Borris Jackknife vs. Cog

Borris Jackknife vs. Cog

Borris Jackknife vs. Cog

49.6%
838 points
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by Jack

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852 points
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King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 28   Posted: Dec 23 2005, 07:23 PM
BBJ: your comic was incredibly entertaining, but the art was really rough in places.  With a little more effort it would have been a very good comic.

TWJ: Your comic was also pretty entertaining, but not quite as much your opponents, however, it was for the most part drawn very well.

In my eyes it was a trade off, both comics were pretty much equally good overall, but for different reasons.

 

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 27   Posted: Dec 22 2005, 12:13 PM
Critiques are good, thanks for the advice everyone (and the compliments too!) Jacky boy, oh the pain! But I knew someone would eventually go this route with the whole Pirate thing...EVENTUALLY! My heart wasnt ready for that so soon! But it was funny as Hell anyway! Nice job with the pirate speech too!

Steffox
Artist
44 comments
# 26   Posted: Dec 22 2005, 05:21 AM
Wow, Jake... that has got to be one of the FUNNIEST battles ever. That was AWESOME! ^_^ I\'m still grinning. And Wolfboy, blast if yours wasn\'t funny, too. Two really funny entries... this is a really tough one...

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 25   Posted: Dec 20 2005, 06:22 PM
Holy damn Jake! You shock and amaze! I was wondering how that particular side of Cog\'s potential would play out, good show in not listening! (And I do believe that cocoa thing will be haunting him from hereon in. XD)

Aaaand I just realized a page is missing, ah well, not too important a page anyway...

Jay
109 comments
# 24   Posted: Dec 20 2005, 04:23 PM
Damn Jake. This guys\' been pissin\' his pants every single day to see this finally up. It\'s true I saw him it wasn\'t a pretty sight and the smell was horendous. Right NeoIcirus? \'snicker\'
mmmmmm...snickers...i\'m hungry
you guys did great! hookers and beer for the both of you! YAY!

(Pi)
Artist
475 comments
# 23   Posted: Dec 20 2005, 01:18 PM
Looks like everyone else the main stuff on anatomy, so I\'ll give you some other pointers.

Jake - you\'ve got a decent knowledge of perspective, but, as I learned recently, it\'s better to have your horizon line below the top of the panel in visible sight. Something about keeping things straight or what-not. Anywho, this would be applicable in the last two panels of page one, as well as the first panel of page two. Your poses look really stiff, you might want to do some motion studies. Specifically, I\'m refering to your walking poses (ie, Danielle walking away with her right arm moving in stride with her right leg) but your fight poses could use some work too. Also, foreshortening. Page seven\'s panels seven and eleven both need better foreshortening, which is something that will get better only with practice. Other than that, you have some real funny bits and some creativity to boot.

Jack - very impressive use of color in this fight. I like the story, the art is nice (you could use some work on anatomy though, too), and an all around cool piece of work. The little jokes were awesome, and that fire looked damn cool. That last page though... SICK! You\'re a dirty man, my friend, and I hope you keep bringing it.

Both of you guys, keep it up.

Reef
2 comments
# 22   Posted: Dec 20 2005, 12:20 AM
Both of you were great! I had a good laugh reading them. Although Borris needs a bit of work in anatomy. Otherwise both were excellent. And i didn\'t notice what Monday said about Cog\'s comics until now. Little details like that are always fun to keep an eye out.

NeoIcarus
Artist
115 comments
# 21   Posted: Dec 19 2005, 11:20 PM
NOTE: Cog\'s last page doesn\'t show because it links to a \"png\" file. If you replace the \".png\" in your address bar with \".jpg\", you can see it. I found the secret, yay!

Good fight from the both of you. I\'m glad it\'s finally up.

Monday
Artist
936 comments
# 20   Posted: Dec 19 2005, 11:07 PM
GATDAAAMN now this is a fight with no empty words !! GETIT !??! HAHAHAHAHAHA man i\'m so sm3rt. *writes this down.

DTha Cogent Assassin: your pages bleed with orignality and classy middleschool humor (cause its the best kind of humor) and not just that; its reiinforced by stylish art and choice colouring. I like how you use only theme colors that pertain to your character and your opponnent. BUT IM SURE I WAS ONE JOKE TOO SHORT WHEN I COULDN\"T READ THE FINAL PAGE ! *executes your grandmother. ehem anyways, Its finally good to hear from you. I can\'t wait to see your OTHER BATTLE. hint hint. threaten threaten

Jackis BOrrknife : I LEARNED A NEW WORD TODAY BECAUSE OF YOU!  Awright you got humour and you got dynamic battle element on your side. It seems you were having a field day with Cog\'s abilities and you worked in a lot of laughs too involving his characters past. A MAJOR plusplzthankyouverymuch.  BUt as easy as it was to execute an entertaining read, you should also mind the visuals. namely the anatomy, I can see that you draw adult anatomy almost similar to teenage pirates. A COMMON MISCONCEPTION. I probably woulnd\'t\'ve minded but compared against Cog\'s its something you cant ignore in a battle. BUt dont let it discourage you, it was an entertaining read overall.

Good battles both of you, I see you gave this quite the earshot * chuckle*

YESS!!

*writes this down

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 19   Posted: Dec 18 2005, 05:36 PM
more technical difficulties...due to original errors....Toast has been informed

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 18   Posted: Dec 18 2005, 12:21 AM
Likewise! Yikes!

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 17   Posted: Dec 17 2005, 05:09 PM
The anticipation is killing me! Argh!

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 16   Posted: Dec 17 2005, 04:11 PM
Hmmm...I resubmitted right before the last post...what\'s taking now?

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 15   Posted: Dec 16 2005, 06:45 PM
I SAW THAT! >:(

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 14   Posted: Dec 15 2005, 11:05 PM
Ah, so that\'s what\'s holding this fight up? I\'ve been checking the computer every 30 minutes for the last two days to check and see if the fight was up! Upload! Upload!

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 13   Posted: Dec 15 2005, 09:28 PM
Still not working right? eek...

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 15 2005, 09:19 PM
Technical problems with Cog\'s fight....awaiting re-submisson

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 14 2005, 12:12 AM
HOLY SHIT! THAT CAME CLOSER THAN HELL! I didn\'t manage to colour everything, most of everything, but not everything (Note to self: Never take a two week challenge again, three week minimums!) Ah man though, I was afraid I\'d miss the deadline by minutes!

Oh and Jake, my sincerest apologies for what I end up having done to Borris, no is pretty.


XD And while that battle was close to finishing, that was only for the inking of the pages on very bleedy paper, but in good news the originals showed up again! Someone had hidden them in a couch attached to a cieling...Very strange. At any rate I\'ll be working on it when I\'m not grinding myself to get these things done.

Happy birthday to me!

cuffs
5 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 13 2005, 06:00 PM
May the best fighter win

Monday
Artist
936 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 13 2005, 05:02 PM
Well, I assumed you were mostly done with the first battle after having lost the first \"copy\". I didn\'t know you were that behind.

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 13 2005, 02:08 PM
Hey woah woah calm down Pio! I need to finish a 15 page full colour fight and a 16 page full colour Beyond in two weeks? You be crazy!

Just have a few more last minute touches before I upload, going to be skin of the teeth methinks. Can\'t wait to see yours Jake! (I almost typed that in pirate, I need to stop working on this comic XD)

Monday
Artist
936 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 11 2005, 04:31 PM
Where the hell is that BB you promised dammit XO

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 10 2005, 10:07 PM
Uploaded and ready to go!

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 5 2005, 03:14 PM
Heh heh, just remember: You can\'t spell Assassin without Ass Ass! >=P

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 5 2005, 01:16 PM
Set sail for an asskicking! All aboard my foot setting a course for your ass!

Good luck mate, don\'t disappoint! (Oh I am really one to talk. XD)

Toxic Toothpick
132 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 4 2005, 05:12 PM
>:o Lets play a game of pirates and assasins.....(BANG! Lol Cog)....
This will be interesting indeed....

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 30 2005, 08:01 AM
I was hopin\' you\'d accept Jacky Boy (please forgive the Maximillion Pegasus nickname). This will be a fun match!  

Monday
Artist
936 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 29 2005, 10:18 PM
HAH HAhahah . . HAHAHAHAHAH . HAH.

good luck you two. dont mind the reflective moment I just had involving pirates and assassins.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Dec 26th, 2005
Votes Cast: 32
Page Views: 787
Winner: Jack
 

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