PM
Pi, I better see a WIN from you.
# 1
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 02:30 AM
Full of creamy goodness.
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jun 25th, 2006
Votes Cast:
55
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1871
Winner:
Timo
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Timo, Creamy Orlando reminds me of Valentino Rossi.
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