Daelearian Ewlyara vs. Fushigi

Daelearian Ewlyara vs. Fushigi

Daelearian Ewlyara vs. Fushigi

Icon for Daelearian Ewlyara41.1%
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by Kii

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Kaelin
Artist
78 comments
# 24   Posted: Sep 26 2005, 12:04 AM
What the fudge? o.o Ack, sorry. That last comment was supposed to be posted on the battle between Mikal and myself.. for some reason it popped up here.

Kaelin
Artist
78 comments
# 23   Posted: Sep 26 2005, 12:02 AM
Huzzah! xD Mikal.. I hate you so much (For that LAST PAGE!). Kidding, I love your half sooo much. You did great.

I tried not to slack off on mine, the dialogue and some of the art came out pretty shabby, which teaches me a very good lesson. (Next time, I need to actually script.)

Izzy
Artist
37 comments
# 22   Posted: Sep 24 2005, 03:07 AM
Dae - everyone already pointed out some faults , all i can say is that it wouldnt hurt to to use ruler on those panels, and some space in between them too. but the fight was readable , so all you need to do is rought out the edges.

Fu - that was a very interesthing... REAlly interestihng fight..if you know what i mean. the only bad thing about it is that i didnt get to see page 4 XD. hey i wonder if you would like to do a little cat fight with Aixa eh?



Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 21   Posted: Sep 23 2005, 04:29 AM
You know I completely forgot about the rain in the last pannel and it made me sad ;-;

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 20   Posted: Sep 22 2005, 07:14 PM
dael\'s fight: quality poop  :<  and i have many right to left mangas, so reading it was no problem (some parts did confuse me, though). i don\'t relaly know what all to say about your fight. seemed kinda lazy and rushed?  (i don\'t feel like reading and earlier comments to find out....i am lazy too)  83  but something kept me reading to the end, so at least i didn\'t get bored. i wanna see better from you tho  :<   your character is hot.

fushi\'s fight: okay it was completely kick ass, cept for two things that bug me.....SO SHORT  D:  whaaa........i thought there was gunna be more to it, but it cut off so suddenly  ;~;
second thing:  no rain and they\'re all dry on the last page. that just kinda ticked me a little, but the picture was very nice  ^^;

dael, take more time on your fights!
fushi, do more pages  XD;

kidscribbles
Artist
174 comments
# 19   Posted: Sep 21 2005, 08:02 PM
Wow Fushigi, i love u\'re style it looks so real. Both battles are wonderful but my vote goes to Fushigi. U guys are good keep it up!

Wyvern
Artist
179 comments
# 18   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 11:20 AM
Well alllllllllllriiiiiiiight.

Dae: What\'s up with the Japanese-ness?  ...I didn\'t realize Fush was supposed to be Japanese (despite her name).  ANYWAY, the panelling going the manga way was fine, in theory, but I think you need to work on your panelling for continuity.  Sometimes I honestly wasn\'t sure where to go next.  I think you\'ve made HUGE improvements in your fighting, I was very impressed by how far you\'ve come, and I hope that the more you practice the tighter your lines will get.  Good job girl, you\'re doin\' fine.  ^^

Fush - loved your colouring, I could see some improvement in your anatomy and perspective as well, and there was a genuine smexy tone to the comic.  It was kinda boring fight-wise though, an odd choice of story-line I think, I would\'ve liked to see the actual fight.  I know how hard it is to apply that kind of colouring and effort to fight sequences, but man, if you ever did, WATCH OUT!!

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 17   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 09:45 AM
Dae: it\'s hard for me to comment since you state that this was rushed....but you need to work on your underlying structure....I would suggest doing some gesture sketches and looking at the old balls and sticks method of drawing the figure...this should help with your proportion and other anatomical problems

Fushigi: your colours are coming along just loverly.....but they aren\'t enough to mask that you also have a lot of anatomy issues as well...you should consider the same advice and wrok on your reallife studies

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 16   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 04:27 AM
Well I never ment for this to be rushed, but by the time I got to the second page, I just couldn\'t get myself to finish it within the two weeks it took to color it.  I really wanted it to be longer, but of course, my luck, it wasnt ;_;  The last picture on the second page?  It fucking SUCKS! Sorry ; ; *whine*  And mum?  Your so mean ;____; lol *clings* Double jointed freak. *sniff* xD  But yah, you\'re slowly improving <3

QtRNevermore
Artist
286 comments
# 15   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 04:10 AM
...welll i think if Fush had gone any futher this may have gotten an X rating.

Honestly i think Dae your improving, bit by bit, just keep practcing...
The one thing you master though is facial expressions, even if your still in progress with other things, keep it up.  The last panel kinda lost me in text however...not sure you needed it.

Majikura
Artist
469 comments
# 14   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 01:03 AM
Dae: I found the Japanese-style paneling a little unessicary, the whole right to left thing is cool an all but the paneling itself is hard to follow sometimes.  Basically, the panels were arranged in a way where the eye is lead to the next panel to the left, but instead was supposed to be  lead to the next panel below.  Page 3 was especially confusing, because the panels were disaligned to the point where it could have been one page split in two. Might I also suggest using a ruler, it just makes everything more organized.

Fushigi: Putting aside the \"omglesbians\" comments, I thought your comic came to an abrupt end a little too quickly...but that\'s just my own personal preferences.  My only real complaint would be the inconsistant borders throught the entire thing.  You had it nice and clean with the first panel with the thick black edge in page one, but then in page 2 you had these purple borders that were waaay thick.  Just stick to one color or something.

(Pi)
Artist
475 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 12:37 AM
um... oh wow.... jeepers, need to put the kids to bed for this one.... @.@

uh, anyways, Typo, you had a really lackluster fight. Some of the angles were pretty good, especially the last panel on page three, but I feel like they really could have bee executed better. The humor wasn\'t so great, don\'t quit your day job. Also, it looks like you should be hitting the anatomy books a bit more. Sorry, it just wasn\'t so good to me.

Fushigi, nice fight, good looking colors as usual. It looks like you rushed this fight just a bit though. The art didn\'t look as tight as it usually does, and I could still read where you penciled in the speech bubbles before you colored over them. The last panel on page two looks really awkward. Dae\'s head seems too large and her right leg seems placed too far back relative to the viewer. Your coloring prowess really brings out flaws in figure and positioning when they\'re present, but it was still a very solid fight.

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 20 2005, 12:32 AM
LoL i love it, women offering help to other women while feeling one another....sniff sniff...this is the true meaning of void

lol

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 19 2005, 07:43 PM
Hell with P2\'s fantasy! LOL ^___^ its MINE! *rapes last page and pilliages too, because It\'s pirate day today in her town*

o_o teh sex gurl, awesome!

QtRNevermore
Artist
286 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 19 2005, 07:35 PM
Is it just me or did Fush bring p2\'s fantasy to life.
x_x  

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 19 2005, 04:07 AM
HA i jinxed myself, I DID end up puking on my battle -_- hence the little patching up here and there...
Blah
Not the way i wanted to turn it out, but hell if i default! I\'ll turn in what i have before I\'d do that!
Sorry for lack of BG -_- but i\'m through and done, i\'ve got several other doctors to go visit before i can even start my day half the time LOL so NO BG FO\' J00

P.S.
x_x Fush i really do lub ya, i didn\'t mean to like..  have such a violent fight well .. not violent.. just mean i guess.

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 18 2005, 06:28 AM
Pressure is one of my many middle names to which i add the phrase \"_____insert word___ is my middle name.\"
=P I\'ll puke on my battle for colour LOL

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 17 2005, 09:38 AM
The pressure is on!  Can ya handle it, mum? <3

enjeru
10 comments
# 6   Posted: Sep 1 2005, 06:53 PM
Good luck to the both of you!

Fushi: Give \'em hell, sis!

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 28 2005, 04:23 AM
Because you\'re never on to tell, Luni! <3

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 26 2005, 05:22 PM
HEY! you didn\'t tell me you were battling, Fushi!

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 23 2005, 04:24 AM
Fushigi: ^_^ *much cuddles for her hon* yay!!

Rikun: =P You\'re next so keep your eyes mwahaha! lol im a geek.

Rikun
Artist
99 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 23 2005, 01:34 AM
Alright!  May the best girl win!  And Dae, I\'ll be keeping a special eye on you.

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 22 2005, 06:47 PM
Yay ~ *squeals*  Good luck, momeeh! <3  Much luv!


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