Jake vs. Sleeman Bragg
Critiques & Comments
# 12
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 07:41 PM
I liked the unfinishedness, it showed process, you know? I like how you set up vanishing points and everything.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 08:40 PM
spaceninja: i really liked your comic, even though it wasn\'t finished. it kinda threw me off jumping from colour page to B&W page (but damn, those colour pages were awesome). hopefully next fight you can have a whole comic done, but at least you submitted what you had :3 even though it was unfinished, it was pretty entertaining. just a bit low points for quality because of the un-finishedness and inconsistency of pages.
chunkplex: eh.....to be honest, it was a little boring. didn\'t really do much for me. love the art though, and everything being finished gave you high points in quality, but the points dropped in entertainment.
chunkplex: eh.....to be honest, it was a little boring. didn\'t really do much for me. love the art though, and everything being finished gave you high points in quality, but the points dropped in entertainment.
# 10
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 11:37 PM
I hope you had a good time with your first battle spaceninja. I\'m eager to see your entry as well. I feel that mine is pretty lame, story-wise. I\'ve been feeling very uninspired lately and this battle reflects that. Anyways, I\'m sorry I didn\'t do more with this because really wanted to.
# 9
Posted:
May 30 2006, 11:55 PM
Well I\'m uploaded. I was a little bit too ambitious with the art in this and 5 of 9 pages (the first two are stacked because of the panelling) aren\'t colored, 3 of which aren\'t inked. Next time I\'ll probably try to finish inking before I start on colors or something crazy like that.
Can\'t wait to see your side Chunk.
Can\'t wait to see your side Chunk.
# 8
Posted:
May 22 2006, 08:53 AM
Chunk has purchased an extension.....SpaceNinja must still submit on time
# 7
Posted:
May 11 2006, 12:06 AM
I like jake! awesome!
Bragg do your best!
Bragg do your best!
# 6
Posted:
May 9 2006, 02:43 PM
yeah!... let\'s go!
# 5
Posted:
May 4 2006, 12:36 PM
I you default spaceninja, i will detonate the explosive chip that is implanted in your brain...
# 4
Posted:
May 2 2006, 10:28 PM
Oooh, noice.
# 3
Posted:
May 2 2006, 09:23 PM
Go go Spaceninja!!
# 2
Posted:
May 2 2006, 04:36 PM
lookin forward to your first fight ninja my man dont dissapoint!
# 1
Posted:
May 2 2006, 04:19 PM
Jake finally gets in. Nice.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 15th, 2006
Votes Cast:
32
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1501
Winner:
chunkplex
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I loved the way you portrayed Jake even if it was a little anticlimactic, Chunk.
And thanks Wei, you really saved my ass with the whole uploading thing.