Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Niklas Lu`Reed vs. The White Dwarf

Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Niklas Lu`Reed vs. The White Dwarf

Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 — Niklas Lu`Reed vs. The White Dwarf

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by drawdan

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# 8   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 09:57 AM
Jake- Your pasting is good, the general flow works well. You need to spend more time working on the art work. I suggest focusing on fewer pages and putting more time into completing those pages… One issue you have is your angles. Most of your shots are either straight on from the front or side… you need to mix it up a bit. Try to work in more worms-bird-what have you eye views. I think it will really help a lot with your art.

Dan- As I said to you in person… I think this is one of your better battles. I really enjoyed it and I think you make a lot of improvements in your artwork. Some specific issues…

- First page, first panel… the foreshortening on the doctor and white dwarf looks great… but the army guy’s legs are showing too much. They should be more tucked under him.
- On page three, first panel we get a fairly good size comparison for the two fighters with WD in his true form. Then on page five WD seems much larger… this could be just him choosing to be bigger… but it does stand out, just something to think about.

Over all through great work.

# 7   Posted: Jun 22 2006, 12:21 AM
jake, you need to put more effort into your art. other than that, you got a good grasp of action. so just polish it up a bit. better paneling, cleaner pages, etc. also, NO HADOKENS! theyve been outlawed in comics since 1996.

drawdan. the sheer amount of BG impresses me to no end. you are a man with a mission. great fight, great story, gory ending. awesome work man,

# 6   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 04:13 PM
Haha! Glad I was good for something!

# 5   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 03:54 PM
Thx-Im pretty happy with this battle, I enjoyed drawing your toon. Thanks to your character\'s background, I was actually able to use this first battle as a chance to broden my toons personality.

# 4   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 01:32 PM
Awesome job kicking my ass Drawdan, congrats on the win (I think it\'s safe to congrat you at this point ^^;;) Sorry I couldnt give you guys something more complete, but I\'m glad I got this much in atleast.

# 3   Posted: Jun 17 2006, 09:21 PM
I like these characters.  It\'s a shame one of them has to die.  Good luck to you both.  


# 2   Posted: Jun 16 2006, 12:12 PM
Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!

# 1   Posted: Jun 13 2006, 08:19 AM
Awesome, I\'ll be sure to make this a fun match!

Comic Details -

Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 25th, 2006
Votes Cast: 52
Page Views: 1010
Winner: drawdan

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