4am : u suprised me! aside from the excessive narative kura was talking about, very good. your color scheme in your layout is tight!

ramp : i was really into your comic, i get 2 the last page, & u ended it on me all abruptly!?!
....i was like \"what happens next?\" .....\"did they beat his ass?\" just wanted 2 c more i guess. woulda been dope with color ofcourse, i can overlook that. i voted REAL close, so im not sure who benifited, but i wanna c u go OFF next time!!!
...good luck 2 u both.

I don\'t have anything useful to say, but I will comment that Shrapnel Girl always looks coked up.

I disagre, I enjoyed the running narrative in 4:00am\'s comic, which was managed without any detriment to the action.  I\'m sick of battles with no text at all, or with only taunts and cheesy-one-liners.  It\'s lazy.
So well done, my high marks go to you, 4:00am.

Thanx Wyvern,
Yea it seem like a good story for it, but there was soooooo much i wanted to do w/ this but I guess it was bad timing on my part.

You know I liked this 4:00am, and you know what I think of it.  Well done, with its areas of weakness (duely pointed out by Kure), but still, good stuff.  Impressive effort!

Rampage - not bad man, it seemed like an interesting idea, but its too bad you couldn\'t do more with it.  Hopefully next time!

ShrapnelGirl: I told you about it offline, but ill repost it here because other people might find the information useful.  There is WAAAY too much narritive used in this comic.  The massive amounts of text to read took my attention away from the actual artwork.  You don\'t have to explain every single detail in every single panel, the pictures should do that already.

Rampage: It\'s a shame your entry isn\'t finished, but the things that are bothering me are the super itty-bitty waists your give your figures.  I know you have a defined style, but that\'s still way too thin of a waist for it to be proportionally correct.  This is most eviden in Shrapnel Girl and Rampage on that last page.

Nice one Shrapnel... although it seems the last page was uploaded at a really high dpi, its massive!  Even so, your story was creative, funny, and delightfully gory all at once!

Rampage, I like the way you draw, but I couldn\'t really get into the comic since it just sort of... doesn\'t end, plus you didn\'t get beyond the sketches.  Props for getting for pages at least put up though.

Rampage has purchased an extension....one week

: )  thanx!!!

             Good luck to that bad-ass warrior known as rampage.

damn you two! You can\'t make me decide between you two I won\'t...I won\'t...I won\'t do it. Fuck you both and have a clean fight. Oh and Shrapy...bring out the bruiser!!!! YEAH! FUCK YEAH! IT\'S PARTY TIME! EXCELLENT!!! (guitar sounds-fade out)

HOtdamns ! good lucks both of youse especially 4am, I hope you can get your score up with another smashing battle aye ? Rampage is quite a guy to beat.